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Title: Chapter 21: Hagrid's Wisdom
| 23 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Yup. Definitely screaming. Cliffies = evil. EEEEVVVVIIIIILLLL. But chappie is good. :-) Really like how as soon as Snape stops being angry at Harry for betraying him, he starts getting angry for him not taking good care of himself. Much fun. :-)
Author's Response: yes, that's Severus all over. Now that he realizes the kid didn't betray him, he has to find something else to scold him about and Harry provided him with the perfect excuse . . .he's not taking care of himself. Thanks for reading and just wait till you see what happens next!
Title: Chapter 22: Through A Glass Darkly
| 24 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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YEY!! All is well with the world! Well...sorta. And now Sev gets to take a piece out of Umbridge. Woot. Much fun:-) I like how Snape is mad at Harry for not telling about the cuff the same way he was mad at Freedom about attacking Malfoy. It creates a nice link, and is also just nice evidence of Sev's concern for Harry. Much sweet fluffiness. :-)
Author's Response: It is . . .for now! Sev does care about Harry and will scold him if he feels it's necessary to get the kid to pay attention to his own health. And just wait till you read the next part!
Title: Chapter 23: The Toad At Bay
| 25 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Woot. Much wonderfulness. I LOVE how Harry set the birds after Umbrage, though it bothers me a bit that they killed her, for some reason. W/e. Funfunfunfunfunfunfun
Author's Response: Well, they didn;t set out to kill her--the Stymphalian Bird just appeared and it was a surprise to everyone there. Harry only wanted the owls to harass her, he never expected the monster bird to come and make a meal of her. But such is life.
Title: Chapter 24: Mentor
| 28 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Yey!! I really like the whole conversation about Harry's vision. It's nice to see some of Harry's insecurity, and how Sev deals with it.
Author's Response: Thanks, the vision wa simportant and even though he's used to handling things himself, Harry still has much insecurity to work through. Severus is, I think, handling it very well especially sinece he never had to do anything like this before.
Title: Chapter 25: Laying Old Ghosts To Rest
| 29 Apr 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Much goodness. Poor Harry. Soap is no fun. He kinda deserved it, though. He didn't even get punished for changing forms without permission, after all. Plus it all led to warm fuzzy goodness! I also really like the bit with Crabbe washing Fang. Really cute, and a good insight to how Crabbe is changing. :-)
Author's Response: No, it's not, and Severus couldn;t let him get away with it and then expect Harry to respect him if he did. And Sev DID let him off the fact that he shifted forms without permission, though I think making Harry talk about his dreams was a kind of punishment to him--at first. I loved Fang and Crabbe, it reminded me of the time I tried to wash my sister's bull terrier--soap and water everywhere, more on me than the dog! You'll see Crabbe change even more in future chapters.
Title: Chapter 27: An Unruly Potions Class
| 04 May 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Nice. I like your shy firstie. He's cute! I also like how Harry finally got everybody under control in the first class - considering what he was dealing with it really wasn't that badly done. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, Jace is sweet! You'll see a bit more of him next chapter. Harry does manage to rise to the occasion, that class was really wild. Like one that I used to have. It was like Troublemakers 101.
Title: Chapter 28: No Excuse
| 05 May 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Woot. Much goodness. Sirius is being such a git! It seems like him, though - he always was more than a bit childish. Poor Harry!
Author's Response: Yes, he was. He never really grew up in canon. Harry hopes Sirius will eventually understand, but it will take awhile.
Title: Chapter 30: Snaring Darkness
| 09 May 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Very cool battle. A bit long, but exciting. I really like the 'two hawks' thing. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you! It was a little long, but a lot had to happen during it. The prophecy was one of my favorite parts to create. Harry and Sev will discuss it further next chapter.
Title: Chapter 34: Freedom's Way
| 23 May 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Much fun!! And I noticed that the sequel is up, too! (I've been gone for awhile.) I really like the part about the 'gossipy damn phoenix' :-)
Author's Response: Yes, it is! I think this is another one that's going to write itself. I'm already working on the next chapter. Well, Warrior is right about Fawkes, LOL!
Title: Chapter 4: Who is the Master? Who is the Slave?
| 27 Mar 2009
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Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed)
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Short, but nice. I like how you portray Snape.
Author's Response: That means a lot to me that you said that. I have been fretting over on how to potray him. I want to do it correctly. Anyways, thanks for the review.
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