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Reviews by Jan_AQ
One shot - Little Harry is out with the Dursleys. When trouble strikes, who will help Harry? (blergh, sorry can't give much away without telling you the story).
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Misc
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Dec 2005 / 05 Dec 2005 Series: None - Challenges: None
Every year, Severus is given a simple task to complete.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Misc, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Dec 2005 / 13 Dec 2005 Series: None - Challenges: None
Awesome story. :) Nice angst. And it's so plausible to be canon. I really like this story. Ah, just so you know, I think I accidently deleted this story that you posted, I was sure that I hit the Validation button but the story was gone so I had to go Fanfiction.net and steal and post the story from there. That's what this one is. XD I hope that I didn't miss too many things, can you check it? :\ Sorry about that. It's probably a bug. Author's Response: Thankies :D It\'s not a problem (bout the FFnet thing). I think the only thing that was different between the two was that I fixed the line breaks for over here.. but that\'s not a big deal at all.
Thanks for reviewing and putting the story up! This story follows the events of Summer before Sixth Year. No HBP but canon through OoTP - Snape mentors Harry as he trains to learn what he needs to fulfill the Prophecy.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, SuperPower! Harry Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 22 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Jul 2006 / 14 Dec 2005 Series: Sixth Year Series - Challenges: None
Dumbledore decides everyone should have a go at 'string walkie talkies.' Snape and Harry (but mostly Snape) are none too pleased at the prospect of being guinea pigs.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Fic Fests > #2 Challenges
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Jan 2006 / 13 Jan 2006 Series: None - Challenges: String Walkie Talkies
Answer to Fic Fest Challenge # 6- Little Harry Potter is very sick at Number Four, Privet Drive...who will help him?
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: Child fic Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Jan 2006 / 17 Jan 2006 Series: None - Challenges: Sick little Harry
YAY! Loved it, Thanks so much! Fluff! *_* I aboslutely loved the way Harry mistook him for his "Daddy" and how Snape was just silent. Wonderful story! trying to hide as his door swing open neatly. swung. Do you want to know what happened with the war and everything? Let’s go far away then, beyond the limits of our world. AU, Post HBP and Post everything else.
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Misc
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Jan 2006 / 20 Jan 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
I wonder who the three people are: the boy who could fly without wings (Harry?), the man who's heart bled (Severus?) (Remus?), the man who was dead (Deumbledore?) (Albus)?. Is the Moon lily or just a powerful being? I bet that the dog is Sirius. This is a lovely story so far. But did you mean for it to be a round robin? A round robin means that anyone else can write a second chapter to it, ir a third, or a fourth, all the way until it is completed. Author's Response: My dear dear dear Jan_AQ, As always you arethe first to give me support. I just love you! I am glad you liked it. It is a new theme for me too and I hope I am up to it. I also read the chapter more than 20 times to make sure it is right theme-wise, plot-wise, grammar, spellinga nd punctuation wise, and I have to admit I am so pleased with myself for the result. Ummm, no I didn\'t mean it to be a round robin. I will check in the profile and correct it. And no, I am not giving you any clues as to who is who! Thanks again Harry stays with Snape the summer after fourth year and gets a few unexpected surprises about Snape's life, particulary in regards to his family.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind, Out of Character Snape, Snape is Secretive Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Out of Character
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 04 Oct 2014 / 21 Jan 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
Sorry I didn't write a review before, I just sort of noticed that there was a new chapter, so I had to say something. XD Great chapter! I really like how Harry has been "studying" the Snape children and how we get to look at them through Harry's eyes. The part about Harry writing character studies, however, seemed a little off, more like something of the write (you or me) coming through rather than Harry's attributes. I liked how the children at the lunch table had a "you eat whatever you get" look, that was cute. And Harry realizing that he had been colouring with a child all day? Priceless! The ending was great, what a cliffhanger! But why did it have to be a cliffhanger? You better update soon! :) hehe. One thing I noticed that may need some work is that there was a little too much filler. We all sometimes change our writing styles as we grow and learn. Filler is something that isn't so great in stories, particularly fanfiction because readers read to get a fast "hit", they want the part they will most enjoy and as much of it as possible while still keeping the story real. You made a good show expressing Harry's awkwardness but the filler made it less potent. Thanks for posting this chapter! :) Nice nervous, pain to the gut ending. |
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