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Slytherin!
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Sequel to "Harry's First Detention" - read that first, please!
Takes Place: 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by wellyuthink
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 02 Jan 2009 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- Wonderful, awesome, I adore this story! I love how Snape always misunderstands Harry, and all the information you've got going on in the background joins together seamlessly - please write more soon!
Author's Response: Thank you - I really appreciate your comments that it's all blending together well. Sometimes I have to reread to remind myself what I wrote and what only happened in my head! ;)
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 04 Feb 2009 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- Oh wow, Severus logical arguement against Lucius was not only absolutely brilliant, but it was also wonderfully portrayed. I still can't believe how absolutely hooked I am on this story, thank you so much for updating! Dumbledore's statement “I find that a brisk debate is an excellent way to start the morning" made me laugh out loud - that blase attitude towards serious matters is always what I love reading most about Dumbles, so amusing too! Keep writing :)
Author's Response: I'm delighted to hear that you found the argument compelling. I always thought that a Slytherin would be the best one to take down a Dark Lord, and now that Snape's on the job, he's not wasting any time!! :) Thanks for letting me know you're enjoying the story and dialogue. :)
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 28 Sep 2008 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- I loved this, especially the last paragraph! A brilliant follow-up to the previous story, I do hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks!
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 28 Sep 2008 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- I loved this, especially the last paragraph! A brilliant follow-up to the previous story, I do hope you update soon!
Author's Response: Thank you! I apologize for the delay in updating. I will do so more frequently from now on. :)
| Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 | 11 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- This chapter was wonderful - thank you so much for sharing. The bit where Harry said Snape had given him a Dad made me tear up a little; beautifully written. Heh - Snape really doesn't know what he's in for, but good for Harry!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! So glad you enjoyed it - yes, I know what you mean about that line. I was worried it might be a little TOO treacly, but I think it worked in the end. Glad to hear you thought so too. :)
| Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 | 11 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- Hilarious! It's always great to read about Snape shocking the rest of Hogwarts. Another sweet chapter, well done!
Author's Response: I think he's really beginning to enjoy causing those shocks... ;)
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 18 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- Super! I love the way Sev found out about Sirius, and your comment about idiocy being a criminal offence made me crack up. This story has a different tale every chapter and what's best - it all fits in! Please write more soon, this is a fabulous story and I'm looking forward to Harry's meeting with his godfather and Snape's reactions.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story! Thanks for letting me know. I'll do my best to ensure it all continues to fit together. :)
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 19 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- Oh no! I hope Harry can get away somehow, those boys are making my spine creep. Or maybe he can use some of his new magic on them... well, I don't know what they want so it's hard to judge.
Good idea about the private tutoring, and I like how you've described it and the impact it has on Harry. Most authors who put Harry in for extra tutroing only give one liners as how it's affected Harry. I'm glad you haven't! Please write more soon! You have me worried now...
Author's Response: Thank you! I will update very soon - you have good instincts re those boys!
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 21 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- Go Jones for an effective way to shut him up! Amazing free-for-all and very exciting, it's fantastic how all the Slytherins came to Harry's rescue, I've always that house to be able to save the day believably and you pulled it off! Bravo - I hope you write more soon.
Author's Response: Thank you!! Wow - so good to hear that the fight scene worked. WHEW!!!! ;)
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 24 Dec 2008 |
| Reviewer: wellyuthink (Signed) |
- “Minerva,” Severus frowned, studying the students. “Does it appear to you that many of the students are regarding your Miss Granger with a sort of fascinated terror?”
Classic! I would pay to hear Snape say that! Wonderful chapter - I like how you made Percy blow up and the whole 'dentists' thing was inspired. Please write more soon!
Author's Response: LOL! Glad you enjoyed that. :) I suspect that I'd be on the hit list of dental societies if ever they read this chapter, but I'm glad you liked it.