Membership status: Member
|
|
| My Pet:
|
Penname:
| cckeimig [Contact]
| Better be Unsorted!
|
Call me:
| Christina C. Keimig (undisclosed)
| Member since: 20 Feb 2009
|
Beta?
|
|
|
About me:
|
|
| Well, more of a favourite quote: "There is no use trying, said Alice; one can't believe impossible things. I dare say you haven't had much practice, said the Queen. When I was your age, I always did it for half an hour a day. Why, sometimes I've believed as many as six impossible things before breakfast." Alice in Wonderland -Lewis Carroll [Report This]
|
Find me:
|
|
|
|
Title: Chapter 12: Lending a Name
| 16 May 2011
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
Good chapter. I liked the sudsy-water touch there at the end. :-)
Author's Response: I did, too. :)
Title: Chapter 14: The Christmas Party
| 27 Nov 2011
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
Quite the enjoyable chapter! Well worth the wait! :-)
The Prisoner of Azkaban with a twist. Instead of waiting to hear what the Ministry was going to do to him for breaking The Decree for the Restriction of Underage Wizardry, Harry decided to tell Minister Fudge about how the Dursleys treated him. After a reading of his parents' will, Harry is forced to go live with his least favorite teacher.
Takes Place: 3rd summer
-
Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Runaway
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 07 May 2009
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
I think this is off to a good start. I really like "Snape's Second Chance" because of the fresh perspective you give things, and this story also looks like it has a lot of potential.
If you are still looking for a beta, I might be able to help. My workload is tremendous right now, but I am a professional translator/proofreader and a former English professor/current language curriculum developer. Let me know. :-)
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Corpus Vile
| 20 Dec 2012
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
Oh, this is WAY more entertaining than what happened to Marge in canon. Such a shame you never posted further chapters--I hope all is well.
A Severitus written in a series of 100-word scenes. Warnings: bad language, friendly Slytherins, unfriendly Gryffindors (so far), more than a few cliches. Inspired by Bil's Drabble Challenge. Some word counts may be off because the site sees some formatting options as words. I'm not sure why some are counted as less than 100. Counting actual words, every chapter is exactly 100 words.
Takes Place: 5th summer
-
Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
-
Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 33
-
Completed: No
-
Updated: 16 May 2008 / 28 Apr 2008
Series: None
-
Challenges: Drabble Challenge
Title: Chapter 33: Generosity
| 12 Sep 2009
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
This is so good! I absolutely love how you're getting so much into 100 words per chapter!
Title: Chapter 4: What Goes Around Comes Around
| 26 Mar 2009
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
Was it fair? It was sure fun!
Author's Response: I know, I laughed, some of the time, when I wrote that part! Another reviewer said I should do a Snape's Revenge part two just so she could see Vernon get beat on some more. I seriously considered it.
Title: Chapter 27: A Bit of Mud and Water
| 31 Mar 2009
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
What a blast!!! And I was getting impatient to 'meet' Sarai! :-)
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope you enjoy what happens with her, Sev, & the boys!
Title: Chapter 35: Farewell to Prince Manor
| 01 Apr 2009
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
I absolutely loved it! I really do hope you write a sequel!
Author's Response: I have a sequel planned, but have been slow in writing it because my Muse has been dictating other plt lines to me at the moment, specifically Broken Wings. So glad you enjoyed it!
Snape is left dying in the Shrieking Shack after giving Harry his memories convinced that Harry is going to his death. When Snape dies, he is given a chance to send his soul backwards in time seven years to give Harry a chance for a better (and hopefully longer) life. Will switch back and fourth between being Snape centered and Harry centered.
Takes Place: None
-
Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+
-
Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 12
-
Completed: No
-
Updated: 05 Jun 2009 / 17 May 2008
Series: None
-
Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 03 Apr 2009
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
I don't see why people should bother you about the changes you're making. That's what makes it YOUR story and not JKR's, for goodness' sake. Can you say 'fanfic', anyone? duh.
You just keep writing and don't take any flak from anyone's misguided ideas that canon is the only way for this to go. SS went back to CHANGE the past, not relive it.
I really like where you have gone with this so far. I haven't read the original version, so I am going to just have this version to comment upon. sounds like SS has learned some important lessons about Harry and how to be a better man this time around.
Author's Response: The changes I'm making are mostly correcting grammer, spelling, and continuiting errors with in the "Snape's Second Chance" universe.
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 10 Apr 2009
|
Reviewer: cckeimig (Signed)
|
|
This was revised??? I honestly finished slogging through this chapter because I like your story and am tracking it, but the spelling/word choice errors and the word order/grammar errors were so distracting I got no enjoyment out of this chapter, I'm afraid to say.
|