the Black Cat
Ravenclaw!
Written for the Teacher Attack! challenge by Dhruva. After Umbridge snaps and takes her newfound authority too far, Snape unexpectedly steps in on Harry's behalf. WARNING: Contains corporal punishment, i.e. caning, of a teenager.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by RhiannanT
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jul 2009 / 10 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Not such a protector after all, Teacher Attack!
Chapters: 2 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Jul 2009 / 10 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Not such a protector after all, Teacher Attack!
| Title: Chapter 1: Teacher Attack! | 11 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Very promising beginning! I'm adding this story to my favorites. :-)
Author's Response: Glad you like it! i'm afraid that after this scene, the rest might seem anticlimactic. Still, better press on. Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 2: Not Such a Protector, After All | 04 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Very nice!! I like!! :-)
Author's Response: Glad you liked it, and thanks for reviewing!
What if Voldemort had marked Harry intentionally? Arousing the anxieties of either side desperate to claim him for its own, Potter could care less about their power struggle--until fate plays sleight of hand to his expectations, forcing the young street magician to take a personal interest in the outcome...
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Character Death, Drug use, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Feb 2010 / 11 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Feb 2010 / 11 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Grave Plots | 10 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Hey I like so far!! Your Harry is so cool!! And I like your Sev, too. The grudging truce between him and James seems plausible, given that the two have continued to work together and Lily's still around to vouch for Sev. Much good. :-)
Author's Response:
Prior attempts at sober responses towards such positive reviews may be seen below; allow my abandonment of proper English to demonstrate how I actually feel: Eeeeee!!!!!!! I HEART Reviewers! Thank you so much, Rhiannan, I'm in love with my Harry too, even though I'm scared he's not real (both in the sense that he talks and acts too smart for a little kid, and, yeah, in the 'Hate to break it to yah, there is no Santa Claus' way).
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 11 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- I like!! I especially like how your world is more complicated and nuanced than the canon world - things are much less black-and-white, and so the people are more realistic. It's good!
Author's Response:
Thanks again! I was pretty worried about integrating my ideas into the plot without cluttering the story, and hoped you'd enjoy the additions I've made to the Potterverse! Making things less black/white though will have its downside... how the heck am I supposed to give the Death Eaters a sense of humour and interest in children... and then set them to fight a very UGLY war? Cringes.
Maybe, by the time we get there, I can either make you (1) distance you from their sense of humour via some lovely, distracting plot, or (2) used it to create some sort of macabre or absurdist mood--while somehow not veering in R-rated content (cum Gaiman in 'Neverwhere' (AWESOME NOVEL! READ IT!) with Vandemar and Croup). Crosses fingers!
Harry Potter is nearly sixteen and his life has never been his own, always manipulated from the shadows. Now, with the death of Sirius and new revelations about his parentage, can Harry take back control of his own life? AU after OotP. Severitus.
“No person is your friend who demands your silence, or denies your right to grow.” - Alice Walker
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
“No person is your friend who demands your silence, or denies your right to grow.” - Alice Walker
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Romance/Slash, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Apr 2010 / 15 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 5 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Apr 2010 / 15 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1 | 16 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- LOVE this so far. I like your writing style. I really like the way the memories are revealed for Severus. Much fun - I'm adding it to my favorites list.
Author's Response: Thankyou very much! ^^
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 2 | 29 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Ick! Ick ick ick! (Not that I don't like this chapter but ewww poor Harry!) He's going to be so screwed up after this...
Thanks for updating! I like it!! :0)
Author's Response: He really is XD You just wait and see XD Glad you're enjoying it! ^^
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 | 06 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- I like!!! I really like that Harry is mute. It's a cool idea, and presents unique challenges. I also like your Snape - he seems like canon Snape, but in an unusual situation that requires him to be more careful, kinder. Well done, and I can't wait for more. :0)
Author's Response: I'm very glad you're enjoying it ^^ And I'm so glad Snape is coming across alright, I've actually never written him before starting on this - thanks! ^^
Post OoTP. Alternate Timeline. Harry's had a wretched summer. To top it off, Dumbledore insists he continue studies in Occlumency with the dreaded Severus Snape. Will he and Snape learn to get along?
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 38 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2011 / 20 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 38 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2011 / 20 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Into the Lion's Den | 22 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Good so far! I want to see how this plays out!
Author's Response: Thank you :)
| Title: Chapter 3: The calm before the storm | 29 Jun 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Oof. You say Harry refuses to cooperate the next time - I can certainly see why! I like your portrayal of Snape - he-s just as cruel as in canon, but you get some of the thought behind it so you understand a little. It's still inappropriate, but realistic. I like it! I want to see where this is going! :-)
Author's Response:
Yes he acts like a complete git but can always justify it in his own mind!
Harry has been so patient so far but can he keep it up? hmm...
Thanks for reviewing!
| Title: Chapter 6: A flight in the mind's eye | 04 Jul 2009 |
| Reviewer: RhiannanT (Signed) |
- Cool! I like this!! I especially like the flying-occlumency thing. Much goodness. :-)
Author's Response: Thank you- Yes Harry is developing his own, rather unusual technique! More to come soon :)