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| Lady Lanera [Contact]
| Better be Slytherin!
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| Member since: 21 Feb 2010
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| I am an avid Celestial Serpent fan (Snape/Sinistra), so it's a bit odd that I'd be on here. However, I wholly agree that Snape should have adopted Harry, so most of my stories will have that be the end result. My current active story right now is Undone Present.
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Title: Chapter 30: Gauntlet
| 13 May 2010
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Awesome as always. I definitely sympathize for poor Draco. I must admit Moody in your story seems to be worse than Umbridge. So great job. :) In response to Cedric, my first response is let him live, but we don't really ever see him actually be a big help...so it's sort of iffy for me. However, Phil's with them so perhaps you could allow Cedric to live and give Phil a really cool scene. :)
Title: Chapter 55: Blood Trail
| 30 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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ooooh, I was worried there for Sarai and Snape. Draco using his Slytheriness was amazing. Love the addition of Baba Yaga. Wonderful chapter as always.
Title: Chapter 1: A Gryffindor Feeling
| 26 Apr 2010
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Very nice story, but it makes me wonder what Snape did to Umbridge. I would have liked to have seen that. :) Good job.
Title: Chapter 31: A Sleeping Dragon
| 04 May 2010
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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I feel bad for Harry in this chapter since he feels so uncomfortable with Snape saying that Harry's his son. I hope he gets comfortable soon, and I can't wait to see how Ron reacts to everything. Great job as always. :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm not entirely sure Harry isn't comfortable with it because it's Severus, but more so because he really isn't used to even the idea of having a living biological parent. It has to be a complete shock and he was only told that morning, so it may be some time yet before he's fully comfortable.
Title: Chapter 32: Not Fine
| 24 May 2010
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Nice job, Ella. I liked your exchange between Snape and Fred. It was nice to see Snape trying to change for Harry. I especially loved the inclusion of LOTR. Great job as always. :)
Author's Response: Thank you! The twins have been cooped up a little too long. I wouldn't want to be Molly trying to make sure they don't blow up the place. Severus is trying to change, but it'll take time. He's spent years being his closed off snarky self and to be nice will take effort.
Title: Chapter 38: Pain
| 21 Dec 2010
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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I love the details you add to your story to make it so believable. I do hope Albus gets straight to the point because Snape doesn't seem to be in a really great mood after all that. Wonderful chapter.
Author's Response: It's great to hear you love the little details. I agree that they make a story so much more believable. We'll see how straight to the point Albus in the next chapter. Thanks!
Title: Chapter 7: Weaving a Web of Despair
| 08 Feb 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Very nice, Autumn. I loved your inclusion with "Charlotte's Web" and Harry using a needle to feel pain. That added a very interesting layer to the story. Again, very nice, Autumn.
Author's Response: thank you lan! lol I hadn't set out to write the needle part-that just wrote itself and made it through the cuts :-)
Title: Chapter 5: Three folk and a snidget
| 22 Mar 2011
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Awe, Wands. Very nice chapter. I love that he named it Whimsy. That's so appropriate. :D The Umbridge scene made me laugh as did Peeves vs. Pamela.
Author's Response: Thanks Lan! You know Peeves has to meet his match at some point. Umbridge however, has always had something like that coming to her. :)
By third year, Harry was starting to think he knew his own identity. Then, the discovery of an old secret threatens to throw his world into turmoil, yet again. Nor is he the only one who finds his life affected... Who is he, anyway?
Takes Place: 3rd Year
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Snape flavour: Snape Comforts, Snape is Loving, Snape is Stern
Tags: Alternate Universe, Physical Impairment, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: Alcohol Use, Neglect, Profanity
Chapters: 39
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Completed: Yes
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Updated: 15 Sep 2015 / 04 Mar 2010
Series: None
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Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17
| 27 Jul 2010
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Interesting take on the punishment for the Dursleys. It's rather fitting, I would say. I'm glad Snape and Harry are getting along better. Though, I'm worried for poor Draco. Awesome job, and can't wait for your next update.
Author's Response: Thank you. I wanted to try to do something at least a little different, so I'm glad it worked. More to come. Thanks again for the R&R. ~D
Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18
| 03 Aug 2010
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Reviewer: Lady Lanera (Signed)
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Awe...but now I want to know what Harry got Snape. It was definitely a cute chapter for the two and I loved how you wrote Snape thinking that he was being attacked... I think they're settling in very nicely as father and son. Excellent job. :D
Author's Response: ^^ Thanks. I decided since Snape (in my mind) is a night owl, it wouldn't make sense for him to be a morning person, also. :D And no worries - I'll let ya'll know what Harry got Severus.
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