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An accident the summer before 6th year puts Dumbledore's plans for Harry in motion sooner than planned. Will an unexpected truce with Snape better prepare Harry for what is to come? An introspective Snape mentors Harry fic with all the regular players, told from Harry's point of view. Slightly AU after OOTP.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Physical Impairment
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 44
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 06 Apr 2011 / 28 Dec 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 36: Treatment
| 07 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: ihearttwojacks (Signed)
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Fabulous story. I just read the entire thing in one day, despite my need to study for thermodynamics. I read the first chapter and was hooked. The dynamic between Harry and Severus is excellently portrayed. They obviously care for each other but aren't very good at expressing, yet they understand each other bc they both have that problem. I can't wait for the next chapter! Well done!
Rather than allowing Harry to stay at Diagon Alley after he blew up Aunt Marge, the Ministry sends Harry back to the Dursleys. Harry returns to school after a terrible summer, to find that he's not the only one with this kind of secret. A student has been killed by his family. New screening measures are put into place by the Ministry: Every student must be given a medical exam and interview to look for child abuse. With Dumbledore facing an inquiry, Snape is entrusted with the task of making sure EVERYONE receives one.
Takes Place: 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Title: Chapter 4: The Seeker In Hiding
| 03 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: ihearttwojacks (Signed)
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Very suspenseful chapter, just waiting for Harry to get caught. I really like how Snape shows his concern for Harry through his regular snark and nasty attitude. You did a great job with his personality here!
Following the death of Sirius, Harry isn't sure what to make of the sudden appearance of a six-year-old boy. The pair form a bond, unaware they're half-brothers, and Harry decides to take the boy to Hogwarts and hide him there. To aide the boy's education, Harry anonymously exchanges letters with Snape. A story of a how a young boy becomes a father-figure to another while their own father is oblivious of their biological existence. But can sixteen-year-old Harry give what he himself has not gained? Can he go an entire year without being discovered? Just how far will Severus go to find the writer of those letters...Or are some things best left unknown?
Takes Place: 6th summer, 6th Year, 7th summer, 8 - Pre Epilogue (adult Harry)
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Snape flavour: Canon Snape
Tags: Alternate Universe, Child fic, Kidnapped, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Title: Chapter 1: Curious Interruption
| 05 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: ihearttwojacks (Signed)
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I really like the premise of the story. You have some grammatical errors, but the plot is fun and I can't wait to see Harry try to hide a 6 year old.
Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1
| 08 Oct 2017
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Reviewer: ihearttwojacks (Signed)
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Lovely story, thank you for sharing it.
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