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Watching Harry by Natasi starstarstarstarhalf-star [Reviews - 53]
If especially strong-willed, sometimes the dead can interfere with the events of the living. Lily Evans is a very strong-willed woman and is not happy with the course of events in her son's life. She is planning, and slowly building her energy so that she can step in and set things to right.

Takes Place: 1st summer before Hogwarts, 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 12 Sep 2011 / 11 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 13 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great chapter; I love how you've explained Lily's presence in Harry's life

Every Cloud by Mozalini starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 30]
When Umbridge's detentions get too much for Harry to handle, he finds himself back in the hospital wing. Will Umbridge finally get her comeuppance? Response to a challenge by Jan_AQ.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 2 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 28 Aug 2011 / 26 Aug 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Infection from a blood quill
Title: Chapter 1: Helping Hands 27 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great beginning; all the characters felt very in character and I loved the sense of time you created when Harry was hesitating over telling Snape about the blood quill. Snape's internal monologue felt very real and hinted at a change for the better.

Title: Chapter 2: Evil Toads 28 Aug 2011
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Great chapter; I love your manipulative Severus and how he set up the ambush. The final scene between Harry and Snape felt very in character and I really enjoyed the ending ^^

Past Featured Story Session Transcripts by lastcrazyhorn starstarstarstarstar [Reviews - 286]
What happens when a brain damaged Harry and a transgender Hermione both get sorted into Slytherin? Snape's not sure, but he thinks it's likely to be an interesting term. This story follows various first years through the trials of their first year

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect
Chapters: 25 - Completed: No - Updated: 09 Jul 2017 / 31 Oct 2011
Series: None - Challenges: Minor Canon Character, Barrier to learning
Title: Chapter 1: First Meetings 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Oh, feeling really tearful. I love Harry's interaction with Severus; you've shown Severus' best traits- intelligence, intuition, adaptability- but still kept the dark sarcasm and vague irratibility.

    I really like your choice of using transcripts inter-dispersed with commentary and I think it was a great idea to have all four houses- it really highlighted the differences between each teacher's approach- all of which felt very authentic.

    Finally I love that Harry seems to be a nature-mage and possible seer/intuitive; it feels very apt somehow.

Title: Chapter 2: Week 2 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Another gorgeous chapter; I love the 'pet bat' reference and the evolution of Crabbe's character. Snape's interaction with Hermione is also really interesting and believable and I love the sarcastic little asides that Minverva and Severus make in their reports.

    I also agree with your conclusions re: the sorting of the Weasley twins and Draco

Title: Chapter 3: Week 3 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Aww love how the relationships are continuing to develop and the little snippets of information about the professors and characters

Title: Chapter 4: Week 4 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Another great chapter.

Title: Chapter 5: Week 5 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Aww :)

    Poor Hermione, though: I like what you're doing with her but I hope you're not going to have the abuse as a reason for her being transgender- it's something inherant rather than a symptom of abuse

Title: Chapter 6: Week 6 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Haha I wondered how Harry got an expensive hairstyle given his relatives attitudes. He's well on the way to being the baby bat.

    Interestingly dark revalations about Hermione's family

Title: Chapter 7: Week 7 04 Mar 2012
Reviewer: Morgana (Signed)
    Lovely chapter with some interesting developments.


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