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I have been a frequent visitor and reviewer here for quite some time before finally deciding to just go with it and join!  I've read a whole ton of stuff on this site, to the point where I wonder if I truly have a life. 

The story has begun, everyone!  I am very excited!  I have a lot of research to finish up still, but once it is organized into a Bible format (if you will) writing should be very speedy.  Reviews feed my brain, so be kind.  I welcome constructive criticism, so don't be shy!  Just don't bash me.  It isn't nice.  Thanks. 

I review when I read (just have not had a lot of time to do that, actually...hmm, I might take more time to do some reading so that I can review...), so please be kind enough to do the same.  Thank you...

Just throwing it out there, I am a Slytherin, and very much loyal to my House!  And I find the Malfoy family completely fascinating.

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In a story that spans two decades, Lily and Severus look for a way to control the powers of the Dark Mark after Lily's life is threatened by Eileen Prince. Seventeen years later, Harry realized he has no idea who he is. SS/LE H/G RL/NT

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Death, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 55 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Apr 2008 / 18 Nov 2007
Series: Lily's Charm - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 55: Chapter 55: Echoes 16 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    I recently joined the site, and wanted to let you know that this story was the first one I stumbled across on this site. And I loved every chapter. LOVED IT! You inspired me to join and then to write my own story for this site. Thanks for a great story that has inspired me to write my own! I cannot praise this story enough! Thank you for it! It is wonderful!

    Author's Response: Thank you very much!  I'm so glad you liked the story.  It was my first fanfic and has given me a lot of happiness.  And I'm tickled that I could inspire you to write a story.  :o)  Thanks so much for the kudos; they are always greatly appreciated.

Harry gets rescued from the Dursley's by his favorite superhero!

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Fic Fests > #6 Winter
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 09 Jan 2009 / 09 Jan 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: A Conversation with Batman 22 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    Aww! This was hilarious! And so, so adorable! Batman! HAHA! That is so funny! That's all I can say, I loved it. So cute! Okay...That made my day.

    Author's Response:

    Hey, thanks for stopping by to read something of mine!  I'm glad you enjoyed the cutesy fluff I created in this fic.  Lol, Snape will always be "Batman" to me!  Thanks for reading!

    -P.G. 


When Lily and James' will is discovered in the ruins of Godric's Hollow, what secrets will be revealed? Will two sworn enemies be able to lay aside their differences for the sake of a boy who desperately wants a family?

Takes Place: 4th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Azkaban Character, Runaway, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: No - Updated: 16 Jul 2012 / 04 Jul 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Sparks Will Fly
Title: Chapter 1: In the Dark of Night 28 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    A very intriguing start. Your Severus is wonderfully canon and yet not. Off to read some more.

    Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm trying to keep him in character, but have him soften gradually up to Harry. Sometimes it's hard to find a balance.

Title: Chapter 2: Where is Home? 28 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    Harry's views on adults is very much what I think he would think. I can see him being all suspicious of them...all the time. Poor Harry is so jittery about everyone finding out about his injuries. You give nice subtle similarities to Snape and Harry, which are nice. And once again, Snape being manipulated into housing Harry. Leave it to meddling Dumbledore. And leave it to Severus to use veiled threats to conceal his concern. My favorite sentence from Snape's point of view: "Was he confunded?" *giggles*

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, Harry definitely doesn't trust adults, and is very suspicious of even small acts of kindness.  What's really sad, is that Harry sees his abuse as a weakness, and he's ashamed, but in reality he's not  the one who should be ashamed.    Oh thanks. I do think that Snape and Harry have a lot in common, even if they'd never admit it.  LOL!  Dumbles is VERY manipulative, isn't he?  But at least he's forcing these two to interact, and don't forget, he knows more about Snape's own childhood, and maybe he thinks that Snape has some insight to offer Harry, and he knows that if Snape would only let down his defences, then the two of them could begin to tolerate each. and let go of some of their hate.

     

    Oh of course, Snape is never going to let on how concerned he actually is about Harry, and how he feels about Harry's abuse.

    Maybe Snape WAS confunded! LOL!  He's still wondering about that.


Title: Chapter 3: Changed Perceptions 28 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    I laughed when Snape thought that Harry blew up Petunia! Ooh! Like the line about Harry looking like a ghost from Snape's past. That made a nice, creepy, but very awesome mental image in my brain. Oh dear, there goes Harry thinking about the Invisibility Cloak...I have a feeling Snape will catch him. Hmm...I'm confused like Harry about that snake's cryptic words...Does that snake know something? Slippery little buggers, those snakes. Yeah, I agree with Harry about Snape's quarters having a rather Gryffindor theme going on there. Snape has a TV!? *snickers just a bit* That is precious! And he sees the "Grim's" eyes! Wow! Good tracking ability on that black dog...*glares* And there he goes with the cloak. He's either going to get caught before he gets out of Snape's quarters or once he gets back...Tempers will fly.

    If I have reviewed before, so sorry. I'm trying to catch up with the reading of stories I like, since I have fallen behind in reviewing...So, if I am repeating anything...So sorry.

    Author's Response:

    Yeah, that thought just popped into my mind. I'm sure that Snape would not have been too upset if Snape had blown up Petunia! Oh thanks.  I just thought that the similarities between Harry and Snape's childhoods was just too real for Snape to ignore, and he kept slipping back into the past.  Thank goodness that Snape doesn't know about the cloak!  If Harry's not careful though, he'll find out soon enough.  Hmm...maybe if Harry is sneaky enough and luck is on his side, he'll escape without Snape being the wiser. But then again...this is Snape we're talking about.  Yeah, Snape has a tv and some other Muggle artefacts  I don't know why, but I just thought after seeing HBP and Snape living in Spinner's End, which is in a Muggle neighbourhood, I bleieve, that Snape had a Muggle father, and I could see him owning some Muggle objects.

     

    Yeah, that dog (Sirius) is tricky, isn't he!  

     Oh, I don't mind at all, even if you had reviewed twice. I'm honoured that you took the time to review at all! Thanks again. And I love your story by the way!


Title: Chapter 4: Adrenalin Rush 28 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    OOh, I thought Harry was going to get caught outside of his room for sure! Did Harry just dream that Snape was a vampire!? Aww...THat makes me scared but amused all at once. Haha! How paternal! "Do your homework!" I love it! I laughed out loud at this sentence: "So, that was how Harry found himself with his face smushed up against the large man's broad chest, in a one-armed hug by the kind-hearted giant, the first day that Harry was allowed to resume normal activity." The image in my brain was like a cartoon and so funny! Snape would make this rigid every-minute-planned-out type of schedule. He so would. Dragupines sound AWESOME! Wow, his first day outside and the black dog gets closer and closer. Things are getting very intense and mysterious...LOVING IT! I can't believe he called him a git out loud, and where he could hear him! Wow! Bad Harry! Bad! Ooh, very interested in that last bit there.

    Author's Response:

    Harry escaped by the seat of his pants, didn't he? LOL!  Yeah, Harry was experiencing his fears about Snape and that the man would abuse himn, just like his uncle had, and it manifested itself in Harry's dreams. It's just really all Harry projecting his fears into his nightmares.  Yeah, let's not let Snape know that he is being paternal!

     

    I always loved the idea of Harry, with his face pressed up into Hagrid's broad chest. Hagrid is such a softy and cares very much about Harry.

     

    Yeah, Sirius, or "Padfoot" is one smart Canine!  Snape is going to make sure that Harry stays out of trouble and Snape's way of doing that, is by keeping  him occupied.

     

    I don't know why, but the image of a part dragon, and part porcupine just popped into my head. It is something like Hagrid would own, isn't it?  He would think that something so dangerous is cute, wouldn't he?

     

    Harry has no sense of preservation, does he? He should remember that Snape has the hearing of a bat, as well as looking like one.. Yeah naughty Harry.


Title: Chapter 5: Friends and Enemies 28 Aug 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    *Imagines Harry writing the lines about whining* Hilarious! You manage to add just enough humor throughout this story that it makes me grin like an idiot! Hmm, his appearance is shifting...Interesting, interesting...especially with Snape somewhat wishing that Harry was his son...And Hermione noticed. Something's up...Laughed at Snape saying in no uncertain terms what to do with Potter's money! Oh, he let it slip out to Ron and Hermione. Poor Harry! Ooh, very nice how Harry learns about Sirius a little here rather than in Hogsmeade. Nice twist of events there. I'm very much enjoying this story!

    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much for your lovely reviews, and I promise when I'm not so zonked from working all day, I'll leaving longer ones for you.

     

    Oh thanks. I always like to try to insert a little humour, so that (hopefully) my story is not too depressing, especially when you are dealing with a serious subject matter like child abuse. I want the story to be serious, but not so heavy that it's hard to read.

     

    I think that Severus' wish that Harry were HIS son, not James', took him my surprise. He really doesnt' want to feel that way. He'd give anything to go back and change the hands of time, but he's seeing Harry in a different light these days, and he's starting to think more of Liily everytime he sees Harry, and it confuses him that all these feelings are coming out.

     

    LOL, yeah, can you just picture him telling James to stuff his money, where the sun don't shine!

    I don't think that Harry meant to tell Ron and Hermione abou the abuse, but perhaps his subconcious was a better judge of the fact that he needed to confide in his friends and that the support from his friends will help him heal.

     

    Acitually, in the book Harry learns about Sirius in the parlour at the Leaky Cauldron. I've taken bits from the movie, in this story and bits from the book. This scene actuallly has some direct quotes from the book about the conversation between Molly and Arthur arguing about whether to tell Harry, but I've added some dialogue of my own to include Severus in the scene to make it look as though he was there in the original scene. I'm hoping that it worked.

     

    Thanks so much, and I'm so enjoying Sacrifices as well. It's so well written, and I always love a younger Harry, or should I say "Tevin".

     

     


Title: Chapter 6: Cat and Rat and Dog 14 Sep 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    The description of Scabbers was really vivid and very good. Even Harry thinks the rat is creepy! Go Harry!

    I still think it's funny that Ron brought his rat to Egypt with him. *giggles*

    Love how Hagrid sent him the book. That book would scare the bejeeses out of me! *snort* Harry askingn Snape to the Ice Cream parlor! *giggle* The image of Snape licking an ice cream cone is hilarious to me. I really don't know why! It just is.

    Almost everything Snape says in this chapter makes me smile, for no other reason that I can so see him say it!

    OOH! A WILL! OH MAN! OH, OH, OH! I am very excited! So mysterious! So intriguing! I WANT MORE! Very awesome chapter!

    Author's Response:

    Oh thank you. Well some of the events did happen in Canon, I just embellished them a bit. 

    Yeah, even Hagrid's books are made of wild beasts.

    Yeah, I think that when the shopping trip is finished, I think that Snape deserves a large ice-cream sundae with lots of chocoalate syrup, whipped cream and cherries on top.  Damned..."I" want one now!

    Oh thank you RK, and I'm looking forward to more from you too!


Title: Chapter 7: Never Judge a Book By its Cover 25 Oct 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    Love, love Snape talking about eating sweet-loaded ice cream! I can see him say that! That was hilarious! I love your characterization of Ron. He's so Ron, but more, and so funny in his own grumbling, whining sort of way.

    Poor Snape, feeling all conflicted. And Harry was adorable trying to manage to say thank you to him before he went to bed.

    HAHA! Fred and George with the badge! I love those two.

    Well, this is interesting. This idea with the will is getting more and more interesting with each chapter. I am so intrigued. Sorry I somehow missed this chapter...*reads the next one*

    Author's Response:

    Hee hee. Snape would not want children any more hyper than necessary, now would he?

    Thanks. I'm just really enjoying writing Ron. Oh, some of the dialogue was taken from POA, and I just elaborated on it, so the idea of the badge was JK's, not mine. But I didn have fun playing around with Ron's reactions.

     

    There are more suprises with the will to come.

     

    Don't worry about it. You read it now! :)  Thanks for reviewing.


Title: Chapter 8: Bells and Whistles 25 Oct 2009
Reviewer: Raven Knight (Signed)
    Oh dear. You start off with a sentence about Snape that almost made me spit out my hot apple cider! Ha!

    YAY! LUPIN! I love Lupin! "You don't think that he's died, do you?" Ron cracks me up in your story! I love your writing of Ron. (Hope that when I get to Ron, I can write him even half as well as you can.)

    Ooh, Lupin with fire in his hands! Cool! No lumos charm for you, Lupin! You play with fire! *growl*

    "I didn't poison the chocolate you know." Lupin...I just love Lupin. Him and his...*cough* monthly-cycle chocolate therapy.

    Like Lupin watching Snape interact with Harry curiously. Perceptive little bugger, isn't he?

    "or even Invisibility Cloaks!" I burst out laughing there. Yeah, they're all onto Harry's schemes. Do they have a checklist or something? Ways that Harry Potter Sneaks Around and how to Prohibit them. Poor Harry.

    WHOA! ANd now we have Dumbledore named as executor of the Potter home!? Oh my gosh! This is very exciting! I am so curious about this will...so curious.

    Author's Response:

    Oh well, I really can't take credit for those lines, as they were JK's ideas. I only added on to the dialogue, or changed it around a bit.

     The fire was JK's idea, but I wrote the thing abot it peeking through his fingers, because I thought that it was cool too, and I was imagining it in my mind.

     Poor Harry indeed. I think that he is going to have a hard time sneaking around with both Dumbledore and Snape watching his back.

     

    I hope that I can write the rest of the story to live up to that excitement!!  Thanks, some answers will be answered....eventually. (Evil, aren't I?)



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