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The Four Swords of Hogwarts by TheLostBoys333 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 86]

One to defeat fear. One to discover truth. One to feel love. One to accept life. Each will bear a sword and embody the essence of Hogwarts. Together as one, the Four Heroes of Hogwarts will unite the world against the true Dark Lord. Together as one, the Heroes will defeat the binding darkness and restore Hogwarts to the wonder her creators intended her to be.



Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape Disciplines , Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Bashing, Character Death, Out of Character, Violence
Chapters: 39 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 26 Nov 2023 / 11 Nov 2023
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39: One Year Later 07 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Thank you a wonderful story brilliantly told


So Far So Good by Halfbloodprincess21 starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

One-shot story set after So Close and before Far From Perfect. Severus and Harry are caught by surprise by a delegation of Gryffindors and teachers coming to terms with their new dynamic. 



Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Stern
Tags: Adoption
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 14 Nov 2023 / 14 Nov 2023
Series: Coming Home - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 26 Nov 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Thank you an excellent addition to the series


Dear Diary: The Freak Under the Stairs by Hopeless Wanderer starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 22]

Harry loses something of great value. He doesn't lose it. It is taken. It is not lost. It has been stolen.

Snape has got something to do with it.



Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Angry
Tags: Abuse Recovery, Alternate Universe, Depression Recovery
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Eating Disorder, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Out of Character, Physical Abuse, Violence
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 06 Jan 2024 / 10 Dec 2023
Series: None - Challenges: Harry's Journal
Title: Chapter 2: Dear Diary: You were Returned 13 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Thank you an extremely interesting and thoughtful piece of writing.


Revenge for Christmas by Melibelly starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 19]
When Harry discovers that Sirius Black is the one who betrayed his parents, he would like nothing more than to exact his revenge. Lucky for him, Snape shares the same goal. Together, Harry is sure they will hunt Black down and bring him in for the punishment he so rightfully deserves. Or so he thinks…

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape, Overly-protective Snape, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Abuse Recovery, Adoption
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Emotional Abuse, Neglect, Out of Character
Chapters: 4 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 23 Dec 2023 / 21 Dec 2023
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 2: Revenge is a Powerful Motivator 27 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Love their interaction really well thought out and written thank you. 



    Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so glad you liked their interactions.

Title: Chapter 1: The Thirst for Revenge 27 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Excellent start thank you, the thought of Severus chortling is really scary!



    Author's Response: It was about the scariest thing I think he could have done! Thank you for the review!

Title: Chapter 3: All I want for Christmas is Revenge 28 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I loved how Harry reacted to Sirius. He needed to let all the aggression out. Thank you for a great chapter


Title: Chapter 4: Living Well is the Best Revenge 28 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Thank you so much for your well written and wonderful story, I loved the ending so much


The Crucible of the Phoenix by OutriderIvyHill starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 7]

Harry and Snape are back at Headquarters, and the stakes to find the spy are higher than ever. As members of the Order of the Phoenix begin to turn on one another, more is happening in the background than any of them are ready to expect. 



Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Secretive
Tags: Spying!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Dec 2023 / 28 Dec 2023
Series: It Takes a Village - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 28 Dec 2023
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Thank you for the story. It was a clever trick to make them distrust each other. I wonder how Umbridge will react to Harry. 


The Curse of Halloween by SerenaEW starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 3]

Every Halloween was cursed with new nightmares.

This year was no different.



Takes Place: 5th Year - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Kind, Snape is Loving
Tags: Hospitalization
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Panic attack
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Dec 2023 / 28 Dec 2023
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: The Curse of Halloween 01 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Very well written thank you



    Author's Response:

    Thank you so much! 


My Daddy's a Vampire by krosi starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 5]

During a Christmas sleepover, Harry and his friends watch a scary Dracula movie without Severus’s permission. After a string of circumstantial evidence, Harry and the others become convinced that Severus is a vampire.



Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Out of Character Snape, Snape is Kind
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 01 Jan 2024 / 01 Jan 2024
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: My Daddy's a Vampire 03 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Lovely story thank you so much



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