Ravenclaw!
Harry has a new pet, Severus has a new pet, and there’s a first time for everything. Sorry for killing Hedwig again. Blame JKR for allowing only one familiar.
Takes Place: None
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by CarlinPaddy
Rated: T
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Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Sep 2008 / 18 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 18 Sep 2008 / 18 Sep 2008
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Golden Star | 10 Jul 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- You can't leave a story this epic with "Little did the two of them know that they might have changed whole future."
Author's Response:
Ah, you are so right! I feel that I need to write a short sequel. However, I am currently working on a multichaptered fic (not publishet yet, but I am writing 8th chapter). Maybe afterwards I will get back to Golden... Thank you very much for your review. Have a wonderful summer! Mila
Sequel to "Harry's First Detention" - read that first, please!
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Physical Punishment Spanking
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
Chapters: 64 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 21 Nov 2009 / 24 Sep 2008
Series: Harry's First Detention - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 26 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- I hope you inteded this to be funny, or I have a sick sence of humor, I was laughing so much my cheeks are burning. Oh, and I assume you'll have many more comments soon. Someone just recced this story for the entire yahoo group for A Year Like No Other.
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 27 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- I loved your Hermione! I'm going to say she's a bit OOC just because she wasn't that awesome in JKR's books, especially as a first year. And I have a new favorite background character. Did we meet the Slyth prefects in cannon? Love Love Love
| Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 | 29 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- I'm starting to really like your Percy. Very good story.
| Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 | 29 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- You write extremely well. I could picture all of Snape's actions. And the part where hi pinched the bridge of his nose and said "You called him Lord Voldauvent, didn't you?" I actually pinched the bridge of my nose in mimicry you wrote it so well. Thankfully no one is here...
| Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 | 30 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- All of Harry's problems of his other life will be fixed by Christmas at this rate. Very nice. the Pettigoo was a nice touch by the way. And if AD is the Artful Dodger, what shall we call Severus Snape?
| Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 | 30 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- Umm, te he?
| Title: Chapter 45: Chapter 45 | 30 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- Albus' last line really tickled me.
| Title: Chapter 47: Chapter 47 | 30 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- That was priceless! Pure priceless. You need to read Snapegirl's Broken Wings, she was a very good way of dismissing Um-bitch as well. I always like McG, but I'm liking her here even better. Oh and I forgot to comment last chapter, when you gave Harry the water and scrubbrushes I had a memory flash of Disney's The Sword in the Stone where Merlin magics the dishes clean, but ice scating? that's fun!
| Title: Chapter 57: Chapter 57 | 31 Mar 2010 |
| Reviewer: CarlinPaddy (Signed) |
- Sing a song of sixpence,
A pocket full of rye.
Four and twenty blackbirds,
Baked in a pie.
The 'Puffs prolly wouldn't get a reference like that, would they? I think it's cute though. I had to look up exactly how many black birds were in the pies, but you are very clever.