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A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help!

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Harry has always wished for someone to care, for a family of his own. On his birthday, he finds out that a certain Potions Master is his father, but Severus has finally settled into life with his other son. Can Harry finally have the family he has longed for, or will he always be the unwanted one?

Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Angry, Snape Comforts, Snape is Cruel, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Mean, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 22 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Mar 2020 / 17 Mar 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: On the Edge 05 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a very well thought out chapter and another cliffie

Title: Chapter 9: The Unmasked Truth 18 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very well written and thought out thank you

    Author's Response: Thank you!

Title: Chapter 10: Facing Consequences 26 Apr 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a very sensitive chapter.

Title: Chapter 13: The Curse 27 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very dramatic and very well written thank you

Title: Chapter 11: The Little Things 15 May 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Great ending thank you so much for updating

    Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 12: A Test of Strength 04 Jun 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you a great chapter very tense and a good ending

Title: Chapter 16: Force of Habit 22 Oct 2016
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very good chapter as they are not rushing into a father/son relationship but still hesitant towards each other thank you so much for updating.

Title: Chapter 19: Temptations 07 Mar 2018
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you for updating and not abandoning the story as I feared.

    Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I don't plan on abandoning the story. Life just got a bit too busy, but now I'm trying to get back into things, so hopefully next chapter will come much sooner than this one.

Title: Chapter 21: All You Left Behind 28 Feb 2019
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    So sweet but so sad. I had tears for the last scene, thank you so much for the lovely chapter when you are so busy.

    Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you liked it!

Title: Chapter 22: Home 29 Mar 2020
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you for continuing your excellent story. I thought their conversation was well done and typical of Harry.


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