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| A keen Harry Severus reader who thinks the writers on the site are fantastic. No time for beta reading but if you need a Brit Picker I can help! i used to read on Fanfic but can't leave reviews there although I can log in! I love to review good well written stories but I do not flame! [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 10: A Plan in Action
| 24 Jan 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I love how Severus dealt with Dudley. Harry is right it's not nice but great fun and what they deserve.
Author's Response: It was fun. I'm sorta sad to have ended that bit.
Title: Chapter 11: Remorse
| 24 Jan 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I didnt think I'd ever say this but I felt a bit sorry for Petunia at the end of the chapter but then I remembered how she acted towards Harry and that faded a bit.
Thank you for a wonderful chapter
Author's Response: I'm glad you felt sorry for her a minute at least! LOL. I'm absolutely not saying she was a stellar human. But...she is still a human. It's been a lot of fun playing with her and Snape in this story.
Thank you for reading and reviewing!
Title: Chapter 12: The Sociability of Arthur Weasley
| 28 Jan 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A lovely chapter with humour ad pathos, thank you
Title: Chapter 13: Moving Forward
| 01 Feb 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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A very realistic chapter, I loved it thank you
Title: Chapter 14: The Sharpness of Albus Dumbledore
| 04 Feb 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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I've never liked Dumbledore as I can't forgive him for leaving Harry with the Dursleys and not checking on him. Here I don't think he is giving up on his plans but hopefully Severus will stop him.
lovely ending with Dobby, thank you
In the Triwizard Tournament's second task, Harry confronts his fear of water. Panic sets in as he cannot breathe as he's pushed into the lake. Harry fights the heavy water as he sinks further down. Darkness approaches, and his survival hangs in the balance.
Takes Place: 4th Year
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Snape flavour: Snape is Desperate
Tags: Hospitalization
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 1
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 20 Jan 2024 / 20 Jan 2024
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 23 Jan 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Brilliant piece of writing, you summed up the Hogwarts problems brilliantly
Coauthored by Esyrnrose and Sleeper102 - both of whom can be found on AO3. “Always forgive your enemies; nothing annoys them so much.” - Oscar Wilde What if Harry forgives Snape for all the hurt? How would Snape react to this? Snape has, after all, spent so much of his time wallowing in bitterness. Being forgiven is not something he expected. But what if Harry enjoys the reactions forgiving his enemies brings? What if he starts a trend?
Takes Place: 6th Year
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape is Angry, Snape is Cranky
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Title: Chapter 1: To Err is Human, To Forgive Divine
| 28 Jan 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 12 Feb 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 1: Panama
| 01 Mar 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Great to have a continuation of G &L. I nearly went back to re-read it first but decided that it would be better to read this chapter and review befor I did that.
i loved their conversation on the road and Harry's continued worry about car safety, quite rightly with our overcrowded roads. I presume Dumbledore has finally got round to looking into Harry's plight, well I suppose better late than never I suppose.
thank you so much for starting this story and I hope all is going well with you and the babies. One point, not important but there you go, on the M6 you would not go past Newcastle.
Title: Chapter 2: The Headmaster
| 07 Mar 2024
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Reviewer: Fmh (Signed)
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Good for Harry putting Dumbledore in his place. I loved the chapter, especially the tea service, reminiscent of the elf wine at the Dursleys. Thank you
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