Ravenclaw!
The summer after 5th year, Death Eaters find Harry abandoned in the Dursley house and bring him to Voldemort. Will one particular Death Eater give up his position and his hate to save his enemy's child? Eventual Snape mentors Harry fic.
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by CarlinPaddy
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Rape, Torture, Violence
Chapters: 43 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2007 / 23 Jul 2007
Series: Walk the Shadows - Challenges: None
Chapters: 43 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 05 Nov 2007 / 23 Jul 2007
Series: Walk the Shadows - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38 | 10 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- Hmm, he's learned quite the defence, eh? Hehehe, oh and the bit about Remus being a pet dog was cute. I wanted to scratch his ears.
| Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 | 10 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- That was amazing! the fight, the rescue, everything. Oh and calmly stepping over a werewolf was hilarious to me considering who it was
| Title: Chapter 40: Chapter 40 | 10 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- I assume Harry's wand was in Dumbledore's pocket, does he get this one back or am I wrong? I felt this one was special. Severus should let Harry have a dog. It doesn't need to be a puppy, I prefer adult dogs better anyway, and if it were a magical one, maybe it could assist him... sorry, tangeant. I'm sure you'll write everything wonderfully as you have been so I have no concerns.
| Title: Chapter 41: Chapter 41 | 10 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- Cats are quite the task masters, aren't they? I had one that was very much a vocalist critique, if you sang just SLIGHTLY off key she hushed you up with a paw, and my other cat would scowl at me if I interupted reading to him by laughing at the story...
During the summer before his third year at Hogwarts, Harry somehow ends up in a reality where Severus Snape is his father. AU, Sevitus — Includes Sirius!
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Takes Place: 3rd summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: K
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Sep 2009 / 20 Aug 2007
Series: To Have a Father - Challenges: None
Chapters: 30 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 17 Sep 2009 / 20 Aug 2007
Series: To Have a Father - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: Parlance | 11 Feb 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- "Hm. That's a good question," hilarious! I think I'll really like this story. I don't like judging too early, you know. 7 so far, I want to see how you do the plot but I think it's going to be really good.
| Title: Chapter 29: Accident | 12 Feb 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- I was wondering why they didn't take Harry out of this hospital and take him to St. Muugo's
| Title: Chapter 30: Epilogue | 12 Feb 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- 10
As a first year, Harry is sorted into Slytherin instead of Gryffindor, and no one is more surprised than his new Head of House.
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 51 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Mar 2009 / 21 Aug 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 51 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Mar 2009 / 21 Aug 2007
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 12 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- Eeeek, that was creepy.
| Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 32 | 14 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- I haven't been commenting due to the story being finished and all. But your spin on this was fantastic. Thank you.
| Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 | 14 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- You might find this funny, but when you wrote about the detention and raging dressing down at the begining here; I read that as "raging dressing gown" I have a touch of sledesica but suddenly I envisioned a posessed bathrobe yelling at Harry while Harry was in the showers. The rest was too sad to comment on, a clothes hanger, you certainly have the Dursleys pegged.