Ravenclaw!
Prequel to Never Again. After the death of her husband, Lily Potter must begin her life anew, along with her son, Harry. Can they find comfort and solace with Master Healer Severus Snape? Or will old wounds from past and present keep them apart?
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11)
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape, Healer Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by HermioneWeasley
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Character Death, Physical Punishment Spanking, Profanity, Romance/Het, Violence
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Nov 2008 / 03 Jul 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: None
Chapters: 31 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Nov 2008 / 03 Jul 2008
Series: Never Again! - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 15: Family Reunion | 30 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: HermioneWeasley (Signed) |
- That was really good, I can't wait till the next chapter!!!
The handiling was good, but I would have slapped Petunia at least 50 times before they actually did. I would of slapped her even if I was Snape!!! I can't believe she did that, but I can understand how you make so she did, her despising eveeryone so much just for having something she didn't. I really hate her, and if I was Snape I would've grabbed Dudley when she had slapped Harry and slapped him. I hope they never get metioned again!!!
Author's Response: They won't. Petunia will make one last appearance much later on in the story, but after that they are history. She is a very jealous and nasty woman! Sev would never hit a child the way Petunia hit Harry, not after what he's been through. Petunia was lucky he didn't hex her though. But he kept his cool like a mature adult and let Lily have a go at her sister instead.
| Title: Chapter 16: Severus Snape & the Terrible Two-Year-Old Brat | 30 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: HermioneWeasley (Signed) |
- That was good, I wonder what the advice will be like!!! I really enjoy the way that it really is like Harry is growing up, and it really makes you feel you are there. I think you should get some publishers round to look at this, because you really have a natural talent. Although you would have to ask J.K. Rowling because you are using her characters, unless of course you change the names of everything, and have a bit at the beginning when you introduce everyone in your book, with short personality descriptions and stuff. It would be really good. At least you wouldn't have to create a series name and name of the book, because you already have that.
Author's Response: I could do that, of course, if I wanted to, it would be an interesting twist. I'm glad you're enjoying this and you like the realism I tried to put in here, because I think it's important for a story to feel real to the reader, otherwise why bother reading it?
| Title: Chapter 17: House Call at Hogwarts | 30 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: HermioneWeasley (Signed) |
- Well, that was definately intresting!! I really like how real it all sounds, but I can't imagine being that bad!!! espeacially as my parents would of had it bad because I'm a twin, and there would be two of us like that!!
Author's Response: Yes, harry is a little bundle of mischief, like a lot of two year olds I know. And it's a good thing you're not as bad as harry or even Fred and George, LOL! Poor Sev and Lily have their hands full.
| Title: Chapter 18: Little Leonardo | 31 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: HermioneWeasley (Signed) |
- I bet Snape does!!! That would be the funniest thing ever, considering he is a healer. Anyway, another great chapter, I love it!!!
Author's Response: Really? Thanks and I'm glad you like this so much!
| Title: Chapter 18: Little Leonardo | 31 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: HermioneWeasley (Signed) |
- I bet Snape does!!! That would be the funniest thing ever, considering he is a healer. Anyway, another great chapter, I love it!!!
Author's Response: Great and thanks for reviewing.
| Title: Chapter 25: Picnic | 31 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: HermioneWeasley (Signed) |
- OMG!!! How can that happen!!! Though I guess because she's muggle born it's possible for her to get muggle deaseises (I don't think I've spelt that right), but after they wanted another child and everything!!!! It was very well written, like all of your chapters, but it really does make me sad!!!!
Author's Response: I know, it's really sad, but even wizards can get diseases and not just magical ones either. It's like how we can sometimes catch animal diseases from sick animals, like the swine flu. It's rare but it CAN happen. Poor Lily. Unfortunately, lupus is really hard for even magic to cure.
| Title: Chapter 26: Seeking A Miracle | 31 May 2009 |
| Reviewer: HermioneWeasley (Signed) |
- Even more OMG!!!! I know Snape doesn't find a cure, my sister told me, and I just don't know whether to carry on reading or not it's so sad!!!
Author's Response:
Oh please keep reading, the ending is sad, but it's also a very powerful piece of writing and before the end there are some very sweet moments between Lily, Sev, & Harry. especially at Harry's party. The ending will make you cry, I won;t lie to you, but it's one of my best tearjerkers. So please read some more!