Slytherin!
Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Fairner
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 23: Potion Master's Peril | 22 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- o.0 must go on to read..um what was the crack? at first i thought it was harry's head...but i guess not XD
Author's Response: Oh yes, it was Harry's head. he banged it into the tree to try and stop the voice in his head.
| Title: Chapter 24: Witherspoon's Rescue | 22 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- wow Jace has a really cool family.
harry's afraid to tell them that he was under the influence?
hm harry should just brew the potion and put the cauldron outside and let hedwig fly by and drop the dagger in with harry faaaar from it lol
well i hope he can brew it on his own if not we're all doomed!
Author's Response:
Yes he is afraid of what they would think of him.
Yeah that could happen that way.
You'll find out next chapter, which I have posted.
| Title: Chapter 25: A True Apprentice | 24 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- whoops Jace found out, but his little sister didn't sense any dark about Harry? Maybe it's only active when the dagger is around? I really loved this scene:
"Back to clean up. Severus would have my hide if I left his lab like that," Harry said, then froze. This was not Severus's lab and he was not watching his apprentice, waiting for him to remember his instructions. A sudden pang of sorrow smote him and he felt tears sting his eyes.
It made me feel sorry for Harry, for a moment there nothing seemed out of place until he realized that this wasn't where he thought he was. =(
I hope everything will be alright, please update when you can!
*runs off to find a blanket* it's getting cold again T_T
Author's Response: Yes, that scene really was heartbreaking. But perhaps things shall work out. You'll see next chapter. As for Harry and the dagger, it'll be resolved next chapter as well.
| Title: Chapter 26: Winning Over Hedwig | 28 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- yay they're free of the evil princess! i hope severus forgives harry it really wasn't his fault and somehow their bond will grow stronger :) can't wait!
Author's Response: You're right. As for what will happen between them, read the next part, posted now to find out!
| Title: Chapter 27: A Valiant Recovery | 31 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- Liked this chapter a lot! Felt really bad for Harry and his guilty conscious but then again if I were in his shoes I'd feel the same.
I hope the conversation goes well, hopefully!! :(
Author's Response: Yes, he has a rough time letting go of the past and not blaming himself. You can see what happens next now!
| Title: Chapter 28: A Reader's Advice | 06 Sep 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- lol Jilly is so funny and cute. :)
Harry very very stubborn child that he is, hopefully this talk will go well!
Author's Response: Oh yes, he sure is! And the talk will be surprising, I hope.
| Title: Chapter 29: The Ritual of Renewal | 08 Sep 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- The ritual was very interesting I was wondering how you thought of it and then read the end notes. I send my condolences it seems this year is the year for many to pass on, my aunt also recently passed though it doesn't feel like it.
On to story again, these lines I really liked!
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"Something we both need." Severus answered enigmatically. "Strip down to your boxers."
Harry gaped. "What?"
Severus tugged off his cloak and shirt. "Do as I say. Or do you need my assistance?"
"Hell, no!" he muttered, cheeks flaming. He began to undress.
"Be grateful I am not asking you to do the ritual skyclad." Severus said, concealing a smirk.
"Skyclad?"
"Stark naked," clarified the Potions Master, removing his boots and socks.
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LOL Wonder what was running through Harry's head =)
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"Are you sure nobody can see us? Because I don't want to be arrested for indecent exposure."
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XD bet many fan girls wish they were there!
Author's Response:
Oh, I'm so sorry for your loss! I can sympathize with you and know what you mean about not feeling like they're gone. When my one cousin passed away we were all in shock it happened so quickly. And it sometimes seemed as if all we had to do was pick up the phone and she would answer.
Poor Harry! He was soo embarrassed there! Severus wa sprobably chuckling inside.
Yes, hell I wish I was there! Don't you? Oh but I am bad!
| Title: Chapter 30: Sojourn | 18 Sep 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- I love that book how can someone NOT recognize it?! As soon as I heard a caterpillar with red head I laughed. :D One of the first books I ever read!
Things are beginning to pick up again, they never seem to ever catch a break lol!
Author's Response:
I don't know . . .maybe they wouldn't know it because no one ever read it to them?
No, there's always something going on.
| Title: Chapter 31: The Death Eaters Strike Back | 22 Sep 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- Oyster spoons lol >_> my dad uses a fork and sometimes a regular spoon he says fork works better. XD He laughs when my sister tells him about special utensils for foods. XP And I think Oyster spoons are funny, clams are harder to eat XD they stick more.
So that was their master plan in capturing Dumbledore :(
Poor Albus he really does love his children. Stupid evil people! GO Away! Roar! lol :D
Author's Response:
yeah the forks are easier, but I think the Brits prefer spoons.
Yes, and they are evil and will get what they deserve eventually. I should be posting the next part soon!
| Title: Chapter 34: Dwellers In the Cruicible | 12 Oct 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fairner (Signed) |
- o.o wow things are happening fast. can't wait for harry and sev to come into the picture again i think they need to kick some serious butt!
Author's Response:
Yes they are, and it's almost like a landslide.
Harry and Sev are back, just read the next chapter to see.