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Caught Between by TheLostBoys333 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 75]

In his 4th year, Harry feels like he has lost everything while also fighting for his life in the Triwizard Tournament. However, he may find that, perhaps, he has actually found everything he has always wanted. AU



Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Depression Recovery
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Bashing, Character Death, Violence
Chapters: 34 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 11 Nov 2023 / 09 Nov 2023
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    A dramatic scene in the entrance hall and no one noticed an escaped convict? I find this a bit unlikely even for AU but a good chapter thank you



    Author's Response:

    Yeah, sorry, I didn't think about that when I was writing.


Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Oh I'm willing Harry to tell Lucius and Severus what he has seen! Thank you a great chapter


Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Interesting discussions thank you


Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Poor Harry and the others, being friendly with Harry leads to trouble for everyone. 


Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Very dramatic thank you


Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Lovely hopeful chapter I really think Harry may start to trust thank you


Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Thank you I love a healing chapter 


Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Oh dear Harry's temper getting the better of him again


Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 26 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Thank you a lot of plot movement. 


Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 27 19 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    A lot of lovely angst here thank you



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