Slytherin!
Dudley and Harry flee Vernon - to Severus. A different Tom Riddle, Petunia is good. Lucius and Draco are helpful. Albus is a bit misguided. The twins are only a year older than Harry, so I can make them non-Gryffindor.
Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by BaltaineShadow
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 137 - Completed: No - Updated: 28 Sep 2014 / 28 Jun 2009
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 79: Memories of the Cave | 19 Jun 2010 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- Horcrux hunting seems to be going fine :)
I guess Harry will have a ... nice time with Hagrid. I hope there won't be rock-cakes - they'd never return to Hagrid to have tea. Especially not Draco.
Great chapter, as always
Greetings, Bataine
| Title: Chapter 80: Prison Visit | 05 Jul 2010 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- This was great - as always, of course:)
It was wonderful to see that Tom was able to get rid of at least one nightmare of his childhood. I wonder though how they'll react upon finding the Horcrux in the cave to be fake... :D I can almost imagine Severus having a fit of rage and Lucius staring at the fake locked in an offended kind of way. Hihi^^
Also I think Lucius should try to find out somehow how Tuney feels about him... Perhaps Rosmerta could be of assistence? ;) I'm sure she'd be thrilled about some "girl-time"...
Also I must say it is good to see Petunia settling in so well in her new life. I hope she'll have lots of fun in this new world she so suddenly stumbled into (after being denied entry for so long). And I hope she'll realize there's someone nearby with whom she could start over, someone to love and cherish her - and someone she can return those feelings to and make him realize that love really exists and that not every woman only sees money and protection instead of the man behind the fortune.... ^.^-
Sooo... I hope to hear of you really soon,
Greetings, Baltaine
| Title: Chapter 81: Tryouts | 15 Jul 2010 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- :D
Wonderful^^ The mental picture of Minerva sitting for houres on on Albus desk with The Philosoper's Stone, wand at ready was incredibly amusing. So was the image of Albus sitting on his bed in the last chamber behind all the nasty little traps to guard the stone... All alone but perfectly able to catch up on sleep^^
And I somehow like Heather. :)
Great chapter^^
Greetings, Baltaine
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review, I enjoyed the idea of Minerva being quite anxious at having the fabled Sorcerers Stone in her keeping.
| Title: Chapter 82: Helga was in charge? | 02 Aug 2010 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- Loved it. Every single word :D
Dora and Tom are so cute^^
And I love the part about the Founders :)
Greetings, Baltaine
| Title: Chapter 115: Vacations and Plots | 28 Mar 2012 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- Wow!
Brilliant how many updates you gave us readers in recent times!
I must say the site wouldn't let me log-in... for some reason the page went and shut down as soon as I clicked on the "submit"-botton.
Anyway: Awesome chapters - you have me giddy for almost a week now hopping around and cheering for Hazelette, giggling madly when Sev conjured Beth a new cup, gnawing on my fingernails when Harry and Draco were hurt, I mentally gave Hermione at least a dozen smacks and kicked Blaise and Neville to the moon and back again for being stupid brats.
I'm still rolling my eyes at Sirius but your version of his mental "stability" is believable... he's in no way fit to help the cause of the order yet and in even less a shape to be a constant and positive factor in Harry's life.
Too bad Remus had to leave Hogwarts - but he's not that far away and does have a decent place to stay without being shunned.
Now I feel like tearing Voldie and Barty Jr. to pieces... T_T they harmed Winky! I liked that house-elve! I liked her sober and clean and drunk and dirty. I don't know why but it is just the way it is... and now she won't be a part of this story.
Though Voldie looking like a house-elve somehow sends me in a giggling fit. *lol*
I hope you'll update soon again (I noticed that the chapters didn't have any reviews yet... maybe others had the same problem I had trying to leave you a comment?)
Until soon I hope!
Greetings and lots of love and admiration,
Baltaine
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying it - I loaded several chapters within a few days, and the update doesn't always show.
The Ministry forces Severus to decide between getting de-aged or go to Azkaban. So he lives a new and better childhood with Albus and Minerva as his parents. Mentioned child abuse but otherwise a fluffy story!
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Creature!fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Big Brother Harry, Big Brother Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Child fic, Creature!fic, Deaging
Categories: Reverse Roles > Big Brother Harry, Big Brother Snape, Misc > All written in Snape's POV
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect, Romance/Het
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Sep 2009 / 02 Sep 2009
Series: A Better Childhood - Challenges: None
Chapters: 15 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Sep 2009 / 02 Sep 2009
Series: A Better Childhood - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 – The End (28) | 18 Apr 2010 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- Great story.
I love little Severus though it is sad that he only had the chice between Azkaban and being de-aged... Well - he deserved a second chance at life. Mayby this one will be happy and really great. :)
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your review!
What would have happened if Harry had suddenly become the father of a baby girl at 16? Follow his adventures as he tries to raise a daughter. AU song fic. HP/LL & SS/LE
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry), 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry), 7th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Baby fic, Child fic, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Romance/Het
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Oct 2009 / 29 Oct 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Make a Story from a Song!
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 29 Oct 2009 / 29 Oct 2009
Series: None - Challenges: Make a Story from a Song!
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 29 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- This was soooo good^^
Thank you for uploading it!
Greetings, Baltaine
Author's Response: Thanks! This was an idea that just wouldn't go away and I just had to write it. The muse takes me that way sometimes. If you liked this one, you might want to read some of my other series on here, which generally feature Sev and Harry as mentor or father/son.
Severus, Harry and Draco are now officially a family, but an escapee from Azkaban threatens their happiness. A new Defense professor befriends Harry and Draco, telling them stories about their parents and teaching them to defend themselves against the Dementors surrounding the school.
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Deaging, Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic, Deaging, Sibling Addition
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Mar 2010 / 23 Nov 2009
Series: The Young Order - Challenges: None
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 15 Mar 2010 / 23 Nov 2009
Series: The Young Order - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 12 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- This was a great chapter. Sirius is a free man again, and the twins can cast a corporal Patronus :)
I just hope the fight between Severus ans Sirius won't be too bad. *sigh* I hope Sirius realizes how much Harry and Draco love Sev - and then lets them go... just like Sev let Lily go. :)
Greetings, Baltaine
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 29 Nov 2009 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- :)
Thanks for the update - it really made my day.
If you now would be so kind as to update again so soon? It would be much apprechiated!
Greetings, Baltaine
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 08 Dec 2009 |
| Reviewer: BaltaineShadow (Signed) |
- "Gentlemen, let me introduce you to Moony." Awesome, awesome, awesome!
I can hardly wait for you to update again - they'll find Wormtail, get him to change back, make to take Veritaserum, find out the truth, clear Sirius name... well... that's how far I come in my summing up of what certainly "has" to follow - in my opinion at least. :)
So... update!
Greetings, Baltaine