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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Severus Snape hates Harry Potter. Nothing will ever change that. Nothing. Not even the boy’s sudden intrusion in his life. Or that cheeky smile. Or that all too innocent look. Or the sudden shift in his relationship with the Potter whelp. Not even those green eyes. No, nothing will ever change Severus’s hatred for Harry Potter – no matter how fond of him he was becoming. An eventual Snape adopts Harry story. Beginning in Harry’s first year.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern Tags: Adoption Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 39 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 Apr 2024 / 10 Oct 2017 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your encouraging review. This chapter took me so long to write, I’m glad it was so enjoyable.
Intense developments. Snape is really lacking confidence, and drowning in his sorrows. I hope he can pull out of it for Harry's sake. Dumbledore could tell what he was going to do before he left... perhaps an intervention is in store? Thanks for the update! I'm really enjoying the story. Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind words. It is greatly appreciated. I am so glad you are enjoying this story. Please enjoy the next chapter! Harry Potter has created the perfect Boy Who Lived persona. He's learned to hide behind the mask, but what happens when it starts to crumble? Harry is determined not to find out especially not now that he's been forced into Occlumency lessons with his least favorite professor. Will Snape be able to see through the cracks to a boy who is just barely hanging on?
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 May 2021 / 10 Nov 2017 Series: None - Challenges: None
Hogwarts has enacted a house-exchange program in the interest of increasing inter-house unity and understanding. Students fourth year and up can visit other houses for two weeks if they sign up. Harry has a morbid curiosity about what it might have been like to be sorted into Slytherin.
In Response to the House Exchange Program prompt by JAWorley. Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Mean, Snape is Stern Tags: Hufflepuff!Harry, Injured!Harry, Ravenclaw!Harry, Resorting, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Dec 2017 / 30 Nov 2017 Series: None - Challenges: House Exchange Program
I loved how Harry loved Ravenclaw, the experiments the questions, and new understandings. Hehe and Snape got splattered with exploded potion! I love how the misconceptions about other houses are being fixed. Ravenclaw seems great though. I wonder how the other houses will top this. Fantastic start! I love Harry's point of view, and the story idea is so fresh!
I’m loving the story and this premise! Thanks so much for the update!!
I am so glad that it worked out this way. All the misunderstandings and problems were resolved beautifully throughout the story. It definitely made it seem more realistic. I really enjoyed this one. Thanks so much for writing and sharing it! Snape has become a father to Harry, and here comes Draco-his new brother. How will the two get along? How will the boys cope with their new way of life?
Takes Place: 4th summer, 4th Year - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern Tags: Adoption, Sibling Addition Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Neglect, Out of Character, Profanity, Romance/Slash, Self-harm
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Nov 2018 / 01 Dec 2017 Series: None - Challenges: None
Everyone seems in character. The Potter- Malfoy rivalry is present and full of fire. Very good. Now they have another thing to be jealous of over each other - Professor Snape. Poor Snape, I have a feeling he is in for a rough summer. I like where the story is going, but Snape did seem to adapt to the situation too fast. How does he know Draco can stay with him? Doesn’t he want to figure things out first, like why Draco is even there? The dialogue is good. Id like to see more thoughts from the characters though. And more descriptions. Descriptions are the richness of the story. :)
It as a super short chapter, I wanted more. Draco’s story needs a little more work to make it seem in character of his parents. The main traits they have are being snobs and loving their son. If they hid him away for his safety without explaining it to him, it would make sense. Like if something went wrong, and then they were taken over by demons or something and Draco was forgotten, but safe like the original Malfoy’s planned. But overall, good start. I’m interested in seeing where this goes.
But it’s okay. I wonder what Snape is doing. |
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