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On Christmas Eve, an unwanted child is left in a manger and found by a young Potions Master, changing both their lives forever. AU, implied child abuse, neglect, possible CP, Sev raises Harry.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 24 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Feb 2010 / 07 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 5: They Came Upon A Midnight Clear 26 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Oh, I really like Augustus. It's very believable actually that, despte his grudge towards Eileen's choice of husband, he would be willing to accept Severus and Harry. After all, he's not immortal and staying angry with the past is pretty useless. It may sound morbid, but most old people are like that. I would know - my grandfather is very keen on making amends with his past, and he's almost ninety.

    Nice chappie. I'm really glad for Severus and Harry. And Augustus too. :)

    Author's Response:

    No, it doesn't sound morbid at all. My dad's been doing a few things like that for years, trying to let go of old grudges, because an Italian man can hold a grudge for years . .. they invented the vendetta after all. 

    All of them deserve each other and should make a happy family.  Though on occasion Sev and Augustus will butt heads.

    Thanks again for R & R ing!


Potions and Snitches and Christmas... Beta-read by wonderful Wellyuthink!

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Dec 2009 / 09 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Tree 09 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Sweet, but way too short! :) Notwithstanding the shortness, it's a little jewel of pure enjoyment. Thanks for sharing!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review. I need time to finish my other fanfic, therefor I decided to write only a 100 words drabble... Mila

Response to the "Season of Joy" challenge. Snape and Harry aren't having very Happy Christmases.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Dec 2009 / 10 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Season of Joy
Title: Chapter 1: Unhappy Holidays 24 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    That's really sad. It always breaks my heart to read about Harry being abused. But thankfully, there's a snarky Potions Master to save him, hehe. :) I loved that you kept both Snape and Harry so well in character, and, in the end, managed to bring some reconciliation between them (even if it turns out to be temporary). Nicely done.

Harry liked green. Green and silver. Green and silver tinsel, all over Snape’s couch. And the Potions Master in not impressed. But then he wasn’t in the best mood to begin with.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Dec 2009 / 14 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Twining 21 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Lovely little fic. Somehow, you've managed to make Snape irritable and affectionate at the same time. My heart constricted every time Harry had those "this isn't really my home/room/dad" thoughts, but then you go and put a huge smile on my face with that ending. Thanks so much for this wonderful Christmas story!

    Author's Response:

    Aww thank you!  Hehe, yes, I think irritably affectionate was what I was going for in the end, I'm happy it worked ^-^  And very very happy you ended with a smile on your face and less heart constricting; my ultimate goal ^-^

    Thanks so much, I hope you have an awesome Christmas ^^


Walking in on a fight, Severus gets more than he bargained for.

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Dec 2009 / 14 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Christmas Tree
Title: Chapter 1: Redecorating the Tree 24 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Very nice Christmas story. There's a healthy mixture of both angst and humour, and I was very moved by Snape's "punishment" and the effect it had on Harry. Well done.

It's Christmas Eve and little Harry has many requests, but none of them are for Santa.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Dec 2009 / 17 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Believe 21 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Very nice and Christmas-y story. Perfect. I had to laugh out loud at Harry's logic; loved the place where he reasons that Santa must be 'shy'. And the ending fitted wonderfully - definitely something to put everyone in that special mood of Christmas when the extraordinary happens and wishes come true. Thanks for the beautiful story!

    Author's Response: Thank you so much for the lovely review. And I'm glad you liked Harry's logic. I think little children have their very own unique way of reasoning things out. ;-)

100 word drabble. Harry and Snape spend their first Christmas together.

Takes Place: None - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Fic Fests > #10 Holiday/Winter 2009, Parental Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Dec 2009 / 19 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Lights 21 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Heh. I was so taken by surprise when it turned out to be Snape who's ruminating over the happy fact that he has a family now. Well done!

    Author's Response: Heh, I couldn't resist! I'm glad you enjoyed ;)

One story, seven chapters.
Seven drabbles, seven hundred words.
Four pages, ninety lines, three thousand one hundred and sixty characters (no spaces). Three thousand seven hundred and eighty-five characters (spaces).
Seven lines and forty-nine words in this summary.
One father, one son.
One engagement. One grave.
Zero Dark Lords.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Dec 2009 / 19 Dec 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Drabble Challenge
Title: Chapter 1: Break 20 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Aaaaaaa!

    *tries to pull herself together and fails miserably*

    It's haunting, girl. Like really really haunting. The contradiction - as in this case, between the father's love/protectiveness and duty to his spy-position - ultimately meaning a opposition between Dumbledore and Vodemort - is heart-breaking.

    I feel like finding a random shoulder to cry on. Hard. For a very long time.

    Good job!

Title: Chapter 2: Free 20 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    Such a tender, sensitive and, more importantly, sensible image. I think it'd be very plausible for Snape, after going all that torment of having to watch his own son being hurt, to revert to the other extreme: being a concerned/freaked out/frightened father.

    Very, very intriguing drabbles! Good job!

    Author's Response: Thanks so much. *blush*.  Glad you like them so far.

Title: Chapter 3: Luck 21 Dec 2009
Reviewer: Ramelia (Signed)
    I feel my sugar levels going up. :) Though I'm always snickering at Snape being called "Sev", I don't really mind it in this case. It's very lovely.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! Yay for sugar high! *runs around in circles half buried in snow*


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