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Book 2 of "Right in Front of Me" series. Voldemort is gaining power & Harry is sure that Draco is not to be trusted. Can Snape protect the dark haired boy he's come to love as a son, while shielding his precious family from the evils closing in on them? (HBP Year 6 - AU-ish w/ OC, but follows canon. Severitus - mentor/adoption - mentions sexual abuse, but no details - NO SLASH!)
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Fmh
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 02 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- What a lovely lot of chapters, you are spoiling us! Great chapter thank you so much
Author's Response: Awww, well thank you for reading and reviewing!! This story would be nothing without you guys!! :)
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 10 Oct 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Excellent chapter I love Lilly
Author's Response: Thank you so much!! I adore her too, but I'm a bit biased. ;) I'm always happy to hear when my readers enjoy a particular character as much as I do.
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 19 Nov 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- I don't usually like graphic love scenes but you are right he needed this in order to gain control of his emotions and life. Thank you for a brilliant chapter
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 03 Feb 2018 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very good showing the complexities of Severus' situation thank you
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 14 Feb 2018 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Thank you for updating your excellent story. I love your blend of cannon and au for sixth year.
| Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 | 21 Apr 2018 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- As damaged as he is it was only a matter of time before he snapped. He was told to get a detention and that gave him the permission to be and to show all his uncertainties and rage that he could. In my book Severus asked for it. Thank you for an excellent chapter
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 21 Apr 2018 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Wonderful chapter thank you so much for sharing your. Thoughts and experiences with us. I send all the healing thoughts I can to you and your family
Something has been found on the Hogwarts Express which shouldn't be brought into a school. What will the Professors do about it? And how do they work out who it belongs to?
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Nov 2016 / 27 Nov 2016
Series: None - Challenges: Drugs Bust
Chapters: 1 - Completed: No - Updated: 27 Nov 2016 / 27 Nov 2016
Series: None - Challenges: Drugs Bust
| Title: Chapter 1: The Search | 08 Sep 2018 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Loved the story thank you
| Title: Chapter 1: The Search | 30 Nov 2016 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- Very good writing and characterisation thank you. I would love to read more
Originally by MusicMelis om Fanfiction.net After Harry runs away from his relative's during the summer and gets in a fight the first day of school, Snape argues that he needs to be watched more and have more guidance. His argument backfires when Dumbledore suggests Harry be in Slytherin for a term. Will Harry see another side to the Slytherins? And will Snape finally see the real Harry? Third Year. Mentor/Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Stepfather Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jan 2017 / 07 Dec 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 17 Jan 2017 / 07 Dec 2016
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 | 22 Jan 2017 |
| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed) |
- I love the interaction between Harry and the Slytherins it is very believable. I have also had the same issues with Dumbldore, he should have intervened and his remark to Harry in book 5 about Harry not being spoilt and pampered made me mad. Ron and Hermione come from loving homes and children find it hard to realise that not all adults are the same. Great chapter thank you
Author's Response: I must agree on all points that you have addressed (I originally had a long, detailed response, but I accidentally reloaded the page and lost it, whoops.) You flatter me, for I am not the created of this work but simply a messagnger, spreading this great tale.