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Title: Chapter 18: It's All Greek To Me
| 29 Sep 2009
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Your Krum really IS a jerk, Isn't he?
WEll written chapter! I think I like the new challenge, although I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop--it really seems to "safe" a challenge, what's the catch?
V.
Author's Response: Oh yes, no doubt about that one! Well, it will require a lot of research and the riddle they have to solve is quite hard and none of them have the same one. And there is one other thing that will happen.
Title: Chapter 24: A Power Beyond Magic
| 16 Jan 2010
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Definately worth the wait! I loved your "retrieve what you love" task! Much better than the original--and no teptation to resuce someone else to boot.
Great job! V.
Title: Chapter 25: Warnings
| 15 Feb 2010
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Poor Draco. . . the pains of young love!
I loved the chapter.
V.
Title: Chapter 31: Call to Arms
| 15 May 2010
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Please let her live. I can't tell you how much I hated the blood bath at the end of DH and I Love every author who has been able to come up with alternate means of ending the story without all of that death.
I loved this chapter.
V.
Title: Chapter 35: Come Sail Away
| 14 Jun 2010
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Excellent chapter! And once again you leave us hanging on that dreaded cliff. . .
looking forward to your next update!
V.
Title: Chapter 43: Fairy Revel
| 17 Aug 2010
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Hmm. . .maybe Titania wants to foster Nesmay with Sev and Sarai--possibly train her to be one of the Blades? A "long term" replacement for Sarai maybe?
I loved this chapter--and Nesmay is a peach!
V.
Title: Chapter 1: Foreboding
| 23 May 2009
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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I knew I'd enjoy the fact that Hedwig was along on this quest. She can be nearly as snide as Sev--just a bit softer edge to it, but just as effective.
That dream was a bit on the creapy side--Was it real or not? I could see it going either way--since our boy was so tired he was practially sleeping while eating dinner-let alone thinking clearly when he went to "bed".
I'm glad to see this started--and it is a great start.
V.
Author's Response: Can she ever! Well, you'll find out about that later. That's true, sometimes when we;re tired and on edge we dream weird things. Or it could be a premonition. Thanks and hope you like the next part.
Title: Chapter 2: Restless Spirits and Retribution
| 26 May 2009
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Ghosts? Hmm, interesting twist--especially with those attitudes (Now we know where old tommy boy gets it from--he came by it "honestly" as the saying goes--elder tom is just as nasty, in his own muggle way.)
Great chapter! V.
Author's Response: Yes, he did, although it doesn't excuse his actions. I figured they'd still be around, after all murder is one way to ensure a restless spirit coming back. Glad you liked it and hope you like the next chapter!
Title: Chapter 3: A Riddle Wrapped In A Conundrum
| 30 May 2009
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Ooo! Fire! Hell-hound! A coded book! My you have had a creative bit of inspiration haven't you! I really enjoyed this chapter! Can't wait for "what's next?" Should I have a bad feeling about them sleeping in the Gaunt place?
V.
Author's Response: Thanks, I wanted them to have to really work to find where the Horcruxes were that they didn;t know about and to have to fight to get to some of them. No . . .the place isn't haunted, just old and smelly. And boring!
Title: Chapter 9: A Wicked Gathering
| 25 Jun 2009
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Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
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Marvelous set of chapters! I liked how Sev handeled a sick Harry--and how Hedwig handled a scared and impertanent Harry.
As for you "bad guys" Well done.
Looking forward to your next update. V.
Author's Response: Thanks, I'm happy you enjoyed poor sick Harry and Sev taking care of him. I love a quiet and healer-like Snape. That Hedwig, she doesn't take anything from anyone! I just love her. The next update has been posted.
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