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| Morgana [Contact]
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| Member since: 07 Mar 2010
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| Title: Chapter 8: Boy
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting chapter.
| Title: Chapter 9: Exploration part I
| 16 Jul 2010
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I love how you have described the manor, especially the dining room. Neffy is a very sweet character, almost between Ron and Hermione in personality, and her interaction with Harry is very realistic.
| Title: Chapter 10: Alarmed
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Poor Remus lol! I thought the floo system was a very clever idea and I loved the Harry/Neffy interaction
| Title: Chapter 11: Wolfblood
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very sweet Harry/ Remus interaction. I love your depiction of the house elves.
| Title: Chapter 12: Exploration Part II
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Poor Severus, being asked if he loved Harry shoved him way outside his comfort zone and I thought his reaction was very in character.
| Title: Chapter 13: Homesick
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Poor Harry. I expect, however, that Severus has prepared a special room for him. Beautifully written and very sweet
| Title: Chapter 14: Mindmeet
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Beautiful depiction of the mind meet. This is such a wonderful, original story, I really can't stop reading lol!
| Title: Chapter 15: The Morning After
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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I absolutely loved the Harry/Severus interaction in the bedroom; you're really good at intertwining the cub traits and human traits, giving the whole piece a realistic feel
| Title: Chapter 16: Hogwarts at Last
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Very interesting and mysterious.
| Title: Chapter 17: Welcoming Feast
| 16 Jul 2010
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| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
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Wonderful character interactions, all the characters' behaviour felt canon compliant and very believable.
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