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Severus contemplates his life after Voldemort and settles into an anonymous retirement away from the wizarding world until fate strikes with an advertisement from a very recognisable former thorn in his side. Winner for Best Challenge Answer in the 2010 Challenge Fest. Response to the Potions Tutor Needed Challenge by Jan_AQ.

Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry, Fic Fests > #11 Challenge Fest 2010
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Jul 2010 / 06 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Potions Tutor Needed
Title: Chapter 1: Witches Promise 06 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    When reading this fic, I was terribly annoyed, and only now I realise it's because you've so flawlessly got down Snape's character and I was actually annoyed with him. He's adequately nasty and his dreary, self-deprecating "I owe him/her" thoughts did get a bit monotonous, but I'm grateful you didn't linger (too much) on those parts. I really enjoyed seeing how Snape's character gradually evolved, overcoming the ghosts of the past and embracing a better future. About time.

    Author's Response:

    Aw, I love that about Snape, his bad attitude and self-flagellation.  It makes him so fun to write and then get him out of it.

    Thanks for the review.

    T


Severus thinks it was bad enough being seventeen the first time around. Having to live through it a second time is surely a severe penance he doesn't deserve. 2010 Challenge Fest entry. Response to the Student Snape Challenge by Foolish Wishmaker.

Takes Place: 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 08 Jul 2010 / 08 Jul 2010
Series: None - Challenges: Student Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Second Chance 17 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Aw, such a lovely and amusing story. I really, really enjoyed it. Both Harry and Severus deserve this carefree life. Wonderfully done.

All Harry wanted was a few happy memories of his parents, yet, when he fails in the attempt, it might very well cost his life. 2010 Challenge Fest Entry. In answer to the Potions Poisoning Challenge by Jan_AQ.

Chapter 14 rewritten and revised as of 12/30/12.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jul 2010 / 09 Jul 2010
Series: Perfectus Memoria - Challenges: Potion Poisoning
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    I know it's supposed to be dramatic and angsty and leave me unsettled and worried and all that... But after reading that last line, I began laughing like mad. Only Snape would say something like that. Congratulations, indeed. :D

    Author's Response:

    Oh, I am so glad I wasn't the only one who say the humor in that! ^^ I feel a mite less sadistic, now. LOL I rather thought it sounded like something Snape who say.

    Thanks for the R&R!

    ~D


Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Ah, the plot thickens... Silly Harry not drinking his potion. I'm getting a bit worried about it (and eyeing those story warnings up there, hoping this isn't a death!fic).

    Author's Response:

    Our Harry is rather stubborn at times, isn't he?

    As for your concerns regarding the warnings... let's just say that none of those who've finished reading this fic have sent a lynch mob after me. ;) Not yet, anyway. ^^


Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Snape's trademark snarkiness is something of a relief. The telepathic, or whatever, exchange between Snape and Dumbledore at the beginning was slightly amusing.

    Good chapter.

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Talk about the "denial phase," huh? I feel for Hermione and Ron. I think it was really insightful (and oddly enough, very IC, by the way) of Ron to wonder if they really wanted to know what was going on with Harry. Ignorance is a bliss and all that, yeah?

    Very good chapter.

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    I don't even find Snape's comments amusing any more. In fact, I feel like bawling my eyes out. First, Harry's dying and then you have to go and pile abusive Dursleys and nightmares on top of that. Why oh why? You'd better have a happy ending prepared, or I'll be miserable for the rest of the day. :(

    That said, I'm really enjoying Snape's act of doing-this-because-Dumbledore-told-me-to. Heh. Keep telling yourself that, Snape. :)

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Aw, that's so... Harry, you know, making sure that Snape remembers to eat? I do wonder, though, if his selflessness is more of a product of his upbringing or something inherent, like a thing Lily would've done. Either way, it was very touching.

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Good job on the action - makes the story a bit more dynamic, in addition to the recent developments between Snape and Harry. I was a little surprised when Snape sort of off-handedly confessed to knowing about the Dursleys, but I guess it was the sort of thing he would notice.

    Nicely done chapter.

Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 12 Jul 2010
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    It's really great that Snape treats Harry normally. A bit differently, yeah, but his concern doesn't become overwhelming and I'm really enjoying his interaction with Harry.

    Yet another wonderfully done chapter.


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