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A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help!

i used to read on Fanfic but can't leave reviews there  although I can log in! I love to review good well written stories but I do not flame!

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Snape wasn't mad at Harry; he was mad that no one had tried to help Harry after seeing Cedric's death.

Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Injured!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Bullying, Character Death, Neglect, Violence
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 04 Aug 2017 / 03 Aug 2017
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 08 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you this needed to be said the lack of comfort and counselling for Harry was appalling

    Author's Response: Thank you. I secretly think it's the real reason Snape was so mad in that scene.

SEQUEL to “The Last Will and Testament of Lily Evans” and “Lily’s Last Wish.” Harry is kidnapped and tortured, and Snape is left to try and pick up the pieces and prepare Harry for the final battle. This is the third story in the series.

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts
Tags: Injured!Harry, Kidnapped!Harry
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Unofficially teaching Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: No - Updated: 26 Jun 2018 / 17 Aug 2017
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 28 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Oh dear just when it was getting better for Harry another flashback! Thank you for a great chapter

Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 28 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Thank you an extremely interesting idea and chapter

Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 21 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Great start thank you

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 28 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Good tension and very dramatic thank you

Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 29 Aug 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    What a cliffie! Thank you, a lot of tension and of course lots of angst a brilliant chapter

Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 03 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    How indeed? A great chapter thank you

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 05 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Loved how Severus gave Harry his independance but cared for him at the same time, very sensitive. What a contrast to Dumbledore! Thank you a good chapter

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 14 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very tense but lovely chapter thank you

Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 14 Sep 2017
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
    Very well written but hard to bear Harry's pain! Thank you


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