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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Severus Snape was discovered as a spy mere days before the start of the school year. Thankfully, Albus had been working on a vague contingency plan for this possibility. It had been inspired by the question, “What would it take for Severus Snape to see that he was wrong about Harry Potter?”
The answer? Force Severus to go undercover as Alfonse “Eli” Hopkirk, a sixth year Gryffindor. Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Secretive Tags: Alternate Universe, Deaged!Snape, Disguised!Snape, Gryffindor!Snape, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 02 Jan 2020 / 26 Sep 2019 Series: Forgiveness and Redemption - Challenges: None
I think any of his friends would of caught on about his "Whomping Willow" lie. He wasn't around flying without them at any time, was he? And he should be too good of a flier to ever be hit... I wonder if his lie will ever come up again. What will it take for Snape to separate Harry from his Dad? I love that McGonagall threatened detention for so long. Go McGonagall!! I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks for writing and sharing! Author's Response: the specific potion Snape shared probably won’t show up again, but the seed has been planted that Snape either has unusual access to potions or is unusually good at brewing- and that Will be important later! And yeah anyone who knows anything about Harry would have been instantly suspicious if they’d been treated to that lie, but Snape still doesn’t know Harry yet! And if it makes you feel better I know precisely when/how snape will have his Harry=/=James revelation.... :D thank you for the review!!
Author's Response: he sure did and I think he might, though that is certainly far down the line! and it really does serve Dumbledore right, and writing Minerva winning was so much fun! thank you for the review!!
Author's Response: yeah it is really interesting how the same day can affect a person so differently, i hadn't actually thought about it like that before. keep reading to find out what happened with Eli ;) thank you for the comment!!! Sirius gets to babysit a small Harry for the first time, Snape shows up with unexpected news and the cat turns blue.
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Out of Character Snape, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern Tags: Baby fic Categories: Healer Snape, Misc > No category on the site fits
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Sep 2019 / 26 Sep 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: I like the idea of Harry having a completely different favorite color, anything other than red, and all it took was imagining Sirius in blue hair! I thought a lot about that too, about whether this night would make any differences in Lily and James' fate, and I don't think it does, because the prophecy wouldn't make sense if they lived. Thank you for reviewing Jan! Harry would do anything to not go back to the Dursleys. Even if it meant giving Snape a chance. So, with a shred of hope inside his heart, he approaches Snape with a special letter.
Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Stern Tags: None Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Sep 2019 / 30 Sep 2019 Series: Guardian of Hope - Challenges: Dear Snape, I'm Sorry
When Harry woke up after an injury there were suddenly colors around every living person. So many colors. But then he saw it: a flash of gold in endless black. He wanted to see more of it.
Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: Canon Snape Tags: None Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Sep 2019 / 30 Sep 2019 Series: None - Challenges: Harry can see people’s Auras
Of course Snape would think Harry needs to be exorcised. XD But if it's trauma then Harry as had a lot of those and an exorcism won't help much. But maybe they will discover the Horcrux early and find a way to get rid of it? Is Dumbledore instructing Snape to start Occlumency now? It seemed like it. I enjoyed this one-shot. I can see how the ending was a little rushed, but I still enjoyed it. Thanks for writing and posting while on your holiday! Ron hides under the kitchen table at Grimmauld Place and finds out something unbelievable.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape Tags: None Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 30 Sep 2019 / 30 Sep 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
Harry finds himself at the mercy of the Ministry of Magic after his claims that he is hearing voices are made public. Deprived of his magic and held prisoner in his own body, Harry must wait for a mysterious Healer to help him find his way.
Takes Place: 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Secretive Tags: Hospitalization, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry, Physical Impairment Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Oct 2019 / 01 Oct 2019 Series: None - Challenges: Voices
Author's Response: Thanks Jan :-) Well, you could look at it in two different ways - on the one hand, Harry only says "Hello", as if he isn't sure about the identity of his saviour, perhaps leading us to believe that he is completely broken after his terrible experience at the Ministry. On the other hand, if you read the ending carefully, there is a clue that Harry could be well aware that he is talking to Snape, so it could be inferred that he will fully recover from his ordeal. I must admit that when I was writing this, it became far darker than I had initially planned and I found it hard to write the whole St Mungo's bit. I needed Primrose there as a bit of a foil for the dark deeds of the Ministry that had poor Harry completely catatonic :-(. I kind of want to keep writing this story now! I need to find out what happens with our boys in the aftermath! Hagrid finds a new hybrid and to Snape's horror, Harry is the best option for help.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Oct 2019 / 01 Oct 2019 Series: None - Challenges: None
I fixed your formatting for you so it should be easy to read now. Author's Response: Thank you! I couldn't resist crossing the basalisk with a runespoor. You mean Snape isn't a monster? LOL
I aporeciate your fixing it. I don't know why but that night I couldn't get the story to post *don't know what I was doing wrong* My sister laughed at me because I tried like six times before it posted; then I had to wait for it to be accepted. I was sure I was going to be disqualified. BTW, how early can we post? Should each entry stand alone, or can they be in the same universe? Can we use a new story that is based on a challenge? Aren't I a pest? In response to the 'His Dark Materials AU'. "every witch and wizard is born with a Daemon, a physical manifestation of your soul in animal form. Harry is no exception to this, but his Daemon is a bit...odd. of course chaos ensues."
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Fic Fests > Tri-Writing Tournament 2019 > Round One
Rated: K
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Warnings: Out of Character
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Oct 2019 / 01 Oct 2019 Series: None - Challenges: The Shape of your Soul
Author's Response: Yes!!! I thought this too when I finished it! I’m too lazy to go back and edit it though, but don’t worry I intend to make a multi chapter fic based on the world of his dark materials and will definitely create a relationship between the pair unconsciously through their daemons! Thank you for the wonderful review! x |
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