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Stormcaller by Snapegirl starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 193]
Everyone thought Harry's scar came from Voldemort. But they were wrong. The scar was the sign of a rare & terrible gift, the power to call monstrous storms. A power that could save or destroy Harry unless he learns to harness it. Can Snape & Lily help him master his terrible gift? Or will he self-destruct . . .and take the world with him?

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het
Chapters: 27 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jan 2013 / 09 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 6: A Fresh Start 07 Jul 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    great chapter!
    Thanks for posting.
    V.

Lost Treasures by slytherensangel26 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 104]
Severus Snape thought he had it all.

And then tragedy struck. His wife was dead, two of his son were dead and one was missing.

What he doesn't know is that two of them are alive. What happens when the two sons reunite?
Response to Surviving Sons Challenge

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Creature!fic, Kidnapped, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Vampires
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Sep 2011 / 19 Mar 2011
Series: Lost Treasures - Challenges: The Surviving Sons
Title: Chapter 1: Grieving Hearts 20 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I'm facinated--if a bit confused. It sounds like only 1 boy survivied, but you speak of 2. . .

    Looking forward to more so I can figure it all out1

    V.

    Author's Response:

    I apoligize if i wasn't clear enough. there were three sons. one was switched at birth with the potter's still born. one was killd in the housefire that destoryed the snape's ancestral home, and the other was kidnapped by bellatrix and left in france.


Title: Chapter 5: Retribution 28 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Wonderful, and quite just-as I see it.

    Thanks for the update.
    V.

Title: Chapter 6: Beginning To Live Again 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I liked the bats--sometimes steriotypes can be fun! And I liked the fact that She was able to come and speak to all 3 of her "boys" (not just the kids!)

    Thanks for the update--I look forward to "what's next".

    V

Title: Chapter 7: Settling In 08 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    OOOOOH! Where is Molly with a good Howler? (Or better yet a cast iron skillet to whack Siri on the side of his head!) That boy had best cool his jets before he causes so much damage that he won't be able to fix anything once he realizes that he still cares for the little boy he was made God-father of. Its probably a good thing that he isn't at Hogwarts and "Harry" isn't at #12 or there would be a permanent rift there (and probably a smoldering whole in the ground were Siri once stood once Sev and Ambrosias finshed with him for hurting Aubrey)

    Thanks for the update.

    V.

Title: Chapter 9: Draco's Defection 23 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Two "less psychosto worry about"-LM was one sick dude!

    I enjoyed the chapter.

    Thanks for the update.
    V.

Title: Chapter 10: Midnight Conversations 09 Jun 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    How did I miss this post? I saw your comment in the Shout box and came and took a look. As usualy you have composed a wonderful chapter. Much of the "adults" in this one but it was very deep. Sev even saved poor Winki from herself--Harry's saving people "thing" may just come from him! ;-)

    Thanks for the update.
    V.

    Author's Response: thanks you so much! i really appreicate you reading my story!

My Secret Father by JAWorley starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 270]
For four years Harry Severus Potter has gone to school in the shadow of his secret father… the one everybody whispers behind his back about. For four years, said father has ignored him, and encouraged his second son Kenai to taunt, pick on, and bully Harry. They all look alike, but none are so much the same… or are they more alike than they think? Harry is finding unlikely allies and friends in all the wrong places.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Kidnapped, Kidnapped!Harry, Runaway, Sibling Addition
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Apr 2013 / 28 Mar 2011
Series: JAWorley's Challenges, My Secret Father - Challenges: Real Brother, Life Sentence
Title: Chapter 1: P.S. I Hate You 28 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I like the story concept. And, It is very engaging. Just want to cry with poor Harry. I haven't seen one quite like this before, so I'm looking forward to "where it leads".

    Thanks for posting
    V.

Title: Chapter 6: A Man In Need 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    I really liked both chapter 5 and 6--even though I just wanted to strangle Sev for that "detention" coment. Still want to shake him a bit to be completely truthful. I hope that the "link" between them can be useful in finding the boy.

    Nice work showing survival skills in the snow-BTW.

    Thanks for both updates.
    V.

Title: Chapter 8: Only Human 10 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Good Chapter. I've always thought that to many storys had Harry and Sev forgive and forget far to quickly. I really don't think Harry is the type to hold a long term grudge, but Hurts like this don't heal over-night.

    You are doing a marvelous job of showing how each of the three Snapes are feeling and how it comes through in their behavior.

    As for what I would like to see. . . somehow it would seem right if K.S. and H.S. called some sort of truce before either really "made up" with their father. But, your story is so wonderful, I'm just looking forward to where you go next.

    Thanks for the update.
    V.


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