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Reviews by Jan_AQ
After 1st year, Harry is warned by Dobby not to return to Hogwarts. He runs away and is gone for nearly a year before he is tracked down/rescued by Snape. His enrollment is revoked, so he can only stay at Hogwarts if he's taken on as an apprentice. Can Prof. Snape's firm hand mentor him and help him prepare for his future?
Takes Place: 2nd summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern Tags: Runaway Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking
Chapters: 12 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2021 / 05 Jan 2021 Series: None - Challenges: None
Fantastic chapter. Maybe the best one yet! Thank you for writing and sharing. :) Author's Response: Wow- thank you! I'm hoping I'm finally hitting my stride, I really appreciate the feedback :) I'm so glad you enjoyed my "social services roulette" line, lol. That's one of the most fun parts of writing Snape, he is so SO snarky!!
So did Harry leave his Owl at the Dursleys locked up? Why didn't Hedwig find him? I'm sure Dobby would have prevented any mail from getting to Harry even after Harry ran away. I bet Hedwig is peeved at Harry for leaving her behind. Did she just hang out in the trees on Privet Drive until Dumbledore arrived? This is such a great story, I'm loving that I can read so much all at once. Thank you for writing and sharing!
I'm not sure Harry really trusts Snape with his safety yet. I look forward to that feeling and trust growing. I hope Snape has some pepperup potions or missing sleep potions to take. With all these late nights he's got to be tired. Poor Harry is worn out. I wonder if he doesn't see the invisibility cloak as a security blanket after sleeping with it for so long when he was on the run. I bet it's filthy too unless it has magic keeping it clean. Do Harry's old clothes still fit him? Will the Gryffindor badges on his robes be changed back to whatever they were before he got sorted? Fantastic story and development so far! I appreciate you leaving the chapter were it is. No cliffhangers. I really look forward to seeing how Snape will get the Potions group to allow him to make Harry his apprentice. Would mentioning Harry's orphan state and that Harry is the son of Snape's oldest friend help? Or will it be based purely on potential? I can't wait to find out. Thank you for writing and posting! Please update when you can. :) Author's Response: These are all great questions and they will DEFINITELY be addressed in the upcoming chapters. I'm working on them now, and I'm smiling because we will get a fun few Snape and Harry interactions as they deal with all of these things :) You hit the nail on the head with the cloak. It was his only piece of "magic" that kept him safe-- and you're absolutely right that it became a security blanket. Plus it helped him feel connected to his dad. I don't think this is the last we'll be seeing or hearing about this cloak :) I've been writing like a fiend this week- so hopefully I'll have another chapter up soon. This story has come to me in a huge wave and I can't seem to get it out quickly enough. Thank you for your detailed and thoughtful reviews- it helps me stay motivated and excited to write this story and know that it's not going completely out into the void! Sidenote: Snapes not the only one, I think I need some pepper-up, lol.
I see you used described Harry's cloak as a security blanket. :) I really liked reading all of Snape's musings about his apprenticeship. Will he go meet his old master in person? Travel to his old apprenticeship home? That's got to bring up a lot of memories and feelings. I wonder how their conversation will go. And I wonder if Harry will be able to seek around without being caught or not. Great chapter! I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks so much for updating and sharing it! Author's Response: You know Harry, he can't help himself...now the question is, what happens from here? Yes, his cloak as a security blanket was definitely a shoutout to your observations :) This is what is fun about writing fanfic with feedback as you go. I love it. We will definitely be meeting Master Barclay. It should be very interesting for Snape. He's been on his own for a long time but this is the one man whose approval he always wants and needs. It will definitely bring up a lot of the feels. Thank you so much for reading and giving amazing feedback. New chapter coming soon!!!!! Following the disasterous Third Task, Harry begins to notice two things about himself. First: his appearence has begun to change. Second: something is very very wrong. The Cruciatus shouldn't continue to be causing him pain this far out from having received it, should it?
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Kind Tags: Disguised!Harry, Injured!Harry, New Identity!Harry, Physical Impairment Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect, Out of Character
Chapters: 47 - Completed: No - Updated: 13 Jan 2023 / 08 Jan 2021 Series: None - Challenges: None
I also enjoyed your Snape. He is very in character. They both are. Well done! But what is going on with Harry? Is he kidnapped? Thanks for writing and posting! Please update when you can! Today is Severus’ birthday. All the Potions Master wants is to relax and live out his days in peace.
Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape is Secretive Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jan 2021 / 09 Jan 2021 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: I wish it was canon too. I will always believe it is. They never found a body. And I don't believe that the youngest Potion Master in England and not have an antidote to Nagini's venom. Harry would never have guessed what moving to a new city with the Dursleys would mean. He also never would have guessed who his new neighbor would be, or that he was being watched... followed... stalked when he went out at night looking for food and safety. Written in response to the Neighbors challenge by Mellow Moon.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Secretive, Snape is Stern Tags: Adoption, Disguised!Snape, Incognito!Harry, Incognito!Snape, Injured!Harry, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Spying on Harry! Snape Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Drug use, Neglect, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Profanity, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 10 - Completed: No - Updated: 20 Feb 2021 / 25 Jan 2021 Series: None - Challenges: Neighbors
I really liked Harry’s idea of using the Prefects bath as a pool. Dumbledore spying and seeing Ron’s maturity is a plus. I love this new development. And Ron says it all about not wanting to owe Draco Malfoy anything.
I really like your original characters, they are just developed and described enough. I really liked Severus' disguise as an old man. I loved reading from Snape's point of view. It makes sense that he would love being alone at night as his form of socialization. As an introvert it makes sense. Same with staying up all night, and sleeping when most others are awake. I loved how Snape spyed and followed Harry. It must of been a big shock to realize Harry is living next door. Haha! Great story so far! I am really enjoying it. Thanks for writing and posting another one!
I love how Snape left Harry food on his trash bin. So sad that Harry would still eat it even if it were poison. Vernon really beat him up. :( I'm glad that Harry knew of a safe place to go. I really hope that Harry's belongings aren't burned. I love at the end of this chapter how Harry was told of the adoption open house. I bet Snape shows up. Ha! That would be a nightmare for Harry once he sees Snape, even if he's in disguise first. Fantastic chapter. I am really loving this story. Thank you for writing and posting! |
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