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| Member since: 03 Feb 2010
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| I was originally a Huflepuff, but Pottermore sorted me into Ravenclaw and the more I think about it, it makes since. I'm not as smart as the other Claws, but I over think things WAY too much. [Report This]
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Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
| 07 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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Oh, that was wonderful with Hagrid and Fang! You do great with showing emotion. Snape was spot on, I think, after the nightmare and swearing never to drink and crying. I could picture it, even if that's an emotion not used for our older hero.
Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20
| 07 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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"D'you want to meet a giant?" Who wouldn't want to meet one as nice a Hagrid?
Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21
| 07 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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Of course you count the house elf, she'll get in trouble too, I 'spect. Poor Nelli
Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22
| 07 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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I'm hoping somewhere you explain what exactly happened in the tub. My mind is envisioning all sorts of things.
Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26
| 07 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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I'm such a goof, I tried to breathe in and out as I was reading it without realizing it and when I realized I was, I found I was backwards with my own reading! Talk about feeling silly!
Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27
| 07 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9
| 09 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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YESSSS! *butt-wiggle victory dance*
Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10
| 09 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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I feel the need to tell you the victory dance last chapter was for their escape; I'm not sadistic to the good guys...
Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14
| 09 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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"But finish the tea, first, if you would." Sorry that struck me as funny. The rest of the chapter was just sad. Not your writing of it, of course, but the happenings. So sad.
Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15
| 09 Mar 2010
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Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed)
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A slightly stupid cow? Most of them are at least SLIGHTLY stupid. My grandpa's are the most intelligent ones I, or anyone I know, have come upon and really their smarts only seem to arrive when they are giving birth. They aren't as bad as sheep though. Oh and I loved Hagrid and I always hoped Umbridge was never found. I also like how you imply that someone has researched the nutritious value of fingernails. All I can say is they are high in dead keritin.
Oh, Hedwig? No, no, she shouldn't die, she should have been set to Ron's. Animals shouldn't be hurt, no.
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