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Reviews by Jan_AQ
After mistakenly flooing himself to Snape's home the summer after Sirius' death, Harry realizes that his potions master can take matters into his own hands, literally. Warning: This story does involve the spanking of teenagers. If you have a problem with this, do not read and do not review. Any criticisms about CP will be ignored. But I love any other feedback!
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern Tags: Adoption Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Mar 2007 / 03 Feb 2006 Series: A Time and a Place - Challenges: None
Oh my gosh! LOL! Fantastic: "And the first thing he saw was the silver toothbrush floating in the toilet." Tehehe. This freaking rocks. "They had all been so peaceful and happy, going about the summer and doing their own thing, and then the drama queen arrived." Yeah, Potter you're one to talk. You're the one that blew up the lab- gah. Peaceful, indeed. :) I LOVED this part: “If you have something to say, then say it!” Draco snapped. “All right,” Harry stood up, realizing that he wasn’t going to get a moment’s peace until he said something, “you should try this book. It’s a pretty good read.” Muah ha ha!!! Best line ever. Good job Harry! You're getting a backbone of the right sort. I was a little surprised about what Draco said. It seemed like he was doing a good job hurting Harry with his words, giving as good as he (didn't) get, but Harry was able to just ignore him. I feel proud of Harry, but I'm also surprised. Could Snape be influencing him this much for the good? I have to agree with Snape, Draco should be kicked out. I wonder if the potions messed with Harry's brain, or maybe his reasoning skills. Or maybe this is the person he's turning into? In any case, it will be interesting to see the two boys interacting some more. If you ever need to post a chapter, just copy it and paste it in the box normally with a Ctrl+V. It should turn out alright. If it looks a little off and has too many spaces, or doesn't have indentations, that's okay. I wander around the latest chapters and edit them if they need to be, so it's no pressure on you. :) Just paste and as long as it's readble, don't worry about it. Harry heard he leave five minutes later, tossing the book on the table as he went. him.
I wonder if having Harry in the room would make Draco less forthcoming in his reasons and in talking to Snape about them and how he feels. I really liked SNape conversation to Harry about why he does what he does. it seemed very logical. I wonder about Harry... he seems rather out of it. “You do not try to harm other people in this house,” LOL that sounds like what I tell my little brother when he has a bear plushie eying a duck plushie, "We do not eat other members of the family." XD I think that Snape should spank Draco before bed anyway. He tried to kill Harry. But now we know that he hadn't meant to actually kill him. I'm glad, it doesn't seem so bad now, especially seeing Draco's outcome. I'm so glad that they called a truce though, but I want to see them get into trouble agian. Aw well, maybe they'll get into trouble together next time. I'm glad that Harry started bleeding- it made it seem more dramatic and up to par with what really happened to him. overall I think that you're doing a fantastic job with this story. I'm so happy that you posted, even though you had some difficulties. I'm sorry about that. :( I hope that we can solve them... just e-mail me.
Love it! Tehe. I LOVED IT. "Without magic, just physical touch, you can learn to hurt someone or heal them." If I were Harry, I would have thought about the Death Eaters and shivered. I really liked how Harry talking and thought about family, women though. I wonder WHY Snape doesn't have a wife. What a cheeky Harry you have! He talks back like crazy and just barges into places. Wow, he's fun and very different. I'm really enjoying him. Draco's talk, well I'm glad that it was just talk. you have away to make us and Harry think one thing, but then have it turn completely around and we discover that it's a different situation. Very nicely done. "Still, we should be able to do something to the pieces. Like light them on fire." oh my. Just what are they thinking here? Haha. oh man. I didn't think that it would be fun at all, they way they spoke about it, but imagining the flaming ball of fire.. yeah i can see how it could be fun. XD I saw them getting into trouble though- Ha! And I think Snape has quite a bit in store now. I love a scheming Harry and Draco. How fun! I really, really appreciated this chapter. It was great! Thanks so much for sharing it and deciding to go ahead and write it.
Great job on this story, and congratulations on finishing it! I would be interested in seeing a sequel, but with a different mood. I think that it may be best if the trouble Harry got into were more serious, if he were more serious. Real trouble, and real deep conflict between Snape and Harry, perhaps a sense of betrayal at one point. I think that maybe they should work at becoming closer first, and then have the conflict, and then work towards repairing it. Well that's just my thoughts! Thanks for posting! :D
How amusingly clever! I love your Harry in this so much. My take on Chapter 91 of AYLNO. Harry and Draco were kidnapped by Lucius, can they escape his clutches with their lives intact? All is not as it seems...
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Adoption Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 12 Feb 2006 / 11 Feb 2006 Series: A Year Like None Other - Challenges: None
Drabble for Jan_AQ's request: A hole in the toe of a sock.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Misc
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Feb 2006 / 13 Feb 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
A drabble for Jan_AQ's request: Cake.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Feb 2006 / 13 Feb 2006 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: OMG -- I had typos?! *faints* LOL, thanks. Glad you liked. ;) After Death Eaters interrupt a meeting, Minerva McGonagall gets a closer look at Severus and Harry's relationship. Post HBP.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Feb 2006 / 26 Feb 2006 Series: None - Challenges: Through Minerva's Eyes
GREAT. :) At first you were tricky and had then all seem so out of character, calling each other those names. But it was really nice how you eased into the explanation. It was a sweet one too. :) I loved Snape's explanation as to why he called Harry "Anton". It makes me feel that they are really cousins somehow though. Am i just reading into it too much? Great stuff. Thanks for sharing! (It's Poppy Pomfrey.) |
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