the Black Cat
Ravenclaw!
Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by RhiannanT
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Foreboding | 26 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Wooo!! Sequel!! I like!!
Author's Response: Thanks and guess what? I just posted a new chapter!
| Title: Chapter 4: Stormy Weather | 02 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Oooooo big trouble. Big, big trouble. Any chance Snape brought those jesses that Harry hates so much? If he can't be trusted to stay still for very long...
Author's Response:
oo now that's a wicked punishment.
But I think Sev left the jesses at home.
Still he could always conjure up a set . .. thanks!
| Title: Chapter 5: Slytherin's Treasure | 04 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- :-) Much fun much fun. Harry sooo deserves all that, and, moreover, now he knows that, too: a good combination, all and all. :-)
Author's Response: Yes, he has learned something . . .finally! See, he can be taught!
| Title: Chapter 6: On Edge | 12 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Oh, Snapegirl. I'm so sorry for your loss. I'll pray for you.
I like how you did Sirius in dog form in this chapter - he's Sirius, but he's also sort of a dog!
Author's Response:
Thanks, it was very sudden, we had dinner with her on Friday night and by Wed she was gone. We were shocked. But it happened quickly and peacefully, in her sleep, so I guess that was a good thing. But I will miss her, she was always very excited to read my work.
Yeah, I figured that Sirius should still maintain his personality while also having a dog's instincts.
| Title: Chapter 7: Hawks At Play | 14 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- I like!! Much fun. I like the bits on the teenage Voldie the best. It sounds realistic - young and cocksure, like a moody teenager, but also much like voldimort. 'twas cool :-)
Author's Response: Oh good, it's hard to imagine the Evil One as a kid, so I'm happy I did a good job on him. He sure is creepy though. I could see him pulling the wings off of butterflies.
| Title: Chapter 8: A Long Way Away | 17 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Much fun. I like how Harry's bratty when he's sick. :-)
Author's Response: Yeah, he's a trip when he's not feeling well.
| Title: Chapter 9: A Wicked Gathering | 23 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Woot bad guys. I like how you portrayed Greyback. Very savage. :-) I like how he reads dominance as more of a dog than a human.
Author's Response: Thanks, I felt that he was more like an old time werewolf in the movies, motivated by his savage nature and reacting to things more as an animal than a human sometimes. He's very wicked and bloodthirsty and you'll be seeing more of him soon . . .though I doubt you'd want to meet him anywhere. I certainly wouldn't.
| Title: Chapter 11: Sylvanor's Children | 01 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Ah, no!! Poor Hedwig!! I dunno what happened to her eyes.
I like the world you've created, here. It reminds me of Robin Hood and his band of Merry Men, sort of, though Vlad is clearly trouble. I also like the sort of 'organic' magic they have, without the weird spells and stuff. :-)
Author's Response:
Something that is bad, as you'll see.
That's true, I kind of had them in mind when I wrote this. Remember Robin Hood Prince of Thieves? They lived in trees too.
Vlad is trouble, though he won't betray them to the werewolves.
yes, they have natural magic, and it is stronger than the kind most wizards have.
My take on what would really happen should Snape have to take care of Harry over the summer. Includes lots of mean Snape, angsty Harry and last but not least...spanking!
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc > Strictly Canon Universe, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jun 2009 / 08 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jun 2009 / 08 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Yes Sir | 09 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Eep. This is very disturbing to me. Good, but disturbing as all hell. I like your Harry - sarcastic even (or especially) when in pain. Nicely done.
Author's Response: Tell me about it! Imagine being the one who wrote it, now that's what I call really disturbing;-)
| Title: Chapter 1: Yes Sir | 19 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- This says it's completed, but...but...but please???