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| Member since: 10 Aug 2008
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| I'm Polish, female, age 32. My English is not very good, so I write fanfiction only in my mother language, although I read also in English and even translate from English to Polish. Maybe one day I'll write something in English, but now it's too early I think. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 - Silly I
| 23 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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YES! The great come back! And I was afraid that this fanfiction won't be continued...
Wonderful Severus history. I think Sylvia was killed by her father, wasn'e she? Tragic.
Spanking. Ah, yes, I like it IN THIS FANFICTION. Cause here it is WITH reason. And Harry knows that if he would do something dangerous he would have sore bottom. It's simply like that. Spanking of this kind I can understand. Especially when there is love between parent and child - I here it is. Ovelhelming love which I can easy feel. So... you have my attention.
I think I've spotted one mistake: "Satisfied, Snape used his WANT to summon an old photo album" - shouldn't be "WAND"?
Snape tortures Harry. Complete.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Misc
Rated: T
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Warnings: Torture, Violence
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 16 Oct 2006 / 16 Oct 2006
Series: None
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Challenges: Torture
Title: Chapter 1: Gratitude
| 10 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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It's one of the best short stories I've ever read. I like narration - the first person, the present time - I like content, I like Severus of yours. And Harry, who is really cunning and smart and strangely understanding. Yes, of course, I'd love if there would be more chapters, but this way this story is so special, I think. Because the only thing I can do right now is thinking, what Severus will do with his knowledge, how it will end. It's really fascinating. Bil, you have my true... gratitude ;-).
Albus Dumbledore had a plan.
Takes Place: 5th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Misc
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 24 Oct 2006 / 24 Oct 2006
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Plan
| 14 May 2009
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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That's really good. Short but good. It shows that a road to hell is paved with good intentions (if I correctly remember English version ;-)). Yes, good intentions and good plans are not enough. You need to execute them if this have worked. I'm impressed.
AU ending for PS. Character Death. What if Dumbledore hadn’t been the first teacher to realise something was wrong?
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Misc
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 12 Jan 2007 / 12 Jan 2007
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Green For Mourning
| 10 Aug 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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I'm crying. Merlin, I haven't cried for such a long time. But I'm crying now. Something is definitely wrong. Thanks for my tears. It's almost mortifying, the old witch crying. But I can't stop. So... thank you. If one day I will need to cry, I know where to go.
After the Dobby incident at the beginning of the second book, Harry runs away, and Snape kidnaps him. In an old-fashioned house with no comforts and a huge black dog, Harry finds himself at Snape's mercy as Snape plays mind games and makes Harry live through different scenarios. Though Snape seems crazy and psychotic, Harry begins to see reasons behind Snape's sporadic behavior. There is corporal punishment, but it is different from what I've written before. This is a Mean!Snape story for the most part. If you're looking for a cuddly story, go elsewhere please.
Takes Place: 2nd summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean
Tags: Kidnapped, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Planting
| 19 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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One of the most fascinating stories I've ever read. I only regret that next chapters are oh so rarely.
All the time I'm wandering - IS Severus Harry's father or is it really only a kind of sick game? I think he is. I'm impatiently waiting, when Harry will be told.
I hope next chapter will be really soon.
Harry receives a very special gift on his 16th birthday that leads him to the help he needs...Snape is finding respite from his growing pressures and discovers one in need of help. Despite himself, he finds he CAN grow close to another living being. Only..."everything would've been so much simpler if it'd actually been a cat"...
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Creature!fic, Kidnapped, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16- A Matter of Trust
| 15 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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Stupid Severus. Although I can't say I don't understand him. It's frightning when someone trust you, it's terrifying when someone depends on you. Yup, I surely can understand him. And I'm waiting for his reaction when - if? - he sees what happend because of his fright.
I like this story very much, Shadow is sweet, so is Harry sometimes. I'm waiting for more really impatiently. You're right: bad, bad cliffie...
Author's Response: Well, why stupid ? he was trying to do his best, and so was Dumbledore. Everybody here is doing his best, especially Malfoy ! Hum, ok, stupid Snape, right !but I put the blame on Dumbledore, he has been messing everything a lot lately. Now, there are bad times ahead, an awful lot of bad times... but I trust Severus to do his best ;-)
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17- Three Times a Heartbreak
| 21 Nov 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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Ha! I told you - Severus was stupid. In the last chapter, of course. Here he is wiser. What a pity it's a little too late... Wonderful chapter, really. I'm trembling right now. And Credulo is a great idea. What an effect on mind... Yup, one of the best fanfictions certainly. As always I'm waiting for more.
Author's Response: oh yes he is payig for his stupidity now ! And it's his potion that helped torture and confuse Harry... 50 points from Slytherin, M. Snape !
Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: The Best Birthday Ever
| 21 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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Wow. I've almost cried at the end. Sweet, really. Does it mean that Severus' parenthood will be secret no more? Finally.
Author's Response: For the select few in that room, Severus' paternity will no longer be a secret. But their discretion has to be gaurenteed because Sev is still a spy. Sev could no longer deny Harry's entreaties to tell the Weasleys about their situation. Glad you enjoyed the chapter. Thank you for your review. ~lesleY~
Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32
| 26 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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What?! Harry forgot to write a note for Severus?! Oh Harry... Severus will be terrified when he will be back and Harry will not be there, I think. I really wonder what Severus will do then.
OK, this chapter is really interesting. We know more about Severus' family - I've always wondered why Eilleen married Tobias. I thought maybe she was really in love... That happens. But your version is also likely.
And I like that Harry finally told Severus about Dursley's. It's high time.
So... I'me waiting for more. As always ;-).
Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, Severus will be worried and sometimes worry can come out as anger...ask any parent. I'm glad you like Severus' background so far. There may well be more to Eileen and Tobias than Severus understood, too, but that won't come out until much later, probably the sequel. And yes, it probably was time for Harry to talk about the Dursleys. Perhaps having the adoption papers and a real dad helped him a bit with that.
Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Crash
| 25 Oct 2008
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Reviewer: Nakago (Signed)
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Great! Funny at the begining than serious talk which I was waiting for and another child play. Really great.
I love this fanfiction and the previous one. Severus is here so... caring. And so unsure. So is Harry. It's really fantastic.
Author's Response: Thanks! And thanks for reviewing. :o)
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