Slytherin!
Petunia Dursley is cleaning the attic and finds a previously unknown copy of Lily’s will. Ecstatic at her discovery, she promptly abandons her burdensome nephew, along with Lily’s will, on the doorstep of her childhood nemesis (aka, Severus Snape). ***SEQUEL "Lily's Last Wish" NOW POSTED***
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
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Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Morgana
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2017 / 02 Jan 2011
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2017 / 02 Jan 2011
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- Great chapter; I loved how Severus calmly led Harry through the questions about his relatives (though I'm sure the Dursleys are in for a nasty shock) and Severus' growning exasperation and Harry's sullen refusal to except his own shortcomings were very in character.
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- I loved the last sentence; it's proved false by the entire chapter, thus a delicious piece of dramatic irony. Your description of the words hanging in the air like blood-drenched daggers was also really powerful, in fact kudos on your use of imagery on the whole. I love the mixture of maturity and childishness you have portrayed in Harry, it's very realistic given the abuse he's endured. Severus' comment over Sirius' choice of presents was deliciously Snape-ish ^^
| Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- Aww the gobstones story is too sweet (I'm like that with my best-friend ^^). I expect that those irritatingly paternal feelings are going to grow; I've always thought that canon Severus had a huge capacity for love- he'd just been hurt too badly to actively try again.
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- Another brilliant chapter with some intreguing revalations and good character development; Harry and Severus are certainly learning off one another!
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- Very sweet chapter; I've always suspected that Severus and Harry would share a love of cooking and I think you've portrayed their interaction, with Severus' merticulous appraisal of flavours and Harry's modest pride, really beautifully. The idea of the letters is intreaging: looking forward to more!
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- Aww, the last paragraph is so sweet. A truly gorgeous chapter with wonderful character interaction.
| Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- Great chapter; I really liked the floo scene, which seems to have acted as confirmation to Severus and Harry that they can trust each other. I can also see Severus respecting Hermione at that age (i.e. when she'd become a little more socially aware lol)
| Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- I loved that awkward little conversation, with Harry wanting to leave some of his things at Severus' house but not sure whether he could and Severus wanting Harry to know that he would provide for him (both robes and a home). Harry's thoughts on his birthday are also bittersweetly endearing.
| Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19 | 19 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- Wonderful, wonderful chapter; I really loved the 'Wizard of Oz' boots (a great, original idea and Severus and Harry's conversation, which was both sweet and believable. Great job
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 22 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Morgana (Signed) |
- Great chapter, I loved the 'octopus' line.