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It all started with an unexpected meeting at King's Cross at the end of Harry's first year. The next thing Severus Snape knows he's stuck with the Potter brat.



Takes Place: 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Out of Character Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape Disciplines , Snape is Angry
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Feb 2024 / 15 Jan 2024
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Directions and Questions 21 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I love their communications, I don't think they are having a conversation yet, Severus's thought are very funny. Thank you.



    Author's Response:

    Thank you! This is really my first attempt at humor in writing so I'm glad it's working! 


Title: Chapter 4: The Sagacity of Filius Flitwick 21 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I loved the asides and misconceptions, great chapter thank you



    Author's Response:

    Thank you for reading and commenting! <3


Title: Chapter 5: The Steadfastness of Pomona Sprout 21 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I think both conversations were very helpful in their way. Thank you



    Author's Response:

    I agree! Snape needs both types of conversations. He's rather high maintance. :P 


Title: Chapter 6: Going Back 21 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Oh dear I don't think the next month will be agreeable thank you



    Author's Response:

    It's... going to be a month to remember. Lol! Thank you for reading and reviewing! 


Title: Chapter 7: The Shrewdness of Minerva McGonagall 24 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Thank you a wonderful chapter, I hope we lear what her secret is



    Author's Response:

    *hangs head in shame* 

    I'm sorry. But I didn't work that secret into the story. I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter, however, Thank you so much! 


Title: Chapter 8: A Warm Dursley Welcome 24 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I loved the room changes, Tuney will have a fit if she finds out!

    Thank you an amusing chapter



    Author's Response:

    Thank you for reading and reviewing! 


Title: Chapter 9: Switching Places 24 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I'll be devasted when we finish!

    lovely mix of humour and pathos in this chapter thank you



    Author's Response:

    Humor is not something I'm used to writing. Lol. I've tried to keep it balanced, but I have to say I've failed from time to time. 


Title: Chapter 10: A Plan in Action 24 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I love how Severus dealt with Dudley. Harry is right it's not nice but great fun and what they deserve. 



    Author's Response:

    It was fun. I'm sorta sad to have ended that bit. 


Title: Chapter 11: Remorse 24 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I didnt think I'd ever say this but I felt a bit sorry for Petunia at the end of the chapter but then I remembered how she acted towards Harry and that faded a bit.

    Thank you for a wonderful chapter 



    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you felt sorry for her a minute at least! LOL. I'm absolutely not saying she was a stellar human. But...she is still a human. It's been a lot of fun playing with her and Snape in this story. 

    Thank you for reading and reviewing! 


Title: Chapter 12: The Sociability of Arthur Weasley 28 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    A lovely chapter with humour ad pathos, thank you



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