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Rather than allowing Harry to stay at Diagon Alley after he blew up Aunt Marge, the Ministry sends Harry back to the Dursleys. Harry returns to school after a terrible summer, to find that he's not the only one with this kind of secret. A student has been killed by his family. New screening measures are put into place by the Ministry: Every student must be given a medical exam and interview to look for child abuse. With Dumbledore facing an inquiry, Snape is entrusted with the task of making sure EVERYONE receives one.

Takes Place: 3rd Year - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Alternate Universe, Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Healer Snape, Parental Snape > Biological Father Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: 16+ - Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Character Death, Neglect, Self-harm, Suicide Themes, Violence
Chapters: 62 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 27 Nov 2014 / 24 Feb 2011
Series: None - Challenges: New Measures for Screening Abuse
Title: Chapter 28: Spinner's End 18 Jul 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    OOHhh this is getting good!

Title: Chapter 22: Consequences 01 Jun 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Oooh this is getting good! Please update soon!

Title: Chapter 22: Consequences 01 Jun 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    KILL OFF GINNY! KILL OF GINNY! (Crowd chanting)

    However, please let it not be because of ill treatment by the Weasleys-everyone knows Molly and Arthur are good parents.

Title: Chapter 23: Tribuo Vita 07 Jun 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    ...why did Ginny have to stay alive? Im sorry but it sure would have been great if she went to the Afterlife...via an Express train....(or by all the ways Dr. Seuss mentioned in a book) Still this was a good chapter. Please make this a Harmony fic and loads more of Snape! Could you also have Harry start having accidental magic due to his desire of wanting a father-and Snape in the meantime has to react to the accidental magic scenes, and learn that it is Harry who is doing this, and help him learn control, then come to understand why it is happening? It would cause great emotional scenes for both Harry and Snape, plus bring Hermione in as a mediator and get a great relationship arc going between Harry and Hermione!

Title: Chapter 13: Lunch With Potter 30 Mar 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Oooh this story is getting go~od!

Title: Chapter 13: Lunch With Potter 30 Mar 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Oooh this story is getting go~od!

Title: Chapter 19: Secrets Revealed 02 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    NICE~! Everyone is in perfect character too! Very good job! Please update soon!

Title: Chapter 20: Out of Bounds 25 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Perfect chapter, except for one thing you say "lead" and it is suppose to be a "leash" the two times at the bottom of this chapter.

Title: Chapter 20: Out of Bounds 25 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    Perfect chapter, except for one thing you say "lead" and it is suppose to be a "leash" the two times at the bottom of this chapter.

    Author's Response:

    In the States and in Canada it is a "leash" but in the UK I have always heard it referred to as a "lead".  If you do an internet search the terms seem interchangeable.  One of those instances where the Queen's English is not the same as the President's English :-)

     

     


Title: Chapter 21: Familiar 25 May 2011
Reviewer: LegolasAnimeLuver (Signed)
    NICE!!


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