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My Secret Father by JAWorley starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 270]
For four years Harry Severus Potter has gone to school in the shadow of his secret father… the one everybody whispers behind his back about. For four years, said father has ignored him, and encouraged his second son Kenai to taunt, pick on, and bully Harry. They all look alike, but none are so much the same… or are they more alike than they think? Harry is finding unlikely allies and friends in all the wrong places.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape's a Bully, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry, Injured!Snape, Kidnapped, Kidnapped!Harry, Runaway, Sibling Addition
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 17 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Apr 2013 / 28 Mar 2011
Series: JAWorley's Challenges, My Secret Father - Challenges: Real Brother, Life Sentence
Title: Chapter 9: Just A Brother 14 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Well, if they BOTH have detention, there is the chance that they BOTH will have to use the blood quill. Sev will be fit-to-be-tied when he finds out KS has had it used on him, and maybe will also be able to "help" HP as well, by piggy-backing the boy's help he might get a thawing of things between him and his oldest son (at least a slight thaw).

    Thanks for the update!
    V.

    Author's Response: Now there's an idea.  They got out of detention but maybe I'll have to find a way for them to be in detention to work out this scenario.  Thanks, I'll think about it!

Title: Chapter 17: The Journal 12 Dec 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Loved it! I would love more too! If not novel length, how about some one-shots? Sev's reaction to the journal? K and H antics (give sev some gray hair?) More Draco interactions. Ginny and Harry? Maybe the elves? So many choices you have left us with!

    Thanks for sharing your story with us.
    V.

Burnt by lastcrazyhorn starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 307]
A disabled Harry comes to Hogwarts story. Everyone expects him to be like his dad, but how can he be with such a different past? A Slytherin Harry takes on Hogwarts in an unusual way.

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 37 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Aug 2017 / 29 Mar 2011
Series: None - Challenges: More Than Meets the Eye, Hoarding Food
Title: Chapter 26: I Want Him Dead 06 Aug 2013
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Harry-Dragon. How Wonderful. So, I got a little lost in the "fight"--is the Dragon a natural accidental animagus transformation, or did Old Bumblebee do something to cause him to change into the Dragon (other than stoking the fire of Harry's ire)?

    Loved it!!
    V.

Title: Chapter 2: Results 31 Mar 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Oh, I think I'm really going to like your Severus! I like Teddy too. I'm looking forward to learning all of their "back stories" as well as seeing where you are taking us.

    Thanks for the update.
    v.

Title: Chapter 3: Revelations 01 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    :-)

    Loved it--especially the ending!

    Thanks for the update

    V.

Title: Chapter 4: The First Week 03 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Good! Someone else is looking out for Harry. I think I like this moody Moody!

    Thanks for the update.

    V.

Title: Chapter 7: Not Working 21 Apr 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Thaks for the update. I really enjoyed it.

    V.

Title: Chapter 9: Flying 10 May 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Nice adaptation of the "rememberall" incident. I love a protective Sev! :-)

    V.

    Author's Response: Thanks.  I mean, Harry might not like Draco, but still, Slytherins stick together and all that jazz.  :P  Besides, Ron is the one that needed a talking to anyway.  :)

Title: Chapter 13: Quidditch 04 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    Wow, Snape and Moody as allies for Harry! How wonderful. I really like your Moody.

    Thanks for the update.
    V.

Title: Chapter 14: Magical Exhaustion 09 Oct 2011
Reviewer: Mervoparkite (Signed)
    would someone either smack that old tabby or give harry a catnip pendant. MM is being completely unreasonable-worse than even cannon snape.

    Wonderful chapter! Thanks for the update.
    V


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