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A package is sent to Severus 16 years after Lily's death. Its contents reveal he and Harry have been living a lie. Will they both come to accept the truth and one another or will they continue to live the lie?
Takes Place: 6th summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe
Categories: Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape > Severitus Challenge
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by rosina
Rated: K+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys
Chapters: 34 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Jun 2012 / 08 Jan 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 34 - Completed: No - Updated: 06 Jun 2012 / 08 Jan 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 | 12 Mar 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- I'm enjoying the build up to the story, and the background detail. What will the Hogsmeade visit do to the remains of Harry's friendship with R/H, and how much longer can Snape ignore the bottle of memories.
| Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 | 31 Mar 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- Hope Remus doesn't give up. Snape seems to need a bit of help with his thinking, although maybe he's thawing a tiny bit towards Harry. Good to see Harry make him think about his behaviour, whether he admits to being Harry's father or not.
| Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 | 31 Mar 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- Little sign of Snape facing up to things - you can see why he wasn't sorted into Gryffindor. He might be confused by all the memories and emotions, but he's pretty selfish too.
| Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 | 31 Mar 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- Ah, well a weekend is a start for Snape. Maybe something will stick when he swaps the memories again. Good for Harry that his friends have made some effort to make up with him.
| Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 | 13 May 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- I'm looking forward to seeing what happens during this holiday. Snape is definitely trying to get on with Harry, even if he really doesn't have a clue, and Harry being as prickly as a hedgehog isn't helping him. There's sure to be some trouble ahead.
| Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 | 16 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- Love the long chapters, even if I'm still left wanting more! Its so believable that Harry would be in denial about his relationship with Snape even though the holiday went well. He's got no reason to trust - even his so-called friends are not looking out for him. Look forward to seeing what's happening with Harry, and how Snape deals with things.
| Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 | 24 Jun 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- Gold star to Snape - patience and understanding!Hope he can keep up the good work as it looks like Harry will need a lot of time before he can trust. Looking forward to the next chapter.
| Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26 | 24 Jul 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- It's lovely how protective and caring Snape is becoming. I look forward to seeing how/if Harry will realise.
| Title: Chapter 30: Chapter 30 | 20 Sep 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- I always enjoy a chapter where Harry and Snape go shopping for the first time. I hope Snape isn't going to let his guilt spoil what they have achieved so far. And whats wrong with Harry. I hope to find a new chapter with some answers waiting when I'm back off holiday!
| Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 | 06 Oct 2011 |
| Reviewer: rosina (Signed) |
- Oh, how could you stop there! I hope that wasn't a vision, just a nightmare. I love how caring Snape has become, and that memories or not, Harry seems to have truly won his place in Snape's heart.