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A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help!

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Harry has always wished for someone to care, for a family of his own. On his birthday, he finds out that a certain Potions Master is his father, but Severus has finally settled into life with his other son. Can Harry finally have the family he has longed for, or will he always be the unwanted one?

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Mar 2020 / 17 Mar 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 15: Settling Back In 02 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Good luck with the exams I'm sure you will be fine. Loved the chapter and it had a good fuzzy feel, thank you for updating

Title: Chapter 20: Pieces of Time 11 Sep 2018
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Loved this chapter and you made their reconciliation seem so natural and sweet thank you

Title: Chapter 14: Through the Storm 19 Aug 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you so much a very clever way to resolve the curse and a wonderful chapter.

Title: Chapter 1: Summer of Misery 22 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very painful start but well done thank you

Title: Chapter 2: The Letter 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a great chapter. I loved the photos very sweet.

    Author's Response: Thanks for the reviews! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

Title: Chapter 3: Upending Revelations 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very good twist with Severus rejecting Harry even when told the truth thank you

Title: Chapter 4: Discussions to Tantrums 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very good, I was not sure if Clarice was a witch or not before this but I suppose she must be a pure blood. Does Kieran go to Hogwarts and what year is he in?

    Author's Response: Yes he will be for the coming school year for his fourth year.

Title: Chapter 5: The Final Departure 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Dumbledore is so annoying leaving Harry with people who don't want him! Thank you a good chapter

Title: Chapter 6: A Prince's Manor 25 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    A good cliffie thank you

Title: Chapter 7: Shattered Expectations 31 Mar 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    How did he know it was Harry? Loved the chapter but found the mix up of tenses a little difficult to read.

    Author's Response: Thanks. I edited the chapter so that it was more clear it was Harry who was having the nightmare. What mix up of tenses are you referring to?


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