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A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help!

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It all started with an unexpected meeting at King's Cross at the end of Harry's first year. The next thing Severus Snape knows he's stuck with the Potter brat.



Takes Place: 1st Year, 2nd summer, 2nd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Out of Character Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape Disciplines , Snape is Angry
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 Feb 2024 / 15 Jan 2024
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 10: A Plan in Action 24 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I love how Severus dealt with Dudley. Harry is right it's not nice but great fun and what they deserve. 



    Author's Response:

    It was fun. I'm sorta sad to have ended that bit. 


Title: Chapter 11: Remorse 24 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I didnt think I'd ever say this but I felt a bit sorry for Petunia at the end of the chapter but then I remembered how she acted towards Harry and that faded a bit.

    Thank you for a wonderful chapter 



    Author's Response:

    I'm glad you felt sorry for her a minute at least! LOL. I'm absolutely not saying she was a stellar human. But...she is still a human. It's been a lot of fun playing with her and Snape in this story. 

    Thank you for reading and reviewing! 


Title: Chapter 12: The Sociability of Arthur Weasley 28 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    A lovely chapter with humour ad pathos, thank you


Title: Chapter 13: Moving Forward 01 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    A very realistic chapter, I loved it thank you


Title: Chapter 14: The Sharpness of Albus Dumbledore 04 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    I've never liked Dumbledore as I can't forgive him for leaving Harry with the Dursleys and not checking on him. Here I don't think he is giving up on his plans but hopefully Severus will stop him.

    lovely ending with Dobby, thank you


In the Triwizard Tournament's second task, Harry confronts his fear of water. Panic sets in as he cannot breathe as he's pushed into the lake. Harry fights the heavy water as he sinks further down. Darkness approaches, and his survival hangs in the balance.

Takes Place: 4th Year - Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate
Tags: Hospitalization
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K - Warnings: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 Jan 2024 / 20 Jan 2024
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 23 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Brilliant piece of writing, you summed up the Hogwarts problems brilliantly 


Coauthored by Esyrnrose and Sleeper102 - both of whom can be found on AO3.

“Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.” - Oscar Wilde

What if Harry forgives Snape for all the hurt? How would Snape react to this? Snape has, after all, spent so much of his time wallowing in bitterness. Being forgiven is not something he expected. But what if Harry enjoys the reactions forgiving his enemies brings? What if he starts a trend?

Takes Place: 6th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Angry, Snape is Cranky
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Character Death, Out of Character
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Jan 2024 / 28 Jan 2024
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: To Err is Human, To Forgive Divine 28 Jan 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Wonderful story thank you 



    Author's Response: Thank you 😊

When Voldemort's demise resulted in Harry's days severely numbered with a curse no one can break, no one knows why Severus Snape has chosen to remain at his side, not even himself.

Takes Place: 8 - Post Hogwarts (young adult Harry) - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Depressed
Tags: Alternate Universe, Hospitalization, Injured!Harry
Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Character Death, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 10 Feb 2024 / 10 Feb 2024
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 12 Feb 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Very well written thank you



    Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading. xx

Coming of age in a declining northern borough wouldn’t be easy for any eight-year-old boy. For reasons that defied logic, being named ‘Harry Potter’ only seemed to complicate matters. Second in the Storm Surge Series. Sequel to Grease & Lightning. HP&SS friend/mentor/Severitus-style fic. No slash.

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Child fic, Kidnapped!Harry, Sibling Addition
Categories: Big Brother Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Bullying, Profanity, Romance/Het, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 11 - Completed: No - Updated: 07 May 2024 / 27 Feb 2024
Series: Storm Surge - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Panama 01 Mar 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Great to have a continuation of G &L. I nearly went back to re-read it first but decided that it would be better to read this chapter and review befor I did that.

    i loved their conversation on the road and Harry's continued worry about car safety, quite rightly with our overcrowded roads. I presume Dumbledore has finally got round to looking into Harry's plight, well I suppose better late than never I suppose.

    thank you so much for starting this story and I hope all is going well with you and the babies. One point, not important but there you go, on the M6 you would not go past Newcastle.


Title: Chapter 2: The Headmaster 07 Mar 2024
Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)

    Good for Harry putting Dumbledore in his place. I loved the chapter, especially the tea service, reminiscent of the elf wine at the Dursleys. Thank you



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