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The Pace of Change by Kai starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 66]
At sixteen you're supposed to worry about your favorite Quidditch team making it to the finals, not a baby. Harry Potter learns countless lessons from his Professors-about life, love, and adapting to change.

In response to the Fix This challenge posted by Nightshade Sydneylover150

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Aug 2014 / 27 Jun 2012
Series: None - Challenges: Fix This
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 09 Aug 2014
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    So happy to see an update to this! I've been waiting for years! Yay! I would love to see Harry working with a mind healer and maybe getting sick from that and not complaining, and the mind healer telling Snape about all the things the Dursley's have done. And would like to see the portrait of Slytherin telling the Professors about Harry and how studious he is, and how down he seems to be. I hope Ginny will be spending the summer there with him and I look forward to that interaction. I would also like to see Harry's boss telling Snape how hard of a worker Harry is. When Ginny gets there to do work it would be cool to see them maybe walking around Hogsmeade together and getting lunch or an ice cream or something. My only constructive piece of advice is this: pregnant women work all the time... they don't really take it 'easy' at work unless there is a complication with the pregnancy and at that point bed rest is ordered for the rest of the pregnancy. I worked hard while I was prengant and I've known so many women to work hard at their normal duties while pregnant until about a month before the baby is due... being pregnant isn't that bad... the nausea and increased sense of smell is bad in the first few months, but not bad enough to 'hardly be able to get out of bed most days'. For the most part it's normal day to day as usual aside from not jumping, not doing super heavy lifting, and avoiding certain foods and having regular doctor's checkups about 1x a month until the baby is closer to being due, then it's about 2x a month checkups. Great job as always!

    Author's Response: The issue is, and I touched on this in chapter 2 or 3 I believe, many people in the wizarding world have a sort of Victorian way of seeing things. While today we have plenty of rights to still work full time in the workplace, as it would be expected, even as early as the 1950s this was frowned upon. 1990s Wizarding World thinking would be very much the same. You'll see though that Ginny will fight the teachers holding her back tooth and nail, as I believe she would in the HP books. She'll step up and show that Harry shouldn't be punished for something they both did, and while it isn't the ideal situation, she wants to help him. 

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 09 Aug 2014
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    And to add to my previous review, I would like to see the professors realizing that Harry is responsible and trustworthy and relax his schedule a little, and also to allow him and Ginny free time to be alone out on the grounds or in Hogsmeade without an escort. It would be good if they could walk to and from work together without Snape. She's already pregnant... it's not like letting them be alone for a little while is going to invite her to get pregnant again...

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 08 Jul 2012
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Poor Harry. Do you know there's another challenge that this story fits?

    Great so far! You're a great writer!

    Author's Response: What other challenge does it fit? :o

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 08 Jul 2012
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    This is an awesome story! I feel so bad for him though! When will you update? I need an update!!!!

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 21 Jul 2012
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Noooooooooooo! Four extra visitors? Who are these people? I have no idea!! My head is going to explode!!!!

    Is it the Weasleys? Is it the Dursleys? Someone who Harry would curse about seeing... not sure who it could be? AHHHHHHH!

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 26 Aug 2012
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Will Ginny be staying over the summer too?

Reflection by Lillielle starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
Slightly A/U. Written for Second Person challenge. Harry has a secret, and Snape finds out.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Self-harm
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Jan 2013 / 20 Jan 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Second Person
Title: Chapter 1: Reflection 05 Oct 2013
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Wow, a very powerful story, and I think putting it in this tense, saying 'you' rather than 'he' makes the reader feel more of what Harry is feeling. You've done a wonderful job and you have a way with words. Not that I approve of cutting, but I'm just saying that you really put people in Harry's shoes here.

A New Life... Maybe? by reddragon7 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 51]
Harry is back at Privet Drive after his first year at Hogwarts.
His Aunt and Uncle have beaten and starved him since his return.
His cousin, Dudley takes matters into his own hands.

Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 May 2013 / 26 Feb 2013
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 06 Apr 2013
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    There's a lot of grammar and punctuation issues that make the story not enjoyable to read.

Uncle Sev by darkorangecat starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 16]
In an alternative universe, Harry and his parents survive Voldemort's attack, Dumbledore disappears, and Severus Snape is sentenced to serve ten years in Azkaban. A new wizarding law, due to the prison's overpopulation, allows for prisoners of lesser crimes to be sent to live with wizarding families, and serve the remainder of their sentences as slaves, under house arrest. Lily petitions to have Snape come live with them after he's served almost a full year in Azkaban. This story starts three years into Severus' house arrest.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Reverse Roles > Master Harry, Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Misc > Keepers of the Snitch
Rated: T - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Apr 2013 / 06 Apr 2013
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 06 Apr 2013
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    This makes me want to see more of the story of Harry's time there at Hogwarts.

    Author's Response: That would be a lot to tackle, and would definitely take more than one sitting for me to write. Perhaps I shall make an attempt one of these days. Thank you so much for reading. :-)

A Ghostly Boy by lastcrazyhorn starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 42]
Severus rescues Harry from the Dursleys, but it is too late.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Apr 2013 / 15 Apr 2013
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Boy 15 Apr 2013
Reviewer: JAWorley (Signed)
    Interesting and sad! Haven't seen this take on it before. Nicely done!

    Author's Response: Thank you.  Very sad.  Made me cry too. 


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