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Reviews by Ivy-Green
When Lily and James' will is discovered in the ruins of Godric's Hollow, what secrets will be revealed? Will two sworn enemies be able to lay aside their differences for the sake of a boy who desperately wants a family?
Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jul 2012 / 04 Jul 2009 Series: None - Challenges: Sparks Will Fly
Last chapter I forgot to mention that the little picture snake said something about "oh, well, you got Gryffindor from one parnet," or something like that, so...something's going on there I think... Oh! I wish I had more time to read this morning, but I have class! DX I'll have to read later. This is very good, and I give you a lemondrop! :) Author's Response: Oh, thanks for the lemondrop!!
Yeah, the Aurors are closing in on Sirius. Yeah, Fang wanted to play with Sirius I think, but Sirius is not taking a chance. Yeah. that was a very cryptic message from the snake, wasn't it?
Now, go to class! Talk to you later and thanks for reviewing.
And yay for friends! Ron and Hermione are just so funny when they argue. I really like that, for some odd reason. But, oh no! Now Harry DOES know something is up and he's gunna go off and try something! Very good Pandora! I'll try to read later today! Have a cookie! XD Author's Response: You must know that I have an incredible sweet tooth. Thank for the cookie!
Yeah, Harry reallly did need new clothes, didn't he? I love Hagrid too. He's like a big kid. Severus is certainly not wearing his heart on his sleeve, is he? Yeah, at least he's not being mean.
Oh, I love when Hermione and Ron bicker too. It shows how attracted they are to each other, even at that age.
Thanks Ivy. I want more chappies from you too. OOh, what kind of cookie?
But what's this? Harry's looking different? Hmmm...and the will of James and Lily suddenly appears? And Sirius Black is sniffing about? (literally)I totally enthralled here!! I'm gunna go one to the next chapter! This one was brilliant, by the way! ;D Author's Response: Thanks Ivy. Yeah, they are "sort" of bonding, aren't they? Snape wants to make sure that he has time alone with Harry to warn him about Sirius, but also to make sure that he gets all the proper supplies for his class.
Yeah, Harry is changing, and that's all I'll say!
Thanks Ivy. No candy this time, or cookies?
This was SO good! Snape's all protective and uncertain about Harry, and Harry's still having some fun even though he thinks he's going to die. And the Weasleys were such fun! XD Very very good! Oh, and this will stuff! How exciting! I can't wait til you update again! What will they find? Will it say that Snape's the dad? That would be good, cuz then Harry would know that he'd never have to go back to the Dursleys ever again! :D And what will they think when they hear that they'll need Sirius? When will Sirius come out?? This was very good and I'm all excited for the next chapter! And I have to give you fifty points for saying blue eyes are sexy! Thanks! (I have blue eyes XD) Actually, the whole little scene was great!! Please update when you can! Author's Response: Aw, now you know how I feel when I'm waiting for YOUR update!!!
Ffity points? Great. You are so generous. Yeah, I love blue eyes. My dad has them.
Yeah, I love the Weasleys, and especially the twins!! Thanks for your encouragement and I'm anxious for updates from you.
Okay, so now we have Professor Lupin added to the mix. Yay! And poor Harry fainting from Dementors. I've only fainted once when I was really sick, but I think I might have if faced with a Dementor *shivers* They remind me of RingWraiths form LOTR and they're creepy too! But it's going to be interesting with Lupin AND Snape wanting to watch out for Harry, and now Harry kinda knows Snape care for him (somewhat) and even saw him get mad at Draco. Ooo! I can't wait for the next chapter!I'm sorry I was so behind, but the past few weeks and all have been hard. But I really loved this and I hope you get better soon Pandora!!!! Author's Response: Thanks Ivy. I love Snape, and yeah that's a typical behaviour that we can imagine Snape doing. Yeah, Lupin is in the mix now, and it should be interesting to see how Snape and him will interact with regards to Harry. Harry always has been affected by Dementors throughout Canon, and book 3 sets the stage for that, doesn't it? They ARE pretty creepy, aren't they?
Thanks Ivy, and I really really really enjoyed your last chappie too, and I can't wait for more.
Oh and thanks. I'm tired of being sick. I've been off of work for a couple of days now, and my boss told me to take tomorrow off too, when he heard me coughing. I hate staying home. I get bored. But then again....I do have to finish up my fest story, so I can have more time to write.
This was a very good chapter! I loved every moment of it. I liked the interaction between the Trio, and Snape always keeping an eye on Harry. I also loved the line about Remus watching Snape and Harry at the feast. That was perfect. Oh and Dumbles with Fudge was great! XD Albus sure showed Fudge. I had to snicker the whole time. And the end with the fight, I love how Snape stayed Snape, but still showed Harry that he cared. (aww!) A wonderful chappie Pandora! I await more! :D Author's Response: Aw thanks Ivy. Aw, you are so sweet, and I'd love to have a new chappie from you too!!
Thanks. Snape is very confused about his own feelings towards Harry right now, but I think that deep down, he really is starting to care about Harry (Don't tell him that I said so!) Yeah, writing Dumbles and Fudge sure was fun.
Thaks again Ivy! After a series of tests to discover why Harry's magic has become erratic, a secret is revealed, one hidden for over fifteen years. But not all secrets disappear without consequence, leaving Severus to learn that potions cannot heal everything.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None Tags: Alternate Universe Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 45 - Completed: No - Updated: 23 May 2012 / 29 Jul 2009 Series: Alea Iacta Est - Challenges: None
Ahem, sorry about that. Anywho, so Sev blew is cover at the Ministry, eh? Hmm...and now Harry has to stay with Snape for the rest of the summer and he's lost so magic, eh? Hmm...sounds like a great plot to me! (with kittens!) This was really good! I liked the part where Snape went into his quarters and blew off Dobby, and didn't remember his name. That was great! XD And Sev's being a nice bastard...does that make sense? He wants to play mind games with Harry, but then helps the boy when he's so distressed...Wait a minute, does that mean he HAS a heart?! Holy crap! lol This was very good, and I can't wait until I have time to read more! Have a chocolate frog for doing so well! ^-^ Author's Response: Ivy, I was so surprised to wake up and see that you reviewed! I was like yay! Welcome to the wonderful joys of Flurry (the cat), which you'll learn about later. She has a story behind her, and I think you'll like it. I promise not to tell Sev that you said that was the cutest thing you've heard all week. lol. ;) I don't think he'd appreciate it. Harry hasn't much lost his magic, but it's just not working at the moment... Sev totally has a heart and you'll see more of it as you read. There's quite a few twists waiting for you, and I should be writing the next one right now but there's a program about Tolkien and LOTR on History right now. I am totally in geek heaven for the hour. lol. Thanks and I can't wait to see what you think as you read more.
But HA! Harry's acting like a drunk with that potion! *giggles* That must be good stuff. Maybe I could have some...? lol Not, I can't drink that, I need to work...unfortunately *grumble* But that scene was classic Snape! :D Too bad Harry had to go and fall to ruin Snape's threat. HA! Aww! Sev's such a sweety, isn't he! A big ol' prikly teady bear! XD I loved the line when he "refused to tuck in James Potter's son" and that whole schpeel. That was great. And HAHAHA! The vampire thing was hilarious! I literally burst out laughing. (good thing my roomate wasn't in ^-^) Snape with the kitty was just. so. gosh. darn. CUTE! But I felt so bad when he said that his cat liked Harry more then him...actually, my own cat is kinda like Flurry, but his name's Viktor and he's gray and white, and boy could I use Snape to teach me that de-lint spell! And oh no, here comes Dumbles to start something. But I'm with Sev on the lemon tarts. I only really like lemonade and these weird girl scout lemon cookies. But lemon tarts always look so good, but they just never taste good to me...*ramble ramble* Oh, and I like the "Potter puzzle" XD Nice aliteration! And now Sev's interested and he's gunna find something out about Harry, and he's gunna start to feel bad for him and he already in a twisted, denile, kinda way likes him, and, and...I'll stop now. Sorry for the crzy long review. I'm just trying to hold off on studying for another minute or so. But this was great and I love Snape with his cat! XD So cute! Ten points to you for that! Author's Response: It wasn't as interesting as I had hoped. *sighs* Not one mention of Legolas or Thranduil the whole hour! It was Frodo this and Frodo that. Yes, I'm biased when it comes to the elves. lol. They're my favorite part of Tolkien's whole mythology. Well at least that meant I didn't have to complain about the "actor" they chose to represent Legolas that way. Good luck on your psych exam. I love psychology, especially abnormal psychology. Although you're probably still on the boring theories and histories. Blah. That's not the fun stuff. ;) Harry just can't listen to Snape, even when it comes to something as simple as returning to Gryffindor Tower. lol. I'm sure Snape wasn't amused. I'm glad to hear you literally burst out laughing. Remember that because you'll need Kleenex later on. My cat doesn't like anybody. Well, most of the time anyway. Her name is Roxie and she's a very pretty tortoiseshell and white cat, but she's mean and bites. lol. Although, she's become more mellow and actually jealous since we've gotten our puppy. Dumbledore is there to start something though he'll have more to say later on... Sev is interested and you'll be surprised with what he finds. Yay, I get ten points! Thanks!
So, on to the real review. Let's see...hm...Sev's pretty powerful, isn't he? Wow! A big ol' 908. somethingerother That's great for him! No wonder he can be arrogent and get away with it! XD And Harry seems, seemed to be getting up there too. But why is his magic slipping? Hmmm...This is a tough one. Oh my! Sev's scared! He's worried! He's, he's...mad at his cat? Hahaha! That's great! Poor guy, doesn't like that his kitty is sleeping on Potter. Poor guy. I'd be mad too. And now he goes to Poppy...Aww! He's so worried! O! Now he's really scared and doesn't want to admit it. And he LIED to make HARRY feel better? *falls out of chair* Ha! He DOES have a BIG heart! HAHAHAHAHA!Poor Harry though. I feel bad for him. My favorite line was: "Harry wonder if this were how potions ingredients felt before being chopped up by Snape." That was just too perfect! XD Great job! I loved it! I'll try to read more later today. Have a cookie! :D Author's Response: Sev is really powerful. He just has that powerful air about him, and the guy survived being a spy for years. That alone should show he's a powerful wizard. I don't know if he was mad at Flurry, perhaps a bit more jealous than mad. lol. ;) Severus knew Harry wasn't just normal sick, but sick sick. He just didn't know what it was. I think any adult that wasn't a right jerk would try not to worry a child in that circumstance because it could turn out to be nothing or something minor. Not to mention that if a child even an older teen sees an adult worried, the child will pick up on that. I'm happy to hear you liked that line. It is so something that Harry would think. Yay, I get a cookie!
But other than the ending, I liked the image of Snape as a doctor. I'd like a check up from Snape please! ;D Think you could get me in? lol No, but he's been very good so far, and now Harry's gunna have to depend on him I think. Oh!!! I want Harry to get better! Will Snape invent a potion to help cue him? He's got the time now and all... This was very good and I give your twenty points for the shocker at the end. *phew* (I started to yell at the computer there) And I'm off to read the next chappie! Author's Response: Yay, I surprised you! I think I took everyone by surprise on that one. You'll see how it'll all start to play out as you read further. It definitely won't be Snape inventing a magic potion to cure him. That's the easy way out, and I have no intention of that. Plus this way you get a ton more angst. Snape isn't so much a full doctor, but he has the necessary skills to do many basic things. I always envisioned he'd have some Muggle first aid skills since he survived so long as a spy. It just seems right. Twenty points, wow! Please, don't yell at your computer too much. lol. You wouldn't want to harm it. |
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