Ravenclaw!
When he finds out that Lockhart’s specialty is memory charms, he feels sick, even though he’s not sure why.
Takes Place: 6th summer, 3rd summer
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Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Teacher Snape > Professor Snape
Membership status: Member
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Reviews by Sita Z
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Rape
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Apr 2012 / 03 Oct 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 7 - Completed: No - Updated: 02 Apr 2012 / 03 Oct 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 | 02 Apr 2012 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- ...wow.
You described Lockhart's sick little game very well, with the pornographic photographs and the scene enacting and finally the moment when he lost control.
A powerful chapter, and very well written.
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When Harry goes back to school the year after Sirius dies, the unlikeliest of people start noticing a change in him. Revelations, new friendships and more brushes with death.
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Snape-meets-Dursleys
Categories: Parental Snape > Guardian Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape
Rated: 16+
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Warnings: Abusive Dursleys, Rape, Violence
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Jun 2012 / 31 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
Chapters: 13 - Completed: No - Updated: 25 Jun 2012 / 31 Dec 2010
Series: None - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 12: Bad Choices | 11 Mar 2012 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- I'm so glad you updated; I really like this story.
I'd say Snape is in for an awful surprise when he visits the Dursleys...
Looking forward to more!
Petunia Dursley is cleaning the attic and finds a previously unknown copy of Lily’s will. Ecstatic at her discovery, she promptly abandons her burdensome nephew, along with Lily’s will, on the doorstep of her childhood nemesis (aka, Severus Snape). ***SEQUEL "Lily's Last Wish" NOW POSTED***
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: None
Tags: None
Categories: Healer Snape, Teacher Snape > Trusted Mentor Snape, Parental Snape > Guardian Snape
Rated: T
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2017 / 02 Jan 2011
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
Chapters: 23 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 19 Jul 2017 / 02 Jan 2011
Series: Lily's Boys - The Saga - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 | 03 Jan 2011 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- Love this so far! A very unique take on the "Snape as Harry's guardian" plotline. Sev is in for a surprise when he realizes that Harry is not the spoiled brat he takes him for...
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Twenty years after the War, Harry is a solid family man who's taken in one more. In helping this damaged little boy, he finds himself thinking about his old professor, quite a bit.
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Takes Place: 9 - Post Epilogue (middle aged Harry) - Snape flavour: None
Tags: Adoption, Child fic, Kidnapped
Categories: Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: T
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Warnings: Drug use, Neglect
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Feb 2011 / 30 Jan 2011
Series: Snape's Memories - Challenges: None
Chapters: 29 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 07 Feb 2011 / 30 Jan 2011
Series: Snape's Memories - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 | 30 Jan 2011 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- I really like where this is going. It's nice to see a story in which Dudley has changed (great touch making him a social worker), and I really like the character of "Tiny Tim" :); I'm curious why he took the photo album.
Looking forward to more soon!
Sita
| Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 | 30 Jan 2011 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- Oh, I think I have a theory about Tim... can't wait to see if I'm right!
Another very good chapter; I *like* how you write Dudley! It makes so much sense that he'd change his views on "freaks" after his parents declared him one.
Looking forward to more!
| Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 | 01 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- Another great chapter. I love the character of Mr. Clark; it's good to know that Tim had *some* adults in his life that he could trust. Nice touch with having him end up on the roof like Harry when he was young.
So, Tim likes lilies and hates snakes... very interesting :)!
As for Parseltongue, I agree that it shouldn't just disappear after Voldemort's death (the scar didn't, either!). It's actually a pretty useful skill to have, all prejudices aside.
| Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 | 01 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- Poor Tim! It's a good thing he has Harry, who can - sort of - understand what he went through.
I really like where you're going with this and the way you're including so many of the characters into the story, in a way that makes complete sense. Please update soon!
Sequel to Days We Learn From. Severus, Harry and Draco are starting to establish their new normal, when day to day life is changed drastically once more thanks to a slight mix up involving a few potion samples. All of this leaves Severus dealing with a new troublemaker, the one he used to be! De-aged to six years old, he's a handful and half to deal with, and his adopted sons, Harry and Draco, will never let him forget it!
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving
Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Snape, Deaging
Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Takes Place: 6th summer - Snape flavour: Snape is Loving
Tags: Child fic, Deaged!Snape, Deaging
Categories: Misc > All written in Snape's POV, Reverse Roles > Parental Harry
Rated: K+
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Warnings: None
Chapters: 14 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Mar 2011 / 02 Feb 2011
Series: Days We Learn From - Challenges: None
Chapters: 14 - Completed: Yes - Updated: 25 Mar 2011 / 02 Feb 2011
Series: Days We Learn From - Challenges: None
| Title: Chapter 14: Shatter the World | 25 Mar 2011 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- Oh no, the last chapter! Apart from it being the final one, though, I really loved it. Sirius has finally grown up, it seems - I'm glad, because it would have been really hard on Harry if his dad and his dogfather, er, godfather, didn't get along.
Thanks so much for writing and posting this, Whitetail! You're a great storyteller, and I enjoyed each and every chapter. I'm hoping to see more from you soon!
Thanks again,
Sita
Author's Response: Thanks for the review, and all the ones you contributed! I'm glad you were happy with Sirius growing up a little. Thanks for all the encouragement, and you will be seeing another story from me fairly soon. It will probably take a month at the longest to get the first chapter up, as I want to plan it out a bit first. I'm very excited about my idea, and have decided to retreat from my bad habit of planning as I write ... Anyways, thanks!
| Title: Chapter 13: This is Home | 22 Mar 2011 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- Love how you described Sev's transition from kid to adult, and his accompanying feelings and confusion. I'm glad he found another home after so many years.
I also like your Dumbledore; Dumbledore's often portrayed as cold and manipulating in fanfic, but personally I think there's so much more to his character. I love how your story shows this!
The last chapter - no! But I am looking forward to Sirius making an appearance :).
Post soon please!
Sita
Author's Response: I'm gald you liked Severus' confusion. I wanted to throw a little of that in there, as we missed out on what it was like to make that transition for the person being re-aged in DWLF, as it's from Sev's perspective. Thanks for the feedback on Dumbledore! I was sort of wondering how I did him as a character, so this makes me feel really cheery! Thanks for the review!
| Title: Chapter 2: Harry's Brother and the Great Cupboard Ambush | 05 Feb 2011 |
| Reviewer: Sita Z (Signed) |
- What a cliffhanger! You are evil!!
I was happy to see a sequel to DWLF, as I really enjoyed that story. Fred and George's "initiation" made me laugh, although I was thinking the same thing as Draco - they didn't lock *Harry* in a cupboard, did they? Because that would be just cruel... I'm glad they didn't; in canon, Fred and George's jokes can get borderline cruel, and I never liked that about them.
And I do hope we get the next chapter soon; I can't wait to see what Voldy is up to this time...
Looking forward to more!
Sita
Author's Response: How do I live with myself? Making writing such horrible cliffhangerst that is. I'm glad you liked the cuboard initiation, I was considereing not putting that in because I thougt people might not like it or something! I'm glad I did now. Thank you for the long review, I do love feedback!