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Book 2 of "Right in Front of Me" series. Voldemort is gaining power & Harry is sure that Draco is not to be trusted. Can Snape protect the dark haired boy he's come to love as a son, while shielding his precious family from the evils closing in on them? (HBP Year 6 - AU-ish w/ OC, but follows canon. Severitus - mentor/adoption - mentions sexual abuse, but no details - NO SLASH!)
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Fmh
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 23 Mar 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very good blend of cannon and your story thank you
Author's Response: My pleasure!! ^_^ Even though I have a few OC's, I'm trying to keep my stories as canon as possible!!
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 04 Mar 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you so much. I started reading chapter 6 and realised that I had missed out chapter5! So glad I went back as I loved the presents.
Author's Response: ^_^ Thank you!! I'm glad you were able to go back and enjoy it. I loved writing about the party.
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 08 Mar 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you a lovely chapter. I hope we still get to see Jillian during the school year
Author's Response: I plan on it!! Although I have to figure out where I'm going to fit her and Celine McGonagall into the story, as I'm trying to stay as canon as possible. Remus and the girls are the one area that I said, "To heck with that!" lol. I have plans... ^_-
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 14 Feb 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thought you must have a reason for that introduction. Thank you a lovely party chapter
Author's Response: Yeah, this book seems to be going a lot slower than the last one because I want to make sure that it's as canon as possible. That means a lot of research, and a lot of flipping back and forth between books - but it's worth it, in my opinion. ^_^ Thank you for being a loyal reader!!
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 01 May 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Excellent chapter I loved their confrontation very AU and cannon. Thank you
Author's Response: Awww, thank you!! I'm really excited to see where this goes, as I continually get new ideas to bring JK's amazing canon to life in a new way. Thanks for the review!! :)
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 12 Dec 2016 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Wow welcome back! A very angsty chapter as a starter, it's going to be a bumpy ride I think. Thank you for a great chapter
Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the late response. It's not often that I get time to actually sit down on the computer!! But I just wanted to say thank you for reading, and for such a nice review!! It's DEFINITELY going to be a bumpy ride - and I hope you enjoy all of it. ^_-
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 27 Dec 2016 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you a lovely chapter
Author's Response: Thank you for a lovely review. ^_^
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 27 Dec 2016 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- A wonderful ending can't wait to read the next chapter, hint, hint.
Hope all goes well with the operation on your husband's leg.
Author's Response: First off, I'm SO sorry for the late response. Without my extended family nearby, I don't often get time to myself to actually sit on the computer (this is the longest I've sat at my computer desk in MONTHS! lol). Anyway, thank you for the sweet words!! And thank you for your patience on the chapters... It got a little hectic there for a while, but I seem to be doing better now (about a chapter every 7-10 days). I honestly wish I was an octopus - I would get SO much more done everyday!! ^_- But this story is very high on my priority list. Thanks again for sticking with me!!
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 01 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very good re-telling thank you
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 01 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you a great blend of cannon and au
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like it!! I am trying to keep it as close to canon as possible. :) I hope you continue to enjoy it!! XOXO