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A new year means new perils and friendships for Harry, as he faces the Triwizard Tournament, a vengeful Dark Lord's return, and must try and master the secrets of Prince Manor. Can his family and friends help him succeed? Sequel to Heir to Prince Manor!

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Vampires
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 79 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 16 Dec 2011 / 20 May 2009
Series: Prince Manor - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 18: It's All Greek To Me 29 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Your Krum really IS a jerk, Isn't he?

    WEll written chapter! I think I like the new challenge, although I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop--it really seems to "safe" a challenge, what's the catch?

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Oh yes, no doubt about that one!

    Well, it will require a lot of research and the riddle they have to solve is quite hard and none of them have the same one. And there is one other thing that will happen.


Title: Chapter 24: A Power Beyond Magic 16 Jan 2010
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Definately worth the wait! I loved your "retrieve what you love" task! Much better than the original--and no teptation to resuce someone else to boot.

    Great job!
    V.

Title: Chapter 25: Warnings 15 Feb 2010
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Poor Draco. . . the pains of young love!

    I loved the chapter.

    V.

Title: Chapter 31: Call to Arms 15 May 2010
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Please let her live. I can't tell you how much I hated the blood bath at the end of DH and I Love every author who has been able to come up with alternate means of ending the story without all of that death.

    I loved this chapter.

    V.

Title: Chapter 35: Come Sail Away 14 Jun 2010
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Excellent chapter! And once again you leave us hanging on that dreaded cliff. . .

    looking forward to your next update!

    V.

Title: Chapter 43: Fairy Revel 17 Aug 2010
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Hmm. . .maybe Titania wants to foster Nesmay with Sev and Sarai--possibly train her to be one of the Blades? A "long term" replacement for Sarai maybe?

    I loved this chapter--and Nesmay is a peach!

    V.

Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Foreboding 23 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I knew I'd enjoy the fact that Hedwig was along on this quest. She can be nearly as snide as Sev--just a bit softer edge to it, but just as effective.

    That dream was a bit on the creapy side--Was it real or not? I could see it going either way--since our boy was so tired he was practially sleeping while eating dinner-let alone thinking clearly when he went to "bed".

    I'm glad to see this started--and it is a great start.

    V.

    Author's Response:

    Can she ever!

    Well, you'll find out about that later.  That's true, sometimes when we;re tired and on edge we dream weird things. Or it could be a premonition.

    Thanks and hope you like the next part.


Title: Chapter 2: Restless Spirits and Retribution 26 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Ghosts? Hmm, interesting twist--especially with those attitudes (Now we know where old tommy boy gets it from--he came by it "honestly" as the saying goes--elder tom is just as nasty, in his own muggle way.)

    Great chapter!
    V.

    Author's Response: Yes, he did, although it doesn't excuse his actions.  I figured they'd still be around, after all murder is one way to ensure a restless spirit coming back.  Glad you liked it and hope you like the next chapter!

Title: Chapter 3: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum 30 May 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Ooo! Fire! Hell-hound! A coded book! My you have had a creative bit of inspiration haven't you! I really enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for "what's next?" Should I have a bad feeling about them sleeping in the Gaunt place?

    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted them to have to really work to find where the Horcruxes were that they didn;t know about and to have to fight to get to some of them.  No . . .the place isn't haunted, just old and smelly.  And boring!

Title: Chapter 9: A Wicked Gathering 25 Jun 2009
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Marvelous set of chapters! I liked how Sev handeled a sick Harry--and how Hedwig handled a scared and impertanent Harry.

    As for you "bad guys" Well done.

    Looking forward to your next update.
    V.

    Author's Response:

    Thanks, I'm happy you enjoyed poor sick Harry and Sev taking care of him.  I love a quiet and healer-like Snape. 

    That Hedwig, she doesn't take anything from anyone!  I just love her.

    The next update has been posted.



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