Gryffindor!
Post OoTP. Alternate Timeline. Harry's had a wretched summer. To top it off, Dumbledore insists he continue studies in Occlumency with the dreaded Severus Snape. Will he and Snape learn to get along?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Slytherin!Harry, SuperPower! Harry
Categories: Snape Equal Status to Harry > Foes Snape and Harry, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Victory-Starr
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 38 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2011 / 20 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 38 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Aug 2011 / 20 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 23: The best thing ever | 29 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- Whoo-hoo! Another chapter! Personally, I'd rather have shorter chapters more often. The story flows better for me, that way.
Oooh, I don't even know what to think. Harry's plans never go as well for him as he wishes or thinks they will. Something will go wrong. I wonder though if Sirius really is alive... should be interesting to find out!
Keep up the awesome work!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Yes I know, long gaps aren't the best thing in the world for any fic.
No, Harry's not got the best of luck, has he? We'll have to wait and see about Sirius...
| Title: Chapter 22: Familial influence | 28 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- Good chapter! I felt bad for Harry when he went to go stay in Snape's rooms, but at the same time I had to laugh at the image of him just stalking past Snape like that.
Also, poor boy and that darn crow! But at least that's more figured out! ;-)
Nice work!
Author's Response:
Yeah and there was no way that Snape was gonna let him just stride past without an explaination lol
At least he's got the spare room as an option:)
I'm glad you liked it and thanks loads for reviewing. The next chapter is now up.
| Title: Chapter 27: Omission | 19 Apr 2010 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- Good chapter. The struggle for Harry about what to say to Severus was interesting. And when he flinched, I was... awwww. Poor kid.
I can't wait to see what'll happen next! :D
Author's Response:
Thanks! Yeah he wanted to get Connor out of trouble but didn't really have much of a plan of how to do that, did he?
New chapter now up :) Sorry about the wait.
Dudley and Harry flee Vernon - to Severus. A different Tom Riddle, Petunia is good. Lucius and Draco are helpful. Albus is a bit misguided. The twins are only a year older than Harry, so I can make them non-Gryffindor.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 05 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- I keep seeing this story updated, but you, I have so many on my plate right now, I keep putting off reading it. Well, now seems like a good time.
I really LIKE it so far! I do think the two boys are acting a little old for their age, but other than that, it's enjoyable. I'm very eager to see how your portrayal of Snape will be. :D
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 05 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- Still enjoying this, but I still think the boys are acting about 5 years ahead of their age. It's a little distracting when reading, so hopefully that gets better.
I hate Vernon. But it's so refreshing to see a more caring Petunia though. Good job!
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 05 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- Awww, Yay! Severus to the rescue!!! :D
When Lily and James' will is discovered in the ruins of Godric's Hollow, what secrets will be revealed? Will two sworn enemies be able to lay aside their differences for the sake of a boy who desperately wants a family?
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jul 2012 / 04 Jul 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Sparks Will Fly
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jul 2012 / 04 Jul 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Sparks Will Fly
| Title: Chapter 4: Adrenalin Rush | 15 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- This seems like a really great start! You had my heart pounding in my chest when Harry was sneaking out at night. I'm looking forward to reading more!
Author's Response:
LOL! Harry will do that to you! Nerves of steel that boy.
Thanks for reviewing.
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After a series of tests to discover why Harry's magic has become erratic, a secret is revealed, one hidden for over fifteen years. But not all secrets disappear without consequence, leaving Severus to learn that potions cannot heal everything.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 45 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2012 / 29 Jul 2009
Series: Alea Iacta Est - Challenges: None
Chapters: 45 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2012 / 29 Jul 2009
Series: Alea Iacta Est - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 2: Floating Peacefulness | 18 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- This is an interesting start, but I am wondering what happened to Snape's spying position? I don't think you have made that clear yet, though it seems like something that should be explained right away.
Anyhow, good job and I'll keep reading. :D
Author's Response: I touched on it, but haven't gone into detail yet. Thanks for reminding me to include that soon. The details aren't that important to the storyline, but I'll be sure to address it. Thanks for reviewing, and I hope you enjoy the rest.
| Title: Chapter 3: 514 | 18 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- Oh gosh, this chapter was good! Somehow I can see Snape with all those pieces of parchment spread all around him. ;-)
That was a really cool thing, coming up with how to predict a wizard's magical power.
I could soooo relate to Harry when he was searching for his glasses, and panicking. I've been wearing glasses since I was 5 and feel lost without 'em. When I "misplace" them in the morning if I am staying over someplace new, I always freak out in that quick moment before I locate 'em. ;-)
Oh, and I just wanted to cry when Harry's wand didn't work for him towards the end there. Seriously. That was heartbreaking.
Great job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the lengthy review. I'm glad you can relate to Harry. I don't wear glasses myself, but I can imagine how freaked out I'd be if I couldn't see when I woke up in the morning. I was hoping that Harry's wand not working for him would be heartbreaking to you guys, the readers.
| Title: Chapter 4: Strange Occurrences | 18 Aug 2009 |
| Reviewer: Victory-Starr (Signed) |
- Yay orange juice!
I loved this part here:
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"Severus," McGonagall chided. "What if I didn't have his test graded yet?"
"I saw it sitting on your desk," Severus answered.
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That made me laugh out loud. ;-)
And I am not sure why, but for some reason I like the idea of Snape knowing how and being the one to take Harry's blood.
But... Leukemia? Oh. Crud.
Next chapter...
Author's Response: I love that you're loving certain parts and letting me know what they are. It helps me to know what I'm doing right or if you think that the same parts are cool that I do. I like Snape knowing how to take blood, too. He's super intelligent, and I can see him as a Renaissance man of sorts, interested in many subjects and because of his intellect pursuing them. I'm also glad you got to laugh before you go to the end. It might be the last time for a few chapters.