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Victory-Starr [Contact] Better be Gryffindor!
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I love to write and edit. You know those tests you'd do in school where you had to look at 5 different words and pick the correctly spelled one? Or "fix" wrong sentences? I loved those. ;-)

I've always got numerous stories in the works. I absolutely adore music. It's right up there with oxygen.

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Could Have Been Better by beargirl1393 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 8]
Harry & Severus meet in a bar to discuss their similar childhoods.

Takes Place: 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Comrades Snape and Harry
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Neglect
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 13 May 2013 / 13 May 2013
Series: None - Challenges: Of Bars and Bruises
Title: Chapter 1: It Could Have Been Worse, But It Also Could Have Been Better 13 May 2013
Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed)
    Short, but a nice comparison between their childhoods and on their outlooks on life. It was also well written, so good job.

    By the way, you could just shorten the title to, "Could Have Been Better." I think the shorter title may be more appealing to potential readers.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the review and title suggestion :)


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