the Black Cat
Ravenclaw!
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After mistakenly flooing himself to Snape's home the summer after Sirius' death, Harry realizes that his potions master can take matters into his own hands, literally. Warning: This story does involve the spanking of teenagers. If you have a problem with this, do not read and do not review. Any criticisms about CP will be ignored. But I love any other feedback!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Administrator
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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Mar 2007 / 03 Feb 2006
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Mar 2007 / 03 Feb 2006
Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Dealing with Dobby | 22 May 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
Oh my. oh my oh my. :) Wonderful chapter! It may be filler, but it was good and very interesting filler, and making me want more. More! Oh man, Harry's really into it now. I love how he got Dobby to come over and he tried to hide him and get information out of him. i like how he didn't really succeed, that made it seem much more real. But now he's cuaght! Oh no.
I really liked how Harry is listing all his "sins". I just know that Snape is going to find out about at least some of them. Great chapter. I'm stuck in extreme anticipation to read more! you better update soon! I have to go back and review the last two chapters too. i read them while I was rushing at work and didn't have time to properly review them.
Great, great, great chapter. PLEASE update soon! :)
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Ending the Lying | 30 May 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Wow. Poor Harry but he's already disobeying again!! Oh man, oh man. Harry. ;_; He's really going to get it. I hope that he makes it out alive!! Snape was right about him. And now... I wonder what will happen at Malfoy Manor. What if Harry looks like a Malfoy, and it was some potion Snape was saving for an emergency? They'd both get caught and this latest scheme Harry has undertaken could be mortally dangerous!! Harry! I want to smack him upside the head myself. But wow, great chapter! I'm getting shivers. Great job!
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Malfoy Manor | 22 Jun 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Wha!!! That was AWESOME!!! Wow. Holy cow. You did a really great job with Narcissa, I can't believe that Harry really pulled it off, tried to steal the necklace and is still alive! LOL. And then when Snape found him.. oh ho! But then you threw in a little twist, Snape was ready to give up. Was he really? Or was he just bluffing to get through to Harry? This new thing they are trying... at first I thought it was an obedience potion or something, then hypnotism and now... well I wonder what's going on. Maybe Snape's taking Harry somewhere in his mind, a memory of Sirius? GREAT new turn. Great chapter, greta story! :D I'm so glad you updated.
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 - Cruel Reality | 11 Jul 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
oh poor Harry. I actually liked this portrayal of Harry staying with Sirius, Sirius' depression and the lack of food. I think that Sirius in some way would have blamed Harry for his forced exile. Possibly, Kretcher could do a horrible job stocking food, maybe not buying any or just horrible food and Sirius wouldn't know and Harry would be too... nice and shy about it to tell Sirius after awhile. It's just a tragedy. I wish that it could have been happier but I like the diversity that it was not. Snape showing up was an interesting touch; in some way Harry wanted Snape to notice, to say that he was up too late, was too thin.
I think that this was a great chapter, I just wish that there had been more of it. :)
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 - Starting Over | 23 Jul 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Loved it, loved it, loved it. Poor Harry! I bet that the last part with Lucius showing up is a bad dream. I guess we'll see. :) Snape is so patient with Harry, I love how exasperated he gets though, thinking Harry a borrid little brat. XD Fantastic job with this story, I love the development and every chapter it seems. Thank you so much for writing and posting and being so regular! :)
| Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - Lucius Malfoy | 14 Aug 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
Yay you updated!! :D Haha poor Harry! really interesting twist on Harry's character, it seems as if he's comfortable enough to stand up to Snape, to tease and taunt, more so than before. The part with Lucious was great, I thought that he could see him at first too like Harry. And now Draco's going to come and stay? Woo! That will be fun.
But Harry got into trouble.. Again! Ack. haha when the plates fell and Harry was like "just a few plates" and the the mirror and then the wall.. and he got mad at it? Priceless! Great job! :) I've been missing your updates, thanks for posting this one. :)
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - A Different Birthday | 30 Sep 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
- Lovely, lovely, lovely! Poor Harry, I thought he was done for when Hermione started talkign about the polyjuice! And then he got spanked! Ah! I wonder if Neville is feeling bad now or if he's insightful and he'll get what Harry was trying to prove. i'm glad that Harry had a birthday and that it was a normal birthday and not spectacular. I loved how SNape gave him a pocket watch at the end. Lovely ending. Thanks so much for posting!
| Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - A Big Mistake | 08 Nov 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
Oh, poor Harry! Poor, poor Harry! Poor Draco too. They really did it, bickered so much and finally someone got hurt. I guess we all saw it coming though. This was a really good chapter, I loved seeing how the boys did NOT get along, and all of Harry's thoughts. He's really insecure, isn't he? I hope that Snape isn't too mad at him, he must feel horrible.
I didn't notice any joint words but I did notice this:
Stoppering up the tub drain, Harry turned the water off. (You mean on?)
while Harry had to toil in the dirty like a dog. (Is this an expression or did you mean garden?)
| Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Two Boys | 27 Nov 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
Fantastic. I had several favourite lines but here's just one of them: Snape was neither a woman nor soft-hearted, and he said, "No more slamming doors." Great. I loved how Snape talked through everything with Harry. The silver ground snitch was a great idea - I wonder if Harry and Draco will compete with each other over it. I really liked how Snape told Draco that the yellow cup was Harry's and to take another one. I found Draco to be very in character this chapter. Opening the subject of abuse from Harry to Draco was unexpected but I think it was needed. It added a touch of realism and I hope that maybe Draco will study, or notice the way Snape and Harry act around each other. Poor Harry, Draco heard them... he doesn't seem to be too mortified though, he was able to fake it and threaten Malfoy back. :) Great chapter, thanks for writing and posting!
About what another reviewr said: I don't know, I'm a lot older than 16 and I still feel special over cookies and what-not. :)
| Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Welcoming Darkness | 16 Dec 2006 |
| Reviewer: Jan_AQ (Signed) |
Oh don't worry! I think you did use the Word clipboard button becasue you had (br /) tags and not (p) tags. :) That is what the Word button does. I went and converted all the (br /)'s to (p)'s so your story is all fixed now. The reason why you couldn't indent your story is because it was using (br /) tags for spacing. (br)'s can't have styles assigned to them, but (p)'s can.