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A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help! i used to read on Fanfic but can't leave reviews there although I can log in! I love to review good well written stories but I do not flame! [Report This]
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While the wizarding world struggles with the return of Voldemort, Harry struggles with the death of Sirius and his own out of control magic. His summer before 6th year is unlike any other as he trains alongside the Order, grows close to Severus Snape, of all people, and learns of an unfathomable fate assigned to one Draco Malfoy, a fate he is determined to stop. As the world falls apart, it seems Harry's life may finally come together.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape Disciplines , Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Abuse Recovery, Adoption, Alternate Universe, Animagus!Harry, Depression Recovery
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5
| 21 Dec 2023
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Oh dear you don't like Harry to have his friends. I can understand it as a plot device but Harry needs his friends and although it's good that he turns to Severus he also needs Ron and Hermione. This is just my opinion and I don't mind for one story but it is every story.
Having said that this is a brilliant story and I love it
Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying the story regardless and I respect your opinion, but Harry will still have friends and does always have other friends in my stories. I don't do this because I don't like to Harry to have his friends; I just prefer to explore other characters and the relationships Harry can have with them instead. Ron and Hermione don't have to be the only people he's ever friends with. He should have been closer to others in canon, in my opinion. In this one, as I've said, he's going to become good friends with Draco and Luna instead. Fanfiction is typically AU in some respect for a reason. I'm not the only one to frequently exchange Ron and Hermione for other characters. Ron and Hermione aren't the only other characters that exist that can be Harry's friends. Sorry. *shrugs*
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6
| 01 Jan 2024
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Thank you for replying to me and of course I accept it is your universe and you can do whatever you want in your stories. I feel bad about dismissing Hermione as she never let Harry down in cannon and was always with him.
This chapter is very well done and I like the idea of extra courses thank you
One to defeat fear. One to discover truth. One to feel love. One to accept life. Each will bear a sword and embody the essence of Hogwarts. Together as one, the Four Heroes of Hogwarts will unite the world against the true Dark Lord. Together as one, the Heroes will defeat the binding darkness and restore Hogwarts to the wonder her creators intended her to be.
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape Disciplines , Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: A Castle Changing
| 01 Dec 2023
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| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: A Gaunt Past
| 03 Dec 2023
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| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Recognition
| 03 Dec 2023
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| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A Game to Die For
| 03 Dec 2023
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| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Memories of Visions Unseen
| 03 Dec 2023
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Brilliant chapter thank you so much, the sense of danger and threat is very spooky
| Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Cracks in the Foundation
| 03 Dec 2023
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| Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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You are building the tension to breaking point, thank you so much for a wonderful story
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Searching for Memory
| 03 Dec 2023
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| Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Failing Magic
| 03 Dec 2023
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All beginning to come together, like Severus, Harry and Draco should, thank you
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