Sequel to Broken Wings! Harry & Severus quest for the remaining Horcruxes. Can they fulfill the prophecy of Two Hawks Hunting and destroy Voldemort forever? AU, pre-HBP, HBP/DH noncompliant! No slash, mentor/guardian fic!
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Creature!fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Fernsfairie
Rated: T
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Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
Chapters: 63 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 May 2010 / 22 May 2009
Series: Broken Wings - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 33: The Mastery of Fear | 06 Oct 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- This is really a moving chapter about Albus finding himself, finally.
Author's Response: yeah it is and I think it was necessary to have it here, so people can see just what it takes for the old man to redeem himself.
| Title: Chapter 34: Dwellers In the Cruicible | 11 Oct 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- Brrr. I think I'd about pee my pants if Bella grinned at me like that! Sorry, too much information. Anyways, I like your portrayal of characters other than Harry and Sev.
Author's Response:
Ahh!
Actualy, I think Bella is scarier than Voldy. Thanks a lot and hope you like the next part.
| Title: Chapter 35: Danger Comes A Callin' | 14 Oct 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- I loved this chapter. Sev and Harry are a great two men to have in a story, working side by side. How much do you think this story is?
~Fern Rose
Author's Response: They really are and that's how I like them best. Um . . .I'm not sure how to answer your question. How much what do I think the story is? Longer? How many more chapters?
| Title: Chapter 36: Alerting the Order | 17 Oct 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- Answer to Harry's question: I think it's Hedwigs heart. :]
Remus and Greyback should fight, and Remus should kick some butt.
Sirius and Bella should fight, and Sirius should kill her. For sure.
Having a 3rd part with lots of fluff would be lovely. :D
~Fern Rose
Author's Response:
Thanks so much! I'm looking forward to writing that part.
And the final battle between all the rest of them.
You could be right. Maybe it's all their hearts.
| Title: Chapter 37: Hawks and Phoenixes | 23 Oct 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- HA! Greyback is DEAD! YES! Awesome chapter, I'm so glad. :]
~Fern Rose
Author's Response: He sure is! And now you can read all about who came back in the next chapter!
| Title: Chapter 38: Rebirth | 05 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- *sigh* I think he might be weak because it was given freely, and not stolen. :]
~Fern Rose
Author's Response: You could be right. That's a good guess.
| Title: Chapter 39: And A Familiar Shall Lead Them | 05 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- Thanks for the pop and popcorn (I couldn't resist putting that, sorry)! I like this chapter, much less depressing. ;p And Dumbles is alive! :D
~Fern Rose
Author's Response: You're welcome! yes it was and Dumbledore is alive! I really didn't want him to die.
| Title: Chapter 40: The Last Horcrux | 07 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- My one final battle request is Molly kill Bella. That makes SENSE! Just like in cannon, for once. xDD
~Fern Rose
| Title: Chapter 41: " . . .and teach death to die." | 10 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- Haha! Tommy getting hit in the face was diffidently the climax.
~Fern Rose
Author's Response: Thanks and yes, it was.
| Title: Chapter 42: Victory's Price | 14 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: Fernsfairie (Signed) |
- *sniff sniff* Albus is a muggle now? I really didn't see that coming. Huh. Well, anyways, I liked Sasha coming into play and helping Harry back. I think in the next few chapters, Harry should demand the wolfen be freed and given rights. Or, well, something similar.
Sasha really is one of my favorite characters. She courageous and knows what to do when the going gets tough.
~Fern Rose
Author's Response:
Yes he is but it was for a good cause. Sasha will be back in a future chapter.
That part will be coming up eventually, as soon as they can settle down in their home and get an appointment with Fudge,