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Reviews by Jan_AQ
Uncle Vernon’s acting weird, and Snape has designs on making Harry the most obedient student Hogwarts has ever seen. Harry just wants a quiet summer to himself and to earn the money he needs for his school supplies, but he could only hope for something so simple. Entry into the Bingo Card Fic Fest.
Takes Place: 5th summer, 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Controlling, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern Tags: Hospitalization, Injured!Snape, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys, Werewolf!Harry, Werewolves Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Master Snape > Apprentice Harry, Fic Fests > Bingo! Fic Fest, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Physical Abuse, Physical Punishment Non-Spanking, Violence
Chapters: 26 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Apr 2024 / 05 Nov 2022 Series: None - Challenges: None
It's cool that Dudley gets to see Harry as sort of cool. He actually seems decent in this story. What a wonderful portrayal of the Dursleys. Fabuous story so far. Thank you so much for writing and sharing it! Most of the wizarding world thought that Draco was Lucius Malfoy's only child. What nobody besides the family knew was that Draco had a younger half-sister, Yue Prince-Malfoy, who was kidnapped as an infant.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Overly-protective Snape Tags: Baby fic, Child fic, Deaged!Harry, Girl!Harry, Pregnancy, Vampire!Snape Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Character Bashing
Chapters: 3 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Jan 2023 / 11 Dec 2022 Series: None - Challenges: My Mum Severus Snape
But why was Lia not shocked at being transported? And how come her adopted name is Yelihn when the Potters seem to use anglicized (English) names? It's an interesting start and I'd like to know what happens next. The chapters were very short. You may want to make your chapters at least three times as long to get better reviews. When Harry accidentally drinks a brutal potion with roots in dark magic, he has to reluctantly rely on Hogwarts’ prickly Potions Master to fix the outcome.
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape Spanks, Snape is Stern Tags: Alternate Universe, Injured!Harry Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Physical Abuse, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 Jul 2023 / 16 Jan 2023 Series: None - Challenges: None
Author's Response: Ah thank you so much! Accents can be so tricky to write.
I really like that you gave Poppy ways to identify potions ingredients and such. Very useful skill for a mediwitch. Author's Response: Thank you! Yeah Harry's situation is only getting started, poor boy.
I do think Harry was well within his rights to throw stuff at the news. Nice to see realistic portrayals of a teenaged boy. Author's Response: If no one had figured it out then yeah he would have died. This is a very gnarly potion. Lol--I'm glad you liked him throwing stuff! He deserves to throw things after such awful news.
“She ran an assessment. The ingredients she found were weird.” “Excellent.” Snape said. Oh so in character and fun! And yes, when Harry explains his actions out loud they do sound stupid. I loved this line, Snape rubbed his temples and wished for strength for himself and a brain for Potter. I love Snape's wit in this. Fantastic setup, lovely bantering and development. A delight to read. Author's Response: Aw thank you Jan, this is such a nice comment. I hope you stick around for the rest of the story. <3 <3
Hermione's a good friend. Harry's lucky to have her. Great chapter. I'm loving this story.
i'm loving your Sirius. Very in character. Great chapter.
i'm loving your Sirius. Very in character. Great chapter. |
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