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Title: Chapter 1: Witches Promise
| 06 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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When reading this fic, I was terribly annoyed, and only now I realise it's because you've so flawlessly got down Snape's character and I was actually annoyed with him. He's adequately nasty and his dreary, self-deprecating "I owe him/her" thoughts did get a bit monotonous, but I'm grateful you didn't linger (too much) on those parts. I really enjoyed seeing how Snape's character gradually evolved, overcoming the ghosts of the past and embracing a better future. About time.
Author's Response: Aw, I love that about Snape, his bad attitude and self-flagellation. It makes him so fun to write and then get him out of it. Thanks for the review. T
Title: Chapter 1: Second Chance
| 17 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Aw, such a lovely and amusing story. I really, really enjoyed it. Both Harry and Severus deserve this carefree life. Wonderfully done.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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I know it's supposed to be dramatic and angsty and leave me unsettled and worried and all that... But after reading that last line, I began laughing like mad. Only Snape would say something like that. Congratulations, indeed. :D
Author's Response: Oh, I am so glad I wasn't the only one who say the humor in that! ^^ I feel a mite less sadistic, now. LOL I rather thought it sounded like something Snape who say. Thanks for the R&R! ~D
Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Ah, the plot thickens... Silly Harry not drinking his potion. I'm getting a bit worried about it (and eyeing those story warnings up there, hoping this isn't a death!fic).
Author's Response: Our Harry is rather stubborn at times, isn't he? As for your concerns regarding the warnings... let's just say that none of those who've finished reading this fic have sent a lynch mob after me. ;) Not yet, anyway. ^^
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Snape's trademark snarkiness is something of a relief. The telepathic, or whatever, exchange between Snape and Dumbledore at the beginning was slightly amusing.
Good chapter.
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Talk about the "denial phase," huh? I feel for Hermione and Ron. I think it was really insightful (and oddly enough, very IC, by the way) of Ron to wonder if they really wanted to know what was going on with Harry. Ignorance is a bliss and all that, yeah?
Very good chapter.
Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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I don't even find Snape's comments amusing any more. In fact, I feel like bawling my eyes out. First, Harry's dying and then you have to go and pile abusive Dursleys and nightmares on top of that. Why oh why? You'd better have a happy ending prepared, or I'll be miserable for the rest of the day. :(
That said, I'm really enjoying Snape's act of doing-this-because-Dumbledore-told-me-to. Heh. Keep telling yourself that, Snape. :)
Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Aw, that's so... Harry, you know, making sure that Snape remembers to eat? I do wonder, though, if his selflessness is more of a product of his upbringing or something inherent, like a thing Lily would've done. Either way, it was very touching.
Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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Good job on the action - makes the story a bit more dynamic, in addition to the recent developments between Snape and Harry. I was a little surprised when Snape sort of off-handedly confessed to knowing about the Dursleys, but I guess it was the sort of thing he would notice.
Nicely done chapter.
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8
| 12 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
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It's really great that Snape treats Harry normally. A bit differently, yeah, but his concern doesn't become overwhelming and I'm really enjoying his interaction with Harry.
Yet another wonderfully done chapter.
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