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"Perhaps a man with a prerogative to redeem himself in the memory of the mother would, in turn, give comfort to a child so justifiably desperate for it,” Dumbledore grinned at the other man’s unbidden expression of shock. “But when said like that, it hardly encompasses the depth of emotion I would expect when I see the person in question has cradled Harry Potter to sleep after a nightmare.” “I-I...” Severus scowled. “I was not cradling him.”

Takes Place: 0 - Pre Hogwarts (before Harry is 11) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Child fic
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Neglect
Chapters: 10 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 20 May 2011 / 29 Apr 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 16 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    AWWWW! Please update soon! I have to know what happens next!

“At least my dad wasn't a bully like you!” The moment the child shouted those words, something inside Severus snapped. Not a bully? James Potter not a bully?

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Profanity
Chapters: 1 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 08 May 2011 / 08 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 1: Bully 10 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    AWWW! Please continue! I need to know what happens next!! Please make this story at least 5 chapters and a Snape-Adopts-Harry but then finds out he is actually Harry's biologically father! You could have Snape slowly realizing Harry has some habits of his and some of Lily, then slowly build up to everyone finding out their biological relationship. Also since you said "he should have been more surprised when he no longer found himself looking at James Potter...did not anymore." Have that be the start of him noticing Harry kind of looks like some one else with his pale, moon white skin and his jet black hair-not realizing those are what Harry received from him. Oooh you could make this a series! This one be of SS then CoS and so on. Oooh it could be an excellent story-especially if you have Harry shocking everyone (and himself) by unconsciously becoming more Snape-like (little boys always take on habits from men they admire and watch-normally the Dad, but since his "Dad" is dead, and rightn ow he is starting to feel a bond towards Snape, he would be watching Snape.) It would be great!

    Author's Response: Wow that... was quite the detailed plot there.  Unfortunately, I've already got an HP multichapter in the works, and if I start anything else at the moment, absolutely nothing will get done.  Also, I'm not normally very fond of Snape as Harry's biological father.  I'll take it into consideration, though; you never know.  Glad you liked the story!  Thanks for putting so much thought behind it!

After an incident at the Dursley's, Harry finds he needs help. Will this be the catalyst for two unlikely characters forming a respectful relationship between one another, or are we kidding ourselves that one of the two can ever overcome his bitterness..

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Misc
Rated: K+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 9 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Jun 2011 / 16 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Much More Straightforward 03 Jun 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    VERY GOOD STORY! Please update soon. Also can you please find a way for Severus to find out Harry is his son? You don't need to do anything like transform Harry, but it would be neat! I also know that this would make the story kind of turn away from canon, but please have Severus or Harry (or with team-work) find a way to keep Prof. Dumbledore alive and fully healed. Maybe when Dumbledore visits Harry in the hospital wing, Harry unknowingly uses his magic to heal him and destroy Snape's Dark Mark and destroy the Unbreakable Vows tying him-this way he later comes to realize that even without his vows he -for some reason-enjoys protecting Harry. Doing this would set him on the path of finding out he is Harry's biological father! Oh as for the hair you could have Dudley do something to Harry that would make his hair so unruly. OR even have Vernon and Petunia never showing him how to properly groom his hair? Just a thought.

    Author's Response:

    Oh boy...

    Well, first off, thanks so much for your review. I'm so glad you've enjoyed the tale so far.

    Those are quite the suggestions... and though I appreciate that you went to the trouble I have to say that these directions in a fic are often the very reason why I stop reading someone else's fics.  I don't like the premise of Snape being Harry's father generally... but will read if the ideas are unique and believable, and I don't buy into a specially powered Harry, so having Harry cure DD and get rid of both the Dark Mark and UV is not something I could contemplate including in my fic.

    My angle with most of my fics is to take my plot idea and wind it through as much canon as possible, with a particular emphasis on realistic scenarios/dialogue, therefore the above ideas become even more unlikely.

    Nevertheless I appreciate your interest in my fic.  I hope you keep reading and enjoy the direction I do take.

    Thanks again. :D

    misundersnape...

     


Albus Dumbledore admits he often asks too much, but this time he has decided to ask something altogether different. With the shadows of war encircling them all, it will take incredible wit and strength to see his soldiers through to the end. What he needs, more than anything, is for them to work together - and Albus is nothing if not full of ideas on how to make the impossible happen.

Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 6 - Completed: No - Updated: 14 Jun 2011 / 17 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Roan House 31 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    AWESOME~please update soon with much longer chapters please!!

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: What She Died For 18 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Ooohthis is getting very good! Please update soon-I would love to know what happens next!

Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: What She Died For 18 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Ooohthis is getting very good! Please update soon-I would love to know what happens next!

    Author's Response: Chapter two is scheduled to come out on Sunday - thank  you very much for the compliments!

Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Summer Safety 08 Jun 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    AWWWWW!! I absolutely loved that part where Harry moved to the floor and he asked an innocent question...that was just soooo cuuute and awesome!! Ooh I hope Harry is going to have empathic abilities-that Snape has to logically figure out. Oh and due to his empathic abilities and his emotions you could have a bunch of accidental magic that both Snape and Dumbledore have to help each other handle-Harry is after all more powerful since he IS the Dark Lord's Equal. LOL-and you could have Harry later on be revealed as Snape's son since Snape could have been forced to learn Occlumency due to his own empathic abilties' -which you could say he barely pays attention too since he has become used to being an Occlumens. You could also have them find out through research of "How" Harry could be an empath, that they find out JAmes-although Pureblood had no links to Empaths, and Lily being a muggle-born although a powerful witch didn't have the ability-or something of the like. THEN you can also reveal another ability of Harry's that Harry himself never thought of revealing-he actually can talk/see/hear/communicate telepathically to spirits. LOL-you could even have him speaking to "invisible" people or "Shadow-people" in a room, and Severus looks in (not knowing he gave Harry this ability too and once again due to occlumency he is actually unaware he has the ability to although not as powerful as Harry) and sees Harry talking to himself! Then it is only AFTER he (struggles very hard) to take down his shields that he sees what is going on. Ooh it would be great!! Especially after Harry tells Snape he thinks he might be going insane, or for fun-you could have him ask why he doesn't bother talking to Eileen-not knowing he is getting along well with Snape's long dead mother. Which later you can have Snape realize after a looong interrogation that Harry somehow does know his mother very well, which spooks Snape to the core and forces him to go to the Headmaster. (Yet due to Harry's knowledge of knowing his parents are dead, you can say he is emotionally detached from them and so does not "Call them" to him, unlike all the spirits that you can have him be in contact with. You can even say he is a spirit magnet because he is very unique in that he is a Pure Soul-and like Dementors, spirits are just naturally attracted to him. Which could cause lots of havoc if you think about it-spirit bottles shaking, chairs tipping over-all with no explanation...spooky...) LOL.

    Author's Response: Aside from the opening statement Im not sure how much any of this has to do with Blindside XD I think maybe you're reviewing the wrong story? These are all interesting ideas but none of them are even remotely related to whats going on in my story, so I'm not really sure what to say to all of this.

Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Secrets of Albus Dumbledore 15 Jun 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Please update soon.

Harry Potter is not a happy child. He carries a danger inside him that manifests itself soon after he arrives at Hogwarts, and it falls to his new Head of House, Severus Snape, to protect Harry, even from himself…

Takes Place: 1st Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Slytherin!Harry
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Rated: T - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Neglect, Profanity, Violence
Chapters: 21 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2011 / 28 May 2011
Series: None - Challenges: None
Title: Chapter 4: Alliances 04 Jun 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    AWESOME! Please update soon! I have to know what happens next!

    Author's Response: Thank you! The next chapter will be up fairly soon, don't worry :)!

Title: Chapter 6: Scars 09 Jun 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Ooh this is getting good. It was a rather short chapter though.

    Author's Response: Next one will be longer, I promise! Thank you for reviewing!


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