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Reviews by Dream Painter
Every year it was the same, Severus Snape cleared his face of all emotion, apparated to Privet Drive and visited a little boy whose only desire in the entire world was to have someone that would love him. Halloween Fest Winner 2014
Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: Snape is Depressed, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Secretive Tags: Child fic, Spying on Harry! Snape Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 03 Nov 2014 / 03 Nov 2014 Series: The Art of Forgetting and Forgiving - Challenges: Halloween
Despite the fact that you have made me wanna cry, now, I did rather like this little fic. I love the premise behind it and you've pieced it together very well! I'm definitely awaiting that sequel, however. With trepidation, however; I'm skeptical as to whether that will turn out happy, either! :P Nicely writ! Author's Response: I'm awful, I completely smiled at your horrified review, hahah! :D The Christmas sequel will be laden with angst as well, but the truth will come out, and...well, you'll see. ^_^ Thank you so much for reviewing! The summer Harry turns eighteen he sleeps alone in a shed at the Burrow. Will he be fit to return to Hogwarts for a seventh year of education? What does a last year at Hogwarts have to offer in the aftermaths of Voldemort’s demise? And how will Harry cope with the Headmaster in office?
Takes Place: 7th Year - Snape flavour: None Tags: None Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Romance/Het, Romance/Slash, Self-harm, Suicide Themes
Chapters: 47 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 24 Nov 2015 / 11 Nov 2014 Series: Spiral - Challenges: None
This has been such an enjoyable read, although, I do sometimes wish that Snape and Harry could just get over the rest of their issues and be proper friends, already! I love that Snape is a qualified healer and has worked as one - and I do so adore that Harry is taking to healing, as well! I think he would be well suited to it. The concept of grief swallowers is wonderful, and I do like that it is only really something that can be done by someone well acquainted with grief from youth. Tragic, but fitting. In regards to the defense, I was very delighted to read it. It was very interesting to read and Hermione did well (of course!). Anyhow, I suppose I shall now have to await the next chapter. I am most concerned about Ginny and the apparent after-effects of the obbliviation treatment she may be starting to show. Looking forward to seeing how Snape's official trial goes! Author's Response: I’m glad you caught up! I suppose my chapters tend to be longish… I appreciate and sympathise with your feeling of impatience that Snape and Harry should just stop wrestling with their history and become friends. I assure you that I have felt the same, while writing this story. But I have stopped and told myself sternly that it would not be realistic to proceed too quickly, given that everything happened as in cannon. The abysm of differences that separated them initially must be overcome little by little in this story.
Author's Response: Thanks. I, too, believe Ron will get used to having a brother who is gay - a lot of people seem to be able to process their prejudices, at least to some extent, when they're faced with the fact that someone in their family or immediate acquaintance is homosexual.
Another good update. I look forward to more. Author's Response: Thank you. The story is going to turn a bit more adventurous towards the end. I'm trying to build up the suspense with Healer Frankiss abduction...
Ah, but Snape ought to be more optimistic. What am I saying. This is Snape, after all. Things will somehow come round right, though. They have to. At least, I hope they have to in the end! Well writ. Author's Response: You were right, of course! Things did come round (read chapter 42), or someone came round, although Snape seems to find it hard to accept...
Author's Response: You're right, of course - some explanation is found in the new chapter. Looking forward to reading your contribution for the Halloween fic fest, by the way :-D Good luck!
I'm not sure how I feel about this one, tbh. I just don't really buy it, I suppose. Like, maybe I'm just in denial or something, but I feel like if I use a fingernail to scratch at the veneer, as it were, something else will reveal itself... A good update, in any case, even if current situation has me disgruntled with just about everyone involved. Author's Response: Thank you for taking your time to write a review even in the middle of disgruntledness :-) Action is a rather difficult genre to write, I think - or it simply does not agree with me, specifically. I needed something drastic to happen in the story, though - a crisis to bring Harry and Snape closer together. It doesn't look like that right now, but bear with it another chapter or two and I hope it will make more sense. Severus, Remus, Harry and Draco are a family. In truth, they should have been a family all along, and would have been, had it not been for Dumbledore's interference.
Takes Place: 5th summer - Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving Tags: Adoption, Deaged!Harry, Deaging, Kidnapped Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Out of Character, Romance/Slash
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 22 Dec 2014 / 22 Dec 2014 Series: None - Challenges: The Lupin-Snapes
Very nicely done. I was very happy to read this! Author's Response: I am very happy that you enjoyed reading this, and like how I approached the challenge. I always worry that the person who issued the challenge won't like what I've written. Thank you so much for reading this, and for letting me know that you did like it. :-) Harry defeated Voldemort, but was nearly destroyed himself when Voldemort's final curse turned him into an embryo. Snape only just managed to save Harry by taking him into his own body - and thus making himself pregnant. Somewhere in the sixth or seventh month, the unborn Harry "wakes up", and realizes who - and where - he is. What fetus!Harry doesn't properly remember is how Snape saved his life, instead resenting the fact that he's going to be stuck inside Snape for a few months. How does their strange 'father-son' relationship develop from there?
Takes Place: 7th Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Out of Character Snape Tags: Baby fic, Deaged!Harry, Pregnancy Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Out of Character, Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 31 Dec 2014 / 31 Dec 2014 Series: XYZ Challenge - A Story for each Challenge - Challenges: Father and Son
Lockart wipes Harry's memory. Along the way of regaining it, he gets access to a memory his magic had suppressed. Because of it, Harry is desperate not to return to the Dursleys, but Dumbledore won't listen - so Harry has to make his own escape. Come along to the bumpy ride of Harry trying to find what he wished for most in this world. Completed (11 chapters)! Severitus-ish!
Takes Place: 2nd Year, 3rd summer, 3rd Year - Snape flavour: Canon Snape, Snape Comforts, Snape is Desperate, Snape is Kind, Snape is Stern Tags: Addicted!Harry, Disguised!Harry, Hospitalization, Incognito!Harry, Injured!Harry, Kidnapped, Kidnapped!Harry, New Identity!Harry, Resorting, Runaway, Sibling Addition, Slytherin!Harry Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Drug use, Neglect, Rape, Self-harm, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 11 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 15 Feb 2015 / 30 Jan 2015 Series: None - Challenges: Morning Post, Artists, Gaining Harry's trust again, Potter Estate in Snape's Possession, Known Horcrux, Hidden Snapes
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